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Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 3:24 pm
I am a : Gamma I write : fanfiction for Final Fantasy VII Other : Currently I am working on a long story (51 pages so far and only half done.) involving Aeris and Sephiroth in a romantic relationship. I wanted to show a different side of Aeris and Sephiroth kind of came along for the ride. Mostly I'm afraid of letting either character get too far OOC. The story is being written out of order because I started with the ending and I am now working around in circles. If you're interested in being my Beta, let me know.
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 8:26 pm
I am a : Gamma I write/read : originals of any genre and fanfictions of Inuyasha/Invader Zim/Naruto Other : I hope to write some Harry Potter in the future, though for now I'm going to stick to working on my randomness story and my multiple fanfictions. I need an expereinced (I hope I spelled that right) beta, for mine knows nothing of any of the things that I write. I didn't know about this place, and she's really messing up my writing, since I keep getting the characters personalities wrong. I hope someone can help, for I really enjoy writing and seeing what other people have to say about it, and getting advice on my works so I can improve my writing skills!
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 1:11 pm
I am a : Gamma I write/read : Fanfiction for Inuyasha, Naruto, CHobits,and soon Bleach. Other : I am looking for a beta for a few storys. Please be warned they are angsty as hell and violent Just warning you all. I lost my other beta and now need a new one. Stupid parents banning her from anime! If you wish to see some of my work PM me and I will send you the first chapter of one of my storys.
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 12:46 pm
I am a : Gamma (for now. ^^) I write/read : original fantasy at the moment, but really whatever type of story decides to pop into my mind. My Fanfics I don't really care about getting betaed, as my writing skills aren't THAT bad. XD Other : I've had about six or seven chapters of my story posted up in Gaia, and I've been getting reviews, but they're not focusing on what I really need. A few are helpful with my grammar outpoints, but I've been getting a lotta 'OMG, you're a fabulous writer!', which is cool and all (don't think I dislike praise, because I don't. ^^") but it's not what I need help with.
Basically, I have trouble describing certain things, particularly architecture and clothing. Landscapes and people are ok, it's mostly those two things. And sometimes I need a little jab in the side to just make me see what the hell it is I'm doing with my grammar, because there are certain mistakes I just don't seem to catch.
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 7:14 pm
I am a : Gamma/May consider becoming a beta if I find myself enjoying someone's story. I write/read : original fantasy/sci-fi, always with a pinch of comedy and a cup of romance. Other : I'm mostly looking for someone who can read my work and act as a second filter, catching what I don't since I do try to make sure to weed out the worst grammatical and spellign errors. I also need help in making sure my story makes sense, since occaisionally I read through it so many time it starts to run together with what I haven't written, and after a while, it just goes all to hell. I'd like someone who knows good literature and isn't afraid to point out when a word might not be the perfect choice, or if a phrase or dialogue seems awkward or forced. I need someone who has a feel for what's right and what's not. Also, it'd probably help if he's got an open mind. An extremely open mind. As in, tentacles, hermaphroditic catboy-looking aliens, lots of sex and babies between the two and humans, and graphic deaths; my current main character is dealing with the fact she enjoys killing folks, but thinks it's wrong to do so. I probably won't post sexually explicit stuff on Gaia, but I just might write it, and it's part of the story, too. No one has ever called me normal, ever, and I'd be insulted if they did.
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 6:00 pm
I am a : Gamma I write/read : original fantasy Other : Now, this story is fairly mature. It may be fantasy but it's violent, has a little bit of language and will have one...maybe two sex scenes in it. (these are NOT descriptive, rather they allude to the sex which happens between characters)
I need someone/some people to look at it as I post to make sure I've got my spelling proper as well as grammar in check and...okay...basically, I need help with everything keeping my story the way it should be.
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 2:47 am
I am a : Gamma I write/read :fanfiction for Death Note and Forgotten Realms Other : I'm currently working on a Forgotten Realms fanfic but I have a beta-reader for that. I found out that my tense is quite confusing but still bearable. Other than that, it's 90% ok. Currently, I need someone to beta-read my Death Note one-shot about L. My profile on Fanfiction.net
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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 10:01 am
I am a : Gamma I write/read : original fantasy or fanfiction for Harry Potter...mainly the ship of Draco/Hermione Other : I am open to any criticism whatsoever and in fact encourge it. In fact say as many bad (honest) things as you can say. Also you should probably know my grammar and spelling ain't that good so you should watch out for that. And my tenses change often...
I have an original story in great need of a beta. It is just one chapter so far and there is about...1000 words. Also it is about Vampires/Witches/Vampire Hunters... I'd really like some major input.
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 7:10 am
I am a : Gamma I write/read : original fantasy. Actually, I'm not even sure that it can be considered fantasy. Uhm, it's a lot like fantasy, maybe urban fantasy? Ugh, not sure. Other : I really need some constructive criticism and whenever I seem to ask for it, I get replies like, "Good job!" It's annoying. I need someone to tell me truthfully, what needs to be changed.
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2007 9:56 am
I am a : Gamma for this. ^^ I'm writing: An Invader Zim fan-comic thing Other : Since it's graphic novel type of thing, I don't need help with the spelling and grammar so much as with making the plot have a semblance of coherency and suspense. ^^; Oh, and it will contain at least one f/f pairing, should probably warn for that. So, any takers?
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Posted: Fri May 04, 2007 7:19 pm
I am a : Gamma (can't beta myself) I'm writing: Sci-Fi (Cyberpunk, Hard SF and Soft SF), Horror, Fantasy, poems (not angsty.) Other : I need help with coherency and consistancy (specifically with tenses). I'd also like help with dialogue, because I seem to have difficulties with it. At least one of my stories involves descriptions of gore/violence- I thought it might be good to put that up front. I'd also appreciate constructive criticism.
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 6:44 am
I am a : Gamma I write/read : original stories occasionally ; I try to do a range of genre but I steer clear of romance. fanfiction for Dungeon Keeper, Hellsing, Fruitsbaskets,(manga version only) and I may try my hand at Pet shop of horrors. Other :While I do take a while to write; I tend to send segments of a thousand words or more. I also have the habit of rewriting and improving on previous chapters. If you want to have a look at some of my work before you decide some samples are in my journal
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Posted: Fri May 25, 2007 5:48 am
I am a : Gamma I write : Original (Horror/vampires). Fanfiction (Kingdom Hearts). Other : I can't seem to Beta myself ...
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Posted: Fri May 25, 2007 11:07 pm
I am a : Gamma I write/read : original (Adventure) or fanfiction for (Harry Potter) Other : Let's see, I've been writing for about four years - since I was ten-years-old. I have written, since then, about three novels, one fanfiction, thirty or so poems, and about fifteen short stories. Frankly, I have looked back at my first novel - which sucked and was very cliched - and am proud to say that I have gotten better since then, though I still need help. Would someone be willing?
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