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Wow, this is awesome! Perhaps I shall have to take you up on some art or perhaps a critique once I get my quest thread revamped ninja I just want to get everything set first before I open myself to serious critiquing.

Hrm, may as well...

CRITIQUE ME

Name: Kokonotsu
Character name: Obst Volgan
Quest Thread Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=4292533#70825902
Any notes before I review?Um... I still need to do some work on the "side notes" and "Species info" sections, and I still need to figure a way for my guy to get to the island. Yeah, I have vague ideas, but nothing really solid enough to put down yet. Any help with that would be loved. May also change his name from Obst to Noah...it seems a little more realistic. I figure even though it's still in it's 'baby stages', I may as well get some feedback on what I do have so I can fix my errors and issues early on before I get too carried away... ^^
Method of delivery: I guess put it in the thread. PMs ARE easier to make sure I respond to them and get feedback bouncing back and forth, but my thread feels sort of empty, so you can deliver it to the quest thread ^^

think I have fixed it up but I still want another critique to be sure

CRITIQUE ME

Name: [ X_Bleeding Roses_X ]
Character name: Bianca Forest
Quest Thread Link: CLICK
Any notes before I review? I fixed up the persnality alot but I was quiet suprised by the complaint because her personality was based off mine *Note to self: Contimplate my reality*
I hear you on the protectivness so i added 'unpredicted' before storm.
The gimicness of albinism was hard to fix because I really didn't know it was and can't figure it out.
Uh reply asap?
Method of delivery In quest thread again please ^^

CRITIQUE ME

Name: Dark_Musashi
Character name: Carmen Villaradio
Quest Thread Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=2689551#56465679
Any notes before I review? The personality section is simple, because I'm waiting for character development to give her more depth. i'm mostly waiting for critics on the biography, which might contain a lot of flaws that I can't see myself.
Method of delivery: Thread, please 3nodding

CRITIQUE ME

Name: LaRoche
Character name: Lance Roy Smith
Quest Thread Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=4907527
Any notes before I review? No, I don't believe so. I'd like you to focus more on Lance's info rather than the rest of the thread, though.
Method of delivery[:/b] Thread, please.

CRITIQUE ME

Name: Ioyla
Character name: Andrea Doyle
Quest Thread Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=2567117
Any notes before I review? Nope. Everything is pretty much done.
Method of delivery: Er...PM it, I guess. To this account.