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 Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 10:03 pm
just a word for those who read it, if you see a spot that could have been better, don't be afraid to say so, it's how I get better, by knowing my mistakes.
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 10:06 pm
~Xiloscent~ just a word for those who read it, if you see a spot that could have been better, don't be afraid to say so, it's how I get better, by knowing my mistakes. Well then I suggest you boost the year up to at least 2012 when the next generation of games should be announced/ coming out. But to be honest, the best year would probably be 2018 or 2024.
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 10:22 pm
yeah I was kinda think the year was low, but you never know, we just might have super soldiers by 2010. but yeah i'll be thinking of a new year.
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:34 pm
Sry it took so long but here it is:
-Updated year of happening
-Added new chapter
-Made a character sign up list
I strongly urge people to ask to be in mah story, I don't like putting people in that don't ok it first... except the draken being head of his division part, I couldn't think of anything else xp
Comment! scream
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:35 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:43 pm
You need to work on your writing style and grammer quite a bit, but it's an intriguing concept...I'd like to be in it. domokun
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:48 pm
GENOmule You need to work on your writing style and grammer quite a bit, but it's an intriguing concept...I'd like to be in it. domokun
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:52 pm
Seaphron GENOmule You need to work on your writing style and grammer quite a bit, but it's an intriguing concept...I'd like to be in it. domokun grammer was my weak point... I really need to get MS word reinstalled... just for reference, what country you in? i'm gonna split the character lists up by division.
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:53 pm
KAH NAH DAH (BRYTYSH KUL UMMM B A).
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:56 pm
DA YOU ESSAY. [CAWLEEPHONIYAH]
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:58 pm
GENOmule DA YOU ESSAY. [CAWLEEPHONIYAH] ... USA it is! (lol I know what you said.)
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:58 pm
~Xiloscent~ GENOmule DA YOU ESSAY. [CAWLEEPHONIYAH] ... USA it is! (lol I know what you said.) Look at mine.
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:00 pm
Hoo-ray, BEER! for AHNULD-SPEEK!! pirate
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:01 pm
Lifeless-Fox ~Xiloscent~ GENOmule DA YOU ESSAY. [CAWLEEPHONIYAH] ... USA it is! (lol I know what you said.) Look at mine. YOO AH NUT DOOING IT RYE! scream
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:01 pm
Lifeless-Fox ~Xiloscent~ GENOmule DA YOU ESSAY. [CAWLEEPHONIYAH] ... USA it is! (lol I know what you said.) Look at mine. nice... AHMARYKAA OAREGONE!!!
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