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if Abyss hates change why does she have a power that makes her look as though she is changing. It certianly sounds interesting but seems odd.

I really like your concept overall

The only worry i have is that many many of the concepts and several of the feedee are already maniptulative or mischevious or sly or sneaky in some way or outwardly nice but with hidden dark issues . While it makes perfect sense with your concept it's becoming rather commonplace and less oroingal with each new person who tries it. there are slo a few concepts trying not to become the dark things they were i the past stillbest of luck cass

She hates change when it affects her own situation. Her apparent shapeshifting isn't so much of a change, more of a trick of the light, and is so much of a constant in her life-style that she isn't really affected by it.

Darcy, you've got a point to the godmodding but I am so rabidly against it that I've already thought that out. First and foremost if I intend to actually have him use his powers I'd contact the one I'm RPing with and ask permission.

Also, since the others will know it's power, they can freely chose when a casual phrase of his may carry some 'magical' weight and will cause them to act on it. It's just a nice opportunity for roleplay. Say he mentions something about taking a cookie before lunch, the RPer can chose if their FeeDee will be influenced or not.

Thank you BOTH for bringing up these topics, sometimes I can clarify things better if I can have the specific thing to concentrait on.

Well I wouldn't know if anything is similar I refused to read any other concept contest entries in my attempt to be able to just come up with what I wanted without having to go "OH GOD BUT IT'S JUST LIKE HER'S D: "

In this world, though, I don't think there are many fresh, new, original ideas anymore. Someone somewhere has already done it before you.

Good luck to us both, though! And thank you.

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To comment on my concept being dark/having them trying to not become what they once were... well. Everyone writes differently, and I have my own plans roughly thought out should I be able to continue with these two.