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is this good?
  YESYESYESYESYESYEEEEEESSSSSS!!!
  Too discriptive...it was gross...
  Not descriptive enough...*drools*
  too cute...not hot enough
  too hot...not cute enough
  no, I HATE IT!
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Caomhnoir Angel

Wintry Dragon

PostPosted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 7:10 pm


good fic! pm me the rest.... g'luck finishing.
i have a bad habit of starting and getting like 30-40 pages done
and then never finish the fic.... crying
i'm an idiot. xd
PostPosted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 9:16 pm


Well, judging by latest poll results, you guys want more of the yaoi stuff sooooo, if it gets bad I'll just have to PM people the rest of it. Sorry it took me so long but here it is finnally!


It was finally Saturday. The day both Sasuke and Naruto had been waiting for. It was as if time took ten times as long as usual for the past couple of days. Sasuke walked out his door and began heading over to the park bench. He'd never show it, but hee was nervous.

Naruto was much the same. He stopped to get a water on the way. It was still really cold out. In fact Naruto was kind of suprised that the water didn't freeze in the bottle! He was almost at the appointed spot. So was Sasuke. As they both looked forward, they saw each other. They were both so nervous, they each almost jumped out of their skins!

"Oh, umm hey..." Sasuke said.

"Hi there...Umm, I'm sorry I had to leave last time...Urgent buisiness..." Naruto said. Yeah......If you count masturbation as 'urgent buisiness'... Truth be told, he was too scared to go so far so fast...Cna you blame him?

"No, it's allright...But I won't let you get away this time!" Sasuke said, uncharachterisically happy. 'Woah,' He thought to himself. 'What has this kid done to me?!'

"Don't worry, I won't run." Naruto said. Now with all the small talk out of the way, they went on with their date...

The carnival was in town! Sasuke won Naruto a little stuffed fox. Naruto walked around with Sasuke for a while until....

''FERRIS WHEEL!!!" Naruto yelled.

"Woah!" Sasuke said as he allowed himself to be dragged off by the blonde. His immaturity and childishness, though annoying at times, was somehow alluring to Sasuke.

"Yay!" Naruto said as they got into cart three. They went up and up higher and Higher until they reached the top. Sasuke put his arm around Naruto and Naruto just looked up at Sasuke with those beautiful icy blue eyes of his before closing them in a smile. It was the perfect evening!

But it got better....

"S-sasuke..." Naruto muttered. They were back at the Uchiha estate. In Sasuke's room to be specific...Naruto had dozed off on the way home so Sasuke carried him. As Naruto looked up he gazed around the room. It was dark except for the many candles scattered intimately about the room. they made the room homey, romantic....

Seductive....

"Hey there sleepy." Sasuke said, "You dozed off on the walk home so I carried you.

"Oh yeah!" Naruto said as he remembered the last few moments he could before he got drowsy. Hey, the poor boy was up all night with anticipation! Anyway, He recalled being on top of the ferris wheel with Sasuke...Ah, the perfect moment. He gazed into those dark eyes that seemed to peer into his very soul...He pushed Sasuke's hair aside and looked upon the face of his lover.

Uchiha Sasuke.

He was so overcome with love and such emotions at that very moment. Then it happened. He saw Sasuke begin to close his eyes and lean his head in. Naruto followed suit. They shared a kiss. That was all Naruto really remembered. I mean Yeah they got off the ferris wheel and began walking home but that was all not much to tell.

Anyway, now that he was regaining conciousness, he was more aware of his surroundings. He was in Uchiha Sasuke's bedroom again. However this time it was different. You see, that night they had bonded. I can't really explain it. It's just love you know? And he felt way more comfortable in Sasuke's bedroom this time. Almost as if it were natural. Not that he was a man-slut or anything, he just felt a special bond between the two of them and Sasuke felt it too.

The two boys gazed at each other intently as if asking one another if the other was ready to move on. But it was a question unanswered. It was natural, everything that followed. Naruto made the first move this time kissing Sasuke first on the lips then the neck, as Sasuke removed his own shirt, Naruto began kissing and licking his whole torso. Sasuke moaned out quietly as he removed Naruto's jacket and shirt. He ran his hands all over the blonde boy's body freely...Shamelessly.

Ahhhh...S-Sasuke..." Naruto moaned. Sasuke smirked a bit at him and continued. His hands on Naruto's abs, then lower unzipping his pants and slowly removing his boxers....I'll finish this up soon but you'll have to PM me if you want to know what happens next! I don't want to get in trouble again.... sweatdrop BUT PLEASE DON'T PM ME UNTIL I POST THAT THE STORY IS FINISHED. I WILL DO DO HERE WHEN I AM DONE! Thank you.

Sexually_Lover


TURKEYHAMMER

PostPosted: Fri Nov 24, 2006 5:02 pm


mcrnatalie
Teh Happy Turkey Jr pretty much said what I was going to say....pm me when you get more parts out plz!

Please, call me T.J.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 24, 2006 5:13 pm


*reads T.J's sig* Wow, I din't know you liked Zelda too...AND I AM GOING,....DON'T YELL AT ME CUZ IT LOOKS LIKE I'M NOT WRITING...I AM! It's right in this window here...*cliks and pulls up window* SEE?? rolleyes

Sexually_Lover


TURKEYHAMMER

PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 9:30 am


Hopelessly_Obsessed
*reads T.J's sig* Wow, I din't know you liked Zelda too...AND I AM GOING,....DON'T YELL AT ME CUZ IT LOOKS LIKE I'M NOT WRITING...I AM! It's right in this window here...*cliks and pulls up window* SEE?? rolleyes
XD
Allright, allright, calm down.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 3:16 pm


I heart 'd IT!!! plz send me the rest! 4laugh

ninja

JessicaaBabe


Taffeara

PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 4:41 pm


mmm it's a little too OOC for my taste, but I like your writting style ^__^ *sheepish smile* tis great 3nodding
PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 7:31 am


[~Heart~Of~Darkness~]
This is, like, GREAT!! Put it on Fan Fiction, then continue it! Don't forget to send Darkness a link!


Ooh! I need a link too! I thought this was amazing, and I MUST know what happens next!!!

ACricketToFillTheSilence


street lamps

PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 1:29 pm


Obsessed, I luffed it! <3 Please write as fast as you can! I'm cheering for j00!
PostPosted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 5:02 pm


those were some honestly awesome chapters cool Hope u write the next part soon! blaugh

hells hound


sex with knives

PostPosted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:15 pm


Teh Happy Turkey Jr
OMG, I gt horny off tha because I could intensely imagine it in my head with all the details.
Please, continue A.S.A.P.
same 0.0 please do continue
PostPosted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:18 pm


Hopelessly_Obsessed
Well, judging by latest poll results, you guys want more of the yaoi stuff sooooo, if it gets bad I'll just have to PM people the rest of it. Sorry it took me so long but here it is finnally!
please do eek

sex with knives


Skanth

PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 3:32 pm


To say I loved it would be wrong...for it would be an understatement beyond all belief!!! I absolutely adored it, and if it werew ice cream, it wouldnt' have made it for five seconds around me!!! I loved it that much!!!
PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:24 pm


It's really good. Please continue!!

Himiwari


-0Raito-kun0-

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 9:54 am


Oh My gawd, it was great Please continiue this Fanfiction

Good work wink
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