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squinty1989

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 9:28 am


talk about it in the life issues! 3nodding
PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 10:45 am


Ren Mezuki
yeah i cut ...i have alot of issuses i have to resolve...


Dude, cutting yourself doesn't do anything good. You just feelt your physical pain more than your emotional pain for a few seconds, then you feel the emotional pain again.

If you know you have things to resolve, why not resolve them?

(Yeah, I know this should be in life issues, but I couldn't help but resond to that.)


squinty1989

it has alot of meaning!
really great! 3nodding


I'm happy you liked my poem! I have more on AllPoetry.com/Aeoess and some on aeoess.deviantart.com

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 2:25 pm


i like poems..... there nice to write. i write them about love.... but i wrote one for my grand father cuz he died november 15, 2006. so here it is.

We think of you in silence
And often repeat your name
But all that is left to answer us
Is a picture in frame.
To your resting place we wander
With flowers we place with care
No one knows the silent heartache
As we turn and leave you there.
To some you are forgotten
To others part of the past
But to us who loved you dearly
Your memory will always last.
It broke our hearts to lose you
But you did not go alone
For part of us went with you
The day god took you home.
A million times we needed you
A million times we've cried
If love could have saved you
You never would have died.
God took your hand, we had to part
He gave you peace, but broke our hearts.
Your memory is our keepsake
With which we'll never part
God has you in his keeping
We have you in our hearts.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 11:36 pm


Aeoess

squinty1989

it has alot of meaning!
really great! 3nodding


I'm happy you liked my poem! I have more on AllPoetry.com/Aeoess and some on aeoess.deviantart.com


well i'll just keep on looking here! sweatdrop
if you would like.. you can copy them and paste them here... 3nodding
thanks

squinty1989


squinty1989

PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 11:43 pm


chippymunk
i like poems..... there nice to write. i write them about love.... but i wrote one for my grand father cuz he died november 15, 2006. so here it is.

We think of you in silence
And often repeat your name
But all that is left to answer us
Is a picture in frame.
To your resting place we wander
With flowers we place with care
No one knows the silent heartache
As we turn and leave you there.
To some you are forgotten
To others part of the past
But to us who loved you dearly
Your memory will always last.
It broke our hearts to lose you
But you did not go alone
For part of us went with you
The day god took you home.
A million times we needed you
A million times we've cried
If love could have saved you
You never would have died.
God took your hand, we had to part
He gave you peace, but broke our hearts.
Your memory is our keepsake
With which we'll never part
God has you in his keeping
We have you in our hearts.


this poem is really good..
i know you can do better! cool
PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 9:58 am


squinty1989
chippymunk
i like poems..... there nice to write. i write them about love.... but i wrote one for my grand father cuz he died november 15, 2006. so here it is.

We think of you in silence
And often repeat your name
But all that is left to answer us
Is a picture in frame.
To your resting place we wander
With flowers we place with care
No one knows the silent heartache
As we turn and leave you there.
To some you are forgotten
To others part of the past
But to us who loved you dearly
Your memory will always last.
It broke our hearts to lose you
But you did not go alone
For part of us went with you
The day god took you home.
A million times we needed you
A million times we've cried
If love could have saved you
You never would have died.
God took your hand, we had to part
He gave you peace, but broke our hearts.
Your memory is our keepsake
With which we'll never part
God has you in his keeping
We have you in our hearts.


this poem is really good..
i know you can do better! cool


well thanks.......

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squinty1989

PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 10:12 am


your welcome..
i'll put my other stupid writing now.. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 10:14 am


Topic: "Life Without You"
Written by: Squinty

One day i sat alone in my dark room thinking of you. Whenever you come to my mind i feel happy and complete.
I don't know what i can do without you..

As i was thinking of you
i imagined that you left this life..
At that time, i couldn't bare the thought of you dying!
I started crying and tried to see how life will be, what will happen to your parents, friends and me..
I came to one conclusion..
If you die i won't be able to live happily anymore.
You are everything to me!

I cried and thought of the future without you. I saw myself sad for the rest of my life, no one will be able to cheer me up.
I won't love anyone anymore..
You are the love of my life and i don't intend to change that!

What will happen to me if you just disappear one day?
I don't think i will be able to think clearly and will be confused for the rest of my life!

I just want to tell you what i want with the time i have now.. I love you sooooooo much!
I want you to be closer to me,
I want you to be with me,
I want you to know how i really feel about you!

I wish i can make you happy always. I never want to see you sad ever again because it hurts me more then it hurts you..
I love you and miss you..
I'll do whatever it takes to be with you because life without you is nothing..

YOU ARE EVERYTHING TO ME!

squinty1989


deadspace39

PostPosted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 2:56 pm


Uhh...can we put it if there're more than one chapter? For writings
PostPosted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 6:57 am


jenko59
Uhh...can we put it if there're more than one chapter? For writings

yes you can!
but it has to be a writing or a poem please cool

squinty1989


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PostPosted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 9:36 pm


This poem will offend at least one person, if not many. I wrote this in a view of how I see the mind of a priest, or of any power hungry religious man/woman. It's written in a style similar to how the Dead Kennedys wrote their songs; written as though I'm for the thing I am against to point out the stupidity of it all.

Mind of The Priest

Let's all pretend
That I am a holy man
And that I know how to save your soul

Let's all deny
That I am a human
And that I'm just as flawed as everybody else

I make my beliefs correct
While it's a sin to be "erect"
And I tell you to close your mind

My God is better than yous
And you don't know any better
I will use my time to preach
Ways to make your ideas conform
I will teach

Let's all pretend that conformity will save ours souls
So that God might believes us too

Let's all pretend that conformity will save ours souls
So that God might believes us too
PostPosted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 11:34 pm


umm.. no offence.. it's meaning is good but i didn't like it! sweatdrop

squinty1989


The_PrincessCat

PostPosted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 11:39 pm


i do both ....... i write really long stories so i might not post them but i may just post some peoms
PostPosted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 11:56 pm


post whatever you want!
we are not MAKING you post anything.. sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 12:16 am


squinty1989
umm.. no offence.. it's meaning is good but i didn't like it! sweatdrop


That's alright, I usually write in two different styles, but everything I write is meant to be a song. Don't worry, you have the right to have an opinion, whether or not it's one that I'll like. (However I don't think everyone agrees with me there rofl (Proof of that is on that "HINDER" post...))

Here's another one:

Homecoming


I may not be easy to understand
I am foreign to this land
Whose home was originally with the "big man"
I know it's hard to understand

I once had a great family
All of them loved me
I love and miss them too
This is a hard life to go through
People assume I am merely a fool
I love everybody in my life
I cross my heart
And hope we'll die
So you can all be apart
Of my eternal family

My biggest dream is to see
Everybody in my life
Living at my home
As my eternal family
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