Range: 500 meter Description: Dragon's Bane - S Range: 500 meters By infusing arrows with lightning and fire chakra, the user is capable of a number of things. When released from a bow, the arrow causes a thunderclap, which can be heard from 125 meters away. Since the user is in such close proximity to the thunderclap, firing the arrow causes some slight disorientation, which prevents them from performing complex actions such as forming hand signs or stringing another bow or even running at full speed. Due to the lightning chakra, the arrows are fired at increased velocity, making the arrows difficult to react to. Furthermore, it gives them the capability of piercing solid steel. The fire chakra, on the other hand, causes anything the arrows has pierced to burst into flames. Unfortunately, this leaves a chakra trail behind the arrow, making it easier for the arrow to be detected. Alternatively, it also makes it easier for the user to track the arrows down after they're fired. Upon missing their target and colliding with a dense object such as stone or wood, a field of electricity will surround the arrow, causing anyone caught within this field to have severe problems with moving their body. The field covers a ten meter diameter, and instantly begins to shrink at a meter per second until it dissipates completely. As soon as anyone within the field is no longer inside of it, all of their motor functions quickly return to normal. Once fired, arrows may also split into up to 19 lightning-clone versions of themselves; however, since the chakra is divided, each arrow is considerably weaker, but still capable of piercing through the human body. Furthermore, without the extra chakra, the arrows are no longer capable of creating an electric field, including the original.
Requirements:
It requires the user to shut down unneeded senses like taste, touch, smell, ability to perceive color, emotions, and requires immense control of one's own chakra flow.
Permission:
To any one he deems worthy, for any one else to teach it to another person they need his permissim. It'll most be passed down in his family.
Special Weapons:
Angel's Tears and Heaven's fall has the ability to condense chakra and store it. Since they can condense chakra they can store vast amounts of it, they can store the weilder's own chakra, but for some one else to store chakra they need to give it willing. The weapons neutralize the chakra's element, so the bottled can be use to replinish any one chakra no matter what element they use. More dense the chakra becomes the more volital the liquid chakra becomes, when it's outside the weapon. The weilder can use the stored chakra in the weapons to help with jutsu. The bottled chakra can only be used when the person's chakra supply is empty. D-rank
The only thing that needs to be added is some sort of indication of how much chakra can be stored at one time. At D Rank (I assume each weapon is D Rank separately), each weapon could reasonably have a one-time use of roughly 20% chakra restoration. After used, you'd have to store more chakra into it before it can be used again.
If you wanted it to be a mass-restoration ability that focuses on being used on a ton of people, then you could lower that to 10% and make it useable on a given person once per battle.
Like I said earlier not good with ranks, but I was thinking they could be A-rank or S-rank. A-rank would be 50% and S-rank would 60% right?
Depends on whether you want it to be self-use only or usable on anyone (including yourself). But honestly, 50% and 60%, respectively, would be fine for a mass-use version. For self-use only, you could raise it to 75/90.
Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2017 9:22 am
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Dragon's Bane Rank: S
Range: 500 meter Description: Dragon's Bane - S Range: 500 meters By infusing arrows with lightning and fire chakra, the user is capable of a number of things. When released from a bow, the arrow causes a thunderclap, which can be heard from 125 meters away. Since the user is in such close proximity to the thunderclap, firing the arrow causes some slight disorientation, which prevents them from performing complex actions such as forming hand signs or stringing another bow or even running at full speed. Due to the lightning chakra, the arrows are fired at increased velocity, making the arrows difficult to react to. Furthermore, it gives them the capability of piercing solid steel. The fire chakra, on the other hand, causes anything the arrows has pierced to burst into flames. Unfortunately, this leaves a chakra trail behind the arrow, making it easier for the arrow to be detected. Alternatively, it also makes it easier for the user to track the arrows down after they're fired. Upon missing their target and colliding with a dense object such as stone or wood, a field of electricity will surround the arrow, causing anyone caught within this field to have severe problems with moving their body. The field covers a ten meter diameter, and instantly begins to shrink at a meter per second until it dissipates completely. As soon as anyone within the field is no longer inside of it, all of their motor functions quickly return to normal. Once fired, arrows may also split into up to 19 lightning-clone versions of themselves; however, since the chakra is divided, each arrow is considerably weaker, but still capable of piercing through the human body. Furthermore, without the extra chakra, the arrows are no longer capable of creating an electric field, including the original.
