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 Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2017 6:53 am
Username: Emalthya
Entries: Can't you see your ship's sinking?My siren is an evil 'jump off a perfectly good boat and drown because I tell you so' type.
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2017 8:26 pm
Username: ishnia
Entries:
1. Come now, love. Stay with me.
2. Let me show you our paradise.
3. Lost, are you? Let me help.
cries i missed the party and first day of the event ;;
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2017 10:48 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2017 11:10 pm
Username: JoyRose
Entries: (Limit: 3. You can only win once.)1. Come find rest in my arms. 2. Endless food. Eternal love. Infinite Rum!
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Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2017 8:28 am
Username:
Entries: (Limit: 3. You can only win once.)1- Drink my wine, taste my lips! 2- Rest your bones upon my shore! 3- Come, sing with me in eternity!
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Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2017 11:13 am
Updated! Loving all the entries so far.
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2017 9:51 pm
Username:
Entries:1. Let the sea swallow your pain.
2. Let your soul rest in peace
3. May my voice touch your heart. (Limit: 3. You can only win once.)
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2017 10:18 am
Updated, and the deadline has been extended until the end of the day tomorrow!
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2017 12:48 pm
Username: sdrawkcab
Entries:1. Home is this way. Come home.
2. An endless embrace. Stable resting place.
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Eternal Rebellion generated a random number between
1 and 7 ...
7!
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2017 12:36 am
   A0
1st Place
Emalthya
Can't you see your ship's sinking?
I love this one because it accomplishes several things: introduces a conflict, reveals the siren's personality, and immediately hooks the reader.
Overall, it's a wonderful use of the six word story format. Well done!
2nd Place
Maddy-Mazey
My voice soothes. Stay. Listen. Love?
I like how this entry has build-up! The uncertain "love?" at the end really captures your imagination: is the siren asking to be loved?
Is she suggesting to the sailor that it can be found? So many possibilities.
3rd Place
Cheshire Kattz
Let the sea swallow your pain.
The somberness of this entry stood out to me. It perfectly captures a sirens' ultimate goal of luring a sailor to the water. The sentence as a whole is also well constructed!
Honorable Mention
NorRainForest
Rest your bones upon my shore!
I love how this entry has a double meaning: figuratively and literally resting your bones on the shore!
Art Commission RNG
1 - Maddy-Mazey
2 - Emalthya
3 - Ishnia
4 - JoyRose
5 - NorRainForest
6 - Cheshire Kattz
7 - sdrawkcab
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2017 12:53 am
Ooooh thank you! That was an in-depth thought about it XD You can kind of guess where the story could go with it.
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2017 4:34 pm
Ooo~~ great winning picks. @ 3@ I liked reading all the sentences, but yeah, those were wonderful.
Also, thank you, RNG gods. o wo <3 I'm excited~~~
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