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 Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 12:41 am
I would enjoy it if people would post their thoughts/comments smile thank you!
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 7:42 am
Ooh... >.<;; The concept is cool and all, but... Maybe you should change I's name... o_o;; *quotes* Quote: - Daemons get their names from a word in the excerpt. It is usually an interesting word that, when used in RP, won't disrupt writing fluency.. for example, you wouldn't call the poor daemon And. "Alice and And ran away from the monster under their bed." See what I mean? It's much better, say, like this: "Alice and Revival ran away from the monster under their bed." That's what Quietsnooze said. >_<
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 3:32 pm
^_~ But I isn't the Daemon, though she is the quieter of the two. I could have always left her unnamed, would that work better?
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 4:10 pm
*has thought over the name thing* Right, the reason she doesn't have a real name is part of the concept. She has no identity that is her own. A name is something you use to identify yourself with, so if I have her a real name, the point would be lost. Thus I am deciding to continue to call her I.
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 4:18 pm
Well, that's true and very cool and all, but... *thinks* I dunno.
"I walked into the cafe. A woman came and I asked her..."
It'd look a lot like a first-person narrative, if you ask me xd ... Hey, maybe if you added something to the name to make it clearer? surprised Like... . That might help. 4laugh heart
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 4:26 pm
Sure! 4laugh sounds awesome >.>
*experiments*
:I: "I" !I! ~I~ -I-
I think I like "I" *goes to edit description so that all I's are "I"'s.*
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 4:32 pm
Also you are right o.O it would look like first person xd
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 4:47 pm
Yuh! I think it'll be safer now. I mean, for your entry. 4laugh Glad to have helped. <3
I got the <> brackets idea from Cherryh, who give stuff like <-> and as names to her characters... It seems fun to have nameless, text-only characters like that, too. surprised But for RP purposes I guess pronounciable names are best. xd
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:20 pm
*nods* thanks for the feed back *pokes others to do simular*
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:39 pm
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:43 pm
Hmm, what you've got so far is interesting, but it could use some fleshing out. 3nodding heart
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:44 pm
Anysuggestions as to how?
edit: like what would you suggest I detail ect.
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:49 pm
Oh, elaboration of the more relevent parts--personality and the like--is always good. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:57 pm
oh sweatdrop I always have problems with personality. I believe that personality is found, and its easier to express in RP. I think I need a prompt, and I'll do a prompt response to each, whatcha think?
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:05 am
>< I need help/feedback! heart domokun heart
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