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 Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 7:35 pm
KirbyVictorious good metaphor. And I agree. But tons of people get away with it every day *sigh* I hate it when you read a book and th author sucks! And to think, my book might have been rejected, too. *sigh* wait why would you read a book when the author sucks...unless you were * GASP * forced to!?!?!? BAH * cold memories of mark twain..[not that hes a bad author, i just Despised Huckleberry Finn. ]*
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Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 8:01 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 2:50 pm
Less with the details, more with the gore.
(I humbly apologize for the semi-unintentional rhyme)
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 4:45 pm
WormHole Less with the details, more with the gore. (I humbly apologize for the semi-unintentional rhyme) I thought you said genre for a second *A tidal wave of blood hits your computer!* sheesh
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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 5:30 pm
Sorry NovaKing and Kirby. I lost my notebook with my story in it and my story will be postponed until I find the stupid thing.
And don't mind WormHole, I know him in real life and he's kind of a git but most of the time he's fine.
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Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2007 5:45 pm
Biological_Warfare Sorry NovaKing and Kirby. I lost my notebook with my story in it and my story will be postponed until I find the stupid thing. And don't mind WormHole, I know him in real life and he's kind of a git but most of the time he's fine. I request that you retract that statement, scoundrel. My honor must be avenged. Right after cookies. Cookies first, then vengence.
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 11:02 am
More has been added blaugh I edited the other post so you'll have to look over there. I seperated the original one and the new one with this. ---------------------
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 12:55 pm
I think you could just take out the first sentence. Its really not needed. With the details, people can surmise that Spring is just around the corner.
Good story so far.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 1:33 pm
Minyaagar I think you could just take out the first sentence. Its really not needed. With the details, people can surmise that Spring is just around the corner. Good story so far. He's long gone. Sorry.
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Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 2:16 pm
I'mmmmmmmmm baaaaaaaaack!!!!!! but I haven't written any more of the story.
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