Requirements:
It requires the user to shut down unneeded senses like taste, touch, smell, ability to perceive color, emotions, and requires immense control of one's own chakra flow.
Permission:
To any one he deems worthy, for any one else to teach it to another person they need his permissim. It'll most be passed down in his family.
Special Weapons:
Angel's Tears and Heaven's fall has the ability to condense chakra and store it. Since they can condense chakra they can store vast amounts of it, they can store the weilder's own chakra, but for some one else to store chakra they need to give it willing. The weapons neutralize the chakra's element, so the bottled can be use to replinish any one chakra no matter what element they use. More dense the chakra becomes the more volital the liquid chakra becomes, when it's outside the weapon. The weilder can use the stored chakra in the weapons to help with jutsu. The bottled chakra can only be used when the person's chakra supply is empty. D-rank
The only thing that needs to be added is some sort of indication of how much chakra can be stored at one time. At D Rank (I assume each weapon is D Rank separately), each weapon could reasonably have a one-time use of roughly 20% chakra restoration. After used, you'd have to store more chakra into it before it can be used again.
If you wanted it to be a mass-restoration ability that focuses on being used on a ton of people, then you could lower that to 10% and make it useable on a given person once per battle.
Like I said earlier not good with ranks, but I was thinking they could be A-rank or S-rank. A-rank would be 50% and S-rank would 60% right?
Depends on whether you want it to be self-use only or usable on anyone (including yourself). But honestly, 50% and 60%, respectively, would be fine for a mass-use version. For self-use only, you could raise it to 75/90.
Both of them could mass use, because if one was self use and the other waas mass use. It could lead to possible brokenness.
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2017 9:27 am
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Dragon's Bane Rank: S
Range: 500 meter Description: Dragon's Bane - S Range: 500 meters By infusing arrows with lightning and fire chakra, the user is capable of a number of things. When released from a bow, the arrow causes a thunderclap, which can be heard from 125 meters away. Since the user is in such close proximity to the thunderclap, firing the arrow causes some slight disorientation, which prevents them from performing complex actions such as forming hand signs or stringing another bow or even running at full speed. Due to the lightning chakra, the arrows are fired at increased velocity, making the arrows difficult to react to. Furthermore, it gives them the capability of piercing solid steel. The fire chakra, on the other hand, causes anything the arrows has pierced to burst into flames. Unfortunately, this leaves a chakra trail behind the arrow, making it easier for the arrow to be detected. Alternatively, it also makes it easier for the user to track the arrows down after they're fired. Upon missing their target and colliding with a dense object such as stone or wood, a field of electricity will surround the arrow, causing anyone caught within this field to have severe problems with moving their body. The field covers a ten meter diameter, and instantly begins to shrink at a meter per second until it dissipates completely. As soon as anyone within the field is no longer inside of it, all of their motor functions quickly return to normal. Once fired, arrows may also split into up to 19 lightning-clone versions of themselves; however, since the chakra is divided, each arrow is considerably weaker, but still capable of piercing through the human body. Furthermore, without the extra chakra, the arrows are no longer capable of creating an electric field, including the original.
Requirements:
It requires the user to shut down unneeded senses like taste, touch, smell, ability to perceive color, emotions, and requires immense control of one's own chakra flow.
Permission:
To any one he deems worthy, for any one else to teach it to another person they need his permissim. It'll most be passed down in his family.
Special Weapons:
Angel's Tears and Heaven's fall has the ability to condense chakra and store it. Since they can condense chakra they can store vast amounts of it, they can store the weilder's own chakra, but for some one else to store chakra they need to give it willing. The weapons neutralize the chakra's element, so the bottled can be use to replinish any one chakra no matter what element they use. More dense the chakra becomes the more volital the liquid chakra becomes, when it's outside the weapon. The weilder can use the stored chakra in the weapons to help with jutsu. The bottled chakra can only be used when the person's chakra supply is empty. D-rank
The only thing that needs to be added is some sort of indication of how much chakra can be stored at one time. At D Rank (I assume each weapon is D Rank separately), each weapon could reasonably have a one-time use of roughly 20% chakra restoration. After used, you'd have to store more chakra into it before it can be used again.
If you wanted it to be a mass-restoration ability that focuses on being used on a ton of people, then you could lower that to 10% and make it useable on a given person once per battle.
