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Haze: ::slaps Huni upside the head:: scream There shall be no talk of Elias giving his heart away to some silly dancer! I forbid it!
Elias: O_o I don't dance...

[Coming right along! whee A few typos in your first few posts, just FYI!

Feedback: Is her ability to get others dancing magical, or charisma based? Also, The guardian and the forgotten have similar names (both start with Ch) and similar style (pretty prom style dresses!)...a little hard to keep them straight!

Also, what role does her Daemon play in her dancing/playing? Does he just watch, or are they partners...?]

[Seraphine is pretty. eek Would give her the same beginning initial as her Daemon, and tie them together in an artsy way XD Chantel is pretty too, though <3]

Just my opinion, both were good! <3

Also, I think developing the relationship between Charu and Sera might help flesh out Sera's personality/plot. Is Charu trying to train Sera for her own gain? How does Sera react to scheduled (forced?) performances, if so? If Chara is more of a mother figure, does Sera look up to her? Is that why she particularly likes pretty fancy dresses, like her 'mom', as opposed to other kinds of attire or dance?

whee

Well, here goes. <3 ^^

You've got the foundations of a very unique character I think. The only thing I think that's holding you back is her confidence level and being social. I know Shiaree mentioned this before and you certainly CAN pull off this type of a character, but, you have to realize, with the low-confidence, it could pull into a state of depression and the like.

I think to get her better well-rounded, you should play around with other things besides her dancing. I know dancing is a big part and basically is her life, but why is she drawn to it besides her excerpt? What kind of joy does dancing give her?

See, questions like that can make you think that she will have confidence, especially about her dancing. Because she CAN be confident and anti-social. <3 She can believe in herself and be able to prove everyone wrong, if you get my jist.

I love the daemon. <3 Very classy to her. As Aki suggested, it would be so cool if they danced together!

For your daemon... I think the protective-father type is a bit overused. XD (I shouldn't be saying anything because Fortune is motherly, but she has a twist) You know, what you could do is have him protective, but on the flip side slightly vain. I've tended to realize that about some dancers as well. <3

And some flaws~ Is she easy to maniuplate? Does she have a physical weak spot when dancing? Some kind of thing that makes her cry?

I know that sounds REALLY mean, but to flesh out her character, that's what you have to think. Put her in situations she's not used to, think of how she'd react. ^^

Oh, and there's a sentence that's cut off in her personality... it goes something like, she'll then a new sentence.

And be proud! Make the translation for all to see. ^^

Overall lovely character, good luck~! <3

Hm...I still made it sound like she has low-confidence? ::rubs chin::

Sed does dance with her. n.n And he has a REASON to be fatherly...one that I am not sharing for plot's sake just yet unless Snooze asks. Then I'll just PM him an answer and hope it's okay to do~ ..I should probably do that now before I go too far with it.

She's got unlisted phobias, ridicule does make her cry even if it's constructive criticism and as for physical weak spot...I'm not so sure. I base her dancing off a friend of mine from school, her personality from bits and pieces of myself and friends, and her oboe playing from a close friend of mine.

...Cut off sentence? Gah. I always do that!

Thanks again, Tia~

I figured out what that cut off sentence was. I forgot I'd written it and repeated it later on. XD