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 Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 6:34 am
You should make your comics less about violence and approach other types of humour. Also, make sure you have correctly spelled words and use the right sort of grammar (i.e. not using "WTF", using "What the ********?" (if needed at all... sometimes it's funny to see the character say something like "What the pancakes?" or "What in the name of The Pope?" etc). It'll take a while, it does for all spriters, but eventually you'll get the hang of making grade-A comics. Good luck! smile
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Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2005 10:41 am
i agree with psyniac, i remember my first comic was about a misguided chao who wanted to take over the world...... thats totally off topic but anyways, i agree with psy
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Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2005 6:50 am
rosetiger i agree with psyniac, i remember my first comic was about a misguided chao who wanted to take over the world...... thats totally off topic but anyways, i agree with psy Hey, sounds like a decent enough idea to me... **turns away with notepad and pen** misguided chao...take over world...mehehehe...
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Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2005 7:28 am
Psyniac is right, every sprite comic artist must start out somewhere. I remember my first sprite comics were horrible. One was a two part anti-climatic battle between Epyon and the God Gundam. The other was a DBZ comic where Piccolo was dressed as a christmas tree and asks the author to kill him, which is exactly what happens. Then Majin Buu suddenly appears and Goten thinks it's santa. Buu's head is blown up in a festive manner and candy corn flies everywhere. They were nothing at all like the comics I make now. Except for that candy corn part, I still pull crap like that from time to time.
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 11:30 am
<.< >.>
**writes**
...Piccolo...Christmas Tree...Buu...Santa...Explodes...Candy Cane...Duo's a**...
**stops**
**scribbles out the last part** xp
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 2:15 pm
psyniac_123 <.< >.> **writes** ...Piccolo...Christmas Tree...Buu...Santa...Explodes...Candy Cane...Duo's a**... **stops** **scribbles out the last part** xp
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 11:09 am
psyniac_123 <.< >.> **writes** ...Piccolo...Christmas Tree...Buu...Santa...Explodes...Candy Cane...Duo's a**... **stops** **scribbles out the last part** xp >-> <-< i also made one where he had multiple girlfreinds who got kidnapped by a stupid car made of egg thing
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 11:06 am
got done with my second i think it is better then the others... 
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 6:37 am
xd Hahaha, liking it! lol
Very well thought out, and the graphics were simple yet you knew what was going on. Very funny, also, and also suitable for all, which is sometimes nice.
The only things I have to worry you about is:
* The snow balls are HEE-UGE! xd
* The guy at the Chilli Dog stand at the end... you could have used a sprite, so it worked better.
* The frames are pretty massive when there isn't much need for them to be. Smaller frames = small comics = small filesize = ^_^
Keep it up! Can't wait to see if you can surpass that! wink
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 3:57 pm
psyniac_123 xd Hahaha, liking it! lol Very well thought out, and the graphics were simple yet you knew what was going on. Very funny, also, and also suitable for all, which is sometimes nice. The only things I have to worry you about is: * The snow balls are HEE-UGE! xd * The guy at the Chilli Dog stand at the end... you could have used a sprite, so it worked better. * The frames are pretty massive when there isn't much need for them to be. Smaller frames = small comics = small filesize = ^_^ Keep it up! Can't wait to see if you can surpass that! wink WHOOT I DID IT!I MADE A NOT SO CRAPPY SPRITE COMIC rofl
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 10:27 pm
ya i know the dialog((sp?)) squares arent so good>.< sweatdrop 
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Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 1:27 am
haha! so true! just one point though (sorry if it was a joke that i didnt get) nephew is male, niece is female
these are getting better by the.... erm.... issue?
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Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 11:07 am
rosetiger haha! so true! just one point though (sorry if it was a joke that i didnt get) nephew is male, niece is female these are getting better by the.... erm.... issue? >.< oops...
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Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 1:47 pm
I have just started my new one featuring bane the hedgehog jame the fox and ethan the hedgehog((a idea actually givin to me by my friend, FOXX who has also been requested to be stupid.)) this time they will actually be shaded in and not flood filled.
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Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 2:30 pm
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