Like I said earlier not good with ranks, but I was thinking they could be A-rank or S-rank. A-rank would be 50% and S-rank would 60% right?
Depends on whether you want it to be self-use only or usable on anyone (including yourself). But honestly, 50% and 60%, respectively, would be fine for a mass-use version. For self-use only, you could raise it to 75/90.
Both of them could mass use, because if one was self use and the other waas mass use. It could lead to possible brokenness.
That's fine. Lemme know when you've updated the description of the weapons to incorporate that.
Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2017 10:21 am
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Dragon's Bane Rank: S
Range: 500 meter Description: Dragon's Bane - S Range: 500 meters By infusing arrows with lightning and fire chakra, the user is capable of a number of things. When released from a bow, the arrow causes a thunderclap, which can be heard from 125 meters away. Since the user is in such close proximity to the thunderclap, firing the arrow causes some slight disorientation, which prevents them from performing complex actions such as forming hand signs or stringing another bow or even running at full speed. Due to the lightning chakra, the arrows are fired at increased velocity, making the arrows difficult to react to. Furthermore, it gives them the capability of piercing solid steel. The fire chakra, on the other hand, causes anything the arrows has pierced to burst into flames. Unfortunately, this leaves a chakra trail behind the arrow, making it easier for the arrow to be detected. Alternatively, it also makes it easier for the user to track the arrows down after they're fired. Upon missing their target and colliding with a dense object such as stone or wood, a field of electricity will surround the arrow, causing anyone caught within this field to have severe problems with moving their body. The field covers a ten meter diameter, and instantly begins to shrink at a meter per second until it dissipates completely. As soon as anyone within the field is no longer inside of it, all of their motor functions quickly return to normal. Once fired, arrows may also split into up to 19 lightning-clone versions of themselves; however, since the chakra is divided, each arrow is considerably weaker, but still capable of piercing through the human body. Furthermore, without the extra chakra, the arrows are no longer capable of creating an electric field, including the original.
Requirements:
It requires the user to shut down unneeded senses like taste, touch, smell, ability to perceive color, emotions, and requires immense control of one's own chakra flow.
Permission:
To any one he deems worthy, for any one else to teach it to another person they need his permissim. It'll most be passed down in his family.
Special Weapons:
Angel's Tears and Heaven's fall has the ability to condense chakra, store it, neutralize the chakra's element. Since they can condense chakra they can store vast amounts of it, they can store the weilder's own chakra, but for some one else to store chakra they need to give it willing. They are designed for mass-use, another words the bottle chakra (or potions just for sh!t and giggles) can be use to restores a person's chakra supply and that includes the weilder of the weapons. The potion restores sixty percent of the person's chakra, when they drink it. S-rank
The only thing that needs to be added is some sort of indication of how much chakra can be stored at one time. At D Rank (I assume each weapon is D Rank separately), each weapon could reasonably have a one-time use of roughly 20% chakra restoration. After used, you'd have to store more chakra into it before it can be used again.
If you wanted it to be a mass-restoration ability that focuses on being used on a ton of people, then you could lower that to 10% and make it useable on a given person once per battle.
Like I said earlier not good with ranks, but I was thinking they could be A-rank or S-rank. A-rank would be 50% and S-rank would 60% right?
Depends on whether you want it to be self-use only or usable on anyone (including yourself). But honestly, 50% and 60%, respectively, would be fine for a mass-use version. For self-use only, you could raise it to 75/90.
Both of them could mass use, because if one was self use and the other waas mass use. It could lead to possible brokenness.
That's fine. Lemme know when you've updated the description of the weapons to incorporate that.
Is this better?
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Posted: Sat Aug 05, 2017 7:33 pm
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Special Weapons: Angel's Tears and Heaven's fall has the ability to condense chakra, store it, neutralize the chakra's element. Since they can condense chakra they can store vast amounts of it, they can store the weilder's own chakra, but for some one else to store chakra they need to give it willing. They are designed for mass-use, another words the bottle chakra (or potions just for sh!t and giggles) can be use to restores a person's chakra supply and that includes the weilder of the weapons. The potion restores sixty percent of the person's chakra, when they drink it. S-rank
The only thing missing is a limit to it. One use per person, per "battle" would be reasonable.
Posted: Sat Aug 05, 2017 8:22 pm
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The only thing missing is a limit to it. One use per person, per "battle" would be reasonable.
