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 Posted: Thu May 19, 2005 8:03 pm
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 5:37 pm
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2005 10:49 am
Thanx u guys! (I'm kagomegirl13, but I had 2 make a new avi. Seriously)
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 1:44 pm
yay i liked it!
oo! oo! now look at mine! i posted it as an individual thread in this guild too! You dont hafta actually cuz its extremely long!
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Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 12:30 pm
hanako rose yay i liked it! oo! oo! now look at mine! i posted it as an individual thread in this guild too! You dont hafta actually cuz its extremely long! I'll read it
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Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2005 9:49 pm
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Mon Sadden Angle Guardian
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 3:47 pm
ZOMG!!!!1 YOU NEED TO FINISH IT!!!!11 I WILL DIE IF YOU DON"T FINISH IT.... biggrin yes, it's that good.
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 8:06 pm
i swear i have read this before...have you posted this story here in this guild a while back?? I know i have read something like this before...either way it's good...
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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 9:38 am
i like where it is going but keep going what happens next what happens next?
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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 6:14 pm
where's the fanfic thread?
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Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 5:24 pm
I hate to be the only one to give constructive critisism . . . but this plot is so over used. sweatdrop no offense or anything. It's just that there are so many "kagome turns out to be a half demon/demon/godess/something else special!) out there.
As for the actual writing, try putting a bit more description. 3nodding
Happy writing!
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Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 11:19 am
its pretty good
3nodding 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding cheese_whine
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