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 Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 12:17 pm
Makairo Raskit I'll comment. They were both too long, more like poems or monologues that raps. Losing their flows frequently, not properly read over, no devices, hardly any wordplay, Mak's had more disses, but they weren't exactly the greatest in strength. A poncey rivalry. Why the ******** did you diss me in your rap? Another thing I ain't voting on, you just dickrid me, dissed me, ******** you man. I didn't insult you. I said faggots at your level. I never called you one, and I was VERY specific in doing so, I figured you'd get upset if I did insult you. So read that line back before you make me give you 50 bars. xd j/k You used me as an example of a s**t mc! STILL ******** YOU MAN! I can't be bothered anymore. You can't have an alliance with you, cos you even take the piss out of people who like you.
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 12:41 pm
Raskit I'll comment. They were both too long, more like poems or monologues that raps. Losing their flows frequently, not properly read over, no devices, hardly any wordplay, Mak's had more disses, but they weren't exactly the greatest in strength. A poncey rivalry. A message for Mak: Why did you diss me in your rap? Another thing I ain't voting on, you just dickrid me, dissed me, I've won most of my battles against higher opponents - yet you still managed to use me as an example of a s**t mc. ******** you man.That means you never heard Ether or Takeover or any actual diss rap have you? Ether at least 24 to 30 bars... Takeover 24 bars... come on... Too long? I told you why I didn't use my usual smoke and mirrors tactics this time in my rhyme so I shouldn't explain myself further
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 12:44 pm
C Teezy Raskit I'll comment. They were both too long, more like poems or monologues that raps. Losing their flows frequently, not properly read over, no devices, hardly any wordplay, Mak's had more disses, but they weren't exactly the greatest in strength. A poncey rivalry. A message for Mak: Why did you diss me in your rap? Another thing I ain't voting on, you just dickrid me, dissed me, I've won most of my battles against higher opponents - yet you still managed to use me as an example of a s**t mc. ******** you man.That means you never heard Ether or Takeover or any actual diss rap have you? Ether at least 24 to 30 bars... Takeover 24 bars... come on... Too long? I told you why I didn't use my usual smoke and mirrors tactics this time in my rhyme so I shouldn't explain myself further I 24 to 30 is just too long. It's alright if a few are going to read it, but if you're gonna battle in the mainstream, trying to make hits, I'm just not feeling it. For a battle such as this... 16 bars. 20 bars absolute maximum. I think you should of edited it to get the best out of it. Maybe you should of audio'd it?
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 12:46 pm
Raskit C Teezy Raskit I'll comment. They were both too long, more like poems or monologues that raps. Losing their flows frequently, not properly read over, no devices, hardly any wordplay, Mak's had more disses, but they weren't exactly the greatest in strength. A poncey rivalry. A message for Mak: Why did you diss me in your rap? Another thing I ain't voting on, you just dickrid me, dissed me, I've won most of my battles against higher opponents - yet you still managed to use me as an example of a s**t mc. ******** you man.That means you never heard Ether or Takeover or any actual diss rap have you? Ether at least 24 to 30 bars... Takeover 24 bars... come on... Too long? I told you why I didn't use my usual smoke and mirrors tactics this time in my rhyme so I shouldn't explain myself further I 24 to 30 is just too long. It's alright if a few are going to read it, but if you're gonna battle in the mainstream, trying to make hits, I'm just not feeling it. For a battle such as this... 16 bars. 20 bars absolute maximum. I think you should of edited it to get the best out of it. Maybe you should of audio'd it? Audios? in a dorm room? Nah!
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 12:49 pm
Raskit I think you should of edited it to get the best out of it. Edit a free/keystyle? confused
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 12:49 pm
C Teezy Raskit C Teezy Raskit I'll comment. They were both too long, more like poems or monologues that raps. Losing their flows frequently, not properly read over, no devices, hardly any wordplay, Mak's had more disses, but they weren't exactly the greatest in strength. A poncey rivalry. A message for Mak: Why did you diss me in your rap? Another thing I ain't voting on, you just dickrid me, dissed me, I've won most of my battles against higher opponents - yet you still managed to use me as an example of a s**t mc. ******** you man.That means you never heard Ether or Takeover or any actual diss rap have you? Ether at least 24 to 30 bars... Takeover 24 bars... come on... Too long? I told you why I didn't use my usual smoke and mirrors tactics this time in my rhyme so I shouldn't explain myself further I 24 to 30 is just too long. It's alright if a few are going to read it, but if you're gonna battle in the mainstream, trying to make hits, I'm just not feeling it. For a battle such as this... 16 bars. 20 bars absolute maximum. I think you should of edited it to get the best out of it. Maybe you should of audio'd it? Audios? in a dorm room? Nah! Alright. I get the picture.
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 12:50 pm
C Teezy Raskit I think you should of edited it to get the best out of it. Edit a free/keystyle? confused Take out the s**t bits.
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 12:56 pm
LG is loaded with battles...but lacks votes. Thus a dilemma is created.
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 12:59 pm
Raskit C Teezy Raskit I think you should of edited it to get the best out of it. Edit a free/keystyle? confused Take out the s**t bits. you're not getting the point... If I'm gonna improve I gotta practice coming with stuff out of the top of my head more... If I go back and edit raps then it just won't be the same... All those times I get those super long multies it's not me editing it wo be like that it basically comes from the top of the head man...
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 1:37 pm
C Teezy Raskit C Teezy Raskit I think you should of edited it to get the best out of it. Edit a free/keystyle? confused Take out the s**t bits. you're not getting the point... If I'm gonna improve I gotta practice coming with stuff out of the top of my head more... If I go back and edit raps then it just won't be the same... All those times I get those super long multies it's not me editing it wo be like that it basically comes from the top of the head man... So you're telling me you've never just finished writing a rhyme, looked it over and thought "na that doesn't work" and either took it out or put something in it's place?
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 2:01 pm
Both very long a** verses...I got bored like 3/4 the way. But C teezy had me...just a lil better.
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 5:37 pm
Raskit C Teezy Raskit C Teezy Raskit I think you should of edited it to get the best out of it. Edit a free/keystyle? confused Take out the s**t bits. you're not getting the point... If I'm gonna improve I gotta practice coming with stuff out of the top of my head more... If I go back and edit raps then it just won't be the same... All those times I get those super long multies it's not me editing it wo be like that it basically comes from the top of the head man... So you're telling me you've never just finished writing a rhyme, looked it over and thought "na that doesn't work" and either took it out or put something in it's place? not on gaia... maybe if i'm writing something for a local album.. but a keystyle... Never!
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 5:38 pm
Wasa_Dee Both very long a** verses...I got bored like 3/4 the way. But C teezy had me...just a lil better. 1-0 my way i think
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 5:39 pm
C Teezy Wasa_Dee Both very long a** verses...I got bored like 3/4 the way. But C teezy had me...just a lil better. 1-0 my way i think Doesn't count..how can you vote without reading both verses? neutral
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 5:42 pm
Makairo C Teezy Wasa_Dee Both very long a** verses...I got bored like 3/4 the way. But C teezy had me...just a lil better. 1-0 my way i think Doesn't count..how can you vote without reading both verses? neutral that's why I said i wasn't really sure.. if you don't wanna count it, it's fine with me..
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