|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 6:22 am
((Alice))
She was high on the roof of the motel now...standing high over all of Amandilla, your hometown. The other houses gleam in the moonlight...how long had you been training for? The moon...it shone so bright...and next to it, hanging like debris in the sky...the destroyed pieces of Lonar...
That was her real home...
The red fragments spotted the sky with an unusual, bloody hue, like always. They stood out, just like the rest of the Lonarians, people like her....
Bob was probably looking for her, but she couldn't help marvel at the cityscape ahead...the beautiful, rebuilt town...wonder what it had been like before the Great Scar...?
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 7:12 pm
((Alice))
[New.]
She sighed...this night would have to be tainted by more learning, most likely. She could escape at any time...run away...dash across the rooftops, screaming wildly with supranormal power...
Or she could go back. Bob, as fat and gross as he was, definitely knew way more about her past, powers...and just about everything...than she did. It only seemed logical. He did get her this far, after all. But where exactly was he going in his training.
God, things were moving so fast. Couldn't she just take it slow for awhile...?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 10:58 am
((Her thoughts are in italics))
Alice sighed again. Why does this always happen to me? She thought angrily. If I go back... what will happen? I'll be chained forever to Bob. Learning, but captive in it. If I run.. What'll happen? I guess going back would be smarter, but then again, I've never really been that "smart". I'll go. Run. If Bob really cares, he probably doesn't he'd come look for me. Better get going then. She jumped onto th roof of the house next to her, then to the next one. a couple blocks away, she jumped to the ground and started walking farther away. Alice didn't know where she was going to go. She just wanted to leave.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 2:16 pm
((Alice))
[Okay, but try breaking them away from the rest of the paragraph, like I do. It makes for better formatting. I like the color, BTW. xp ]
The twilit village was laid out pretty simply. There was only one road, and it led nowhere. Really. It simply went to the end of town, then trailed off suddenly. Awesome.
There weren't many shops and the like; mainly homes...they all lined the street on either side, and were all relatively slummy.
There were two stores in this this ghost town...a food market (open 23/7. Weird.) on the right, and an NRA supply store on the left side...it made sense, at least. Being a completely rural town almost randomly slapped in the middle of an open pasture, Amandilla was almost always under siege by some stupid array of wildlife...
There was that bar that ran out of Jimmy West's home...that was the reason she passed out last night, though...maybe it wasn't the best idea to go waltzing back in right now...
Ugh...her head kind of hurt...what to do now....
----------------------------------
Meanwhile, Bob was stunned by the whole thing....but he knew his faithful student would return.
"What the...ah, damn, she said the wrong...*sigh* Ah, ******** it. If Alice really cares, she'll come looking for me..."
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 11:54 am
She grabbed her head.
Damn headache. Why do I always drink till I'm in a stupor? I really need to learn. Alice shook her head.
Walking farther away from the hotel, she noticed the food store.
Hmm. Should I go? Get food for the trip to another place? Where should I go anyway? Amandilla is pretty out of te way for merchants and travellers. I wonder how far away the main road is... I'll grab some food anyway.
Walking inside, she grabbed a small basket in order to carry all of the food. She saw a backpack and took it. Walking further into the store, she grabbed various objects from the shelves and put the in the basket.
Heh. I hope I got all of this money.... Why is it always so much?
She thought sctartching the back of her neck. ah.. well. Too late now. Hope Bob doesn't pop up out of no where. She pulled out her wallet and looked inside it.
{{Like that?}}
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 1:35 pm
((Alice))
[Yep. Like that. Only, you're making too many actions. This type of RP is hard to master...but basically, you don't really know if you can get into the food store, if there's food, how it's laid out, etc. The most you can do is try to go in. Then I post, then you do more stuff, then I post. I'm like the "effect" to your "cause". I'll let this go, totally, and any others will slide as well, but I only allow freedoms to people who have played for a while. You'll get there. Don't worry.]
Gll...it was empty. Suh-weet. So...how was she gonna pay for all this food then? Wait. ********. She was next in line. Better check to see what kind of items she'd bought...
How could she get out of this place without walking through the door?
[It set you up well, though. So at least your ideas are good, he he!]
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 4:02 pm
{{Ok.}}
Alice stepped backwards, so she could get out of her line.
She started looking around for a way to get the food out without notice.
{{Kinda like that?}}
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 6:32 pm
((Alice))
[Yeah, that's the core. When you feel more confident, you can fill that skeleton in a little bit.]
Yeah, there was no way she could physically walk out of the store. There were cameras and bystanders pretty much everywhere, and your eccentric looks definitely didn't help you hide out in the crowd...
Was there anything you had learned earlier to get you out of this?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 7:01 pm
She thought about that...
If I make a distraction, that might serve as a get away. Hmmm. What to burn.... I don't want to hurt anyone either..
She thought about it again as she looked around a for a place to burn.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 9:26 am
((Alice))
There was a pretty decent looking magazine stand in back of the store...
But would she get caught trying to burn the place down? It probably didn't matter all that much, but that was arsen, right?
It did look like it could burn quite well, though.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 9:31 am
Alice headed down to the back of the store and looked at the magazines.
She closed her eyes, facing the magazines.
Concentrating hard, she imagined them starting to smoke, then slowly getting a flame licking up the paper.
Slowly opening her eyes, she looked at what she had done.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 10:20 am
((Alice))
...Yeah...that worked. But it also called upon some unnecessary attention.
"MOMMY! MOMMY! THAT GIRL IS SETTING THE PLACE ON FIRE!!!"
It had, indeed, worked marvelously. Her powers were growing. She was becoming a true succubus, indeed. The store was in pandemonium now...but she felt no remorse. That is...until the police showed up.
Rather quick response, too. Unusual for pigs...
(+ 5 Black Morality)*
*Morality is a tab on your decision making, maintained solely by myself (for now). The more evil decisions you make, the more "evil" your powers will center. And vice versa. Black and white morality...it's your choice. Don't get me wrong. Both sides have their perks.*
They burst through the door, guns pointed at you. It all had happened so fast; the manager had obviously noticed the fire. The food suddenly seemed so unimportant...
Every civilian rushed out of the building. It was just you and three officers of the law...
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 12:31 pm
Oh ********. What am I supposed to do now?!? s**t. Stupid idea.
Alice smacked her forehead.
If I pretended to... No wouldn't work... What the Hell am I supposed to do now?!? I wish Bob was here. He'd hopefully get me out. Actually no. He'd just laugh his ********' a** off. s**t.
{{Don't know what else to do....... sweatdrop }}
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 8:06 am
[Read back to what Alice has learned in the past. What are the skills that Bob taught (or tried to teach) her?]
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 4:41 pm
((Could I say those words that he told me before? Would that work?))
Alice slowly backed up. Closing her eyes, she concentrarted really hard on what Bob had siad before.
Damn. Now what was that phrase...? Ssifis Coribalis? No...
Ssifris Carobris..?
No. That wasn't it either.... Right now I remember....
Ssifris Corabris
Keeping her eyes closed, she concentrated even harder.
"Ssifris Corabris."
((Is that what you mean?))
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