I added in the limitation. Although technically wouldn't it be two bottles per person, per battle, because there being two weapons.
P.S I'm sorry if I'm pissing you off, I'm not trying to make you mad.
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Posted: Sat Aug 05, 2017 9:40 pm
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The only thing missing is a limit to it. One use per person, per "battle" would be reasonable.
I added in the limitation. Although technically wouldn't it be two bottles per person, per battle, because there being two weapons.
P.S I'm sorry if I'm pissing you off, I'm not trying to make you mad.
You're not lol But the number of weapons is irrelevant. It all falls under one, S-Ranked "technique." At this point, logic is being disregarded anyways though. The amount of bottles of chakra you have in your possession wouldn't alter depending on the amount of people present, logically speaking. The only reason I insist on tying a set amount of bottles to each person is to prevent you from being able to use 100 of them on yourself. The only ways I can think of to remove this problem is limiting the amount of uses per person or limiting the total amount of bottles (I believe you mentioned 100+ uses so...no? Lol). But if you want it to make sense, you could claim that using these potions on a person multiples times has consequences....that would make limiting the amount of uses per person make sense. What those consequences might be...well, the possibilities are endless. I personally don't see the point in extending the review process over semantics.
Posted: Sat Aug 05, 2017 9:43 pm
If you're deadset on making it two bottles per person though, lower the chakra recovery to 40% (that improves it to a total of 80% instead of 60%, which is fine by me)
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Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2017 10:15 pm
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I just thought of an upgrade to the technique. He has to learn two other elements before he can use it.
Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2017 4:54 pm
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I just thought of an upgrade to the technique. He has to learn two other elements before he can use it.
Which technique?
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2017 5:46 pm
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I just thought of an upgrade to the technique. He has to learn two other elements before he can use it.
Which technique?
To Dragon's Bane(It was orginally called shango's hunt) instead of fire and lightning, it's plasma and shock(I was reading about the shock and plasma element and it says that plasma is a combination of flame and lightning, not sure if it's ture. It also says that shock is a combination lightning and wind, again not sure if it's true.) I got two other techniques, one is a basic attack amplification and the other one is sensory jutsu. Not sure If he can use the sensory jutsu. Never mind need magnet for the sensory jutsu.
Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2017 6:50 pm
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I just thought of an upgrade to the technique. He has to learn two other elements before he can use it.
Which technique?
To Dragon's Bane(It was orginally called shango's hunt) instead of fire and lightning, it's plasma and shock(I was reading about the shock and plasma element and it says that plasma is a combination of flame and lightning, not sure if it's ture. It also says that shock is a combination lightning and wind, again not sure if it's true.) I got two other techniques, one is a basic attack amplification and the other one is sensory jutsu. Not sure If he can use the sensory jutsu. Never mind need magnet for the sensory jutsu.
Those aren't canon, so you'd have to create a clan to utilize them. The combined elements are always Kekkei Genkai. Not just anyone can use them.
And you don't need magnet release for sensory techniques. Not all of them, anyways. Not exactly familiar with a Magnet Release Sensory technique though.
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2017 5:08 am
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I just thought of an upgrade to the technique. He has to learn two other elements before he can use it.
Which technique?
To Dragon's Bane(It was orginally called shango's hunt) instead of fire and lightning, it's plasma and shock(I was reading about the shock and plasma element and it says that plasma is a combination of flame and lightning, not sure if it's ture. It also says that shock is a combination lightning and wind, again not sure if it's true.) I got two other techniques, one is a basic attack amplification and the other one is sensory jutsu. Not sure If he can use the sensory jutsu. Never mind need magnet for the sensory jutsu.
Those aren't canon, so you'd have to create a clan to utilize them. The combined elements are always Kekkei Genkai. Not just anyone can use them.
And you don't need magnet release for sensory techniques. Not all of them, anyways. Not exactly familiar with a Magnet Release Sensory technique though.
If I have to then no choice, I orginally want the clan that I'm thinking have kekkei genkai to be senjutsu.
Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2017 5:20 pm
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I just thought of an upgrade to the technique. He has to learn two other elements before he can use it.
Which technique?
To Dragon's Bane(It was orginally called shango's hunt) instead of fire and lightning, it's plasma and shock(I was reading about the shock and plasma element and it says that plasma is a combination of flame and lightning, not sure if it's ture. It also says that shock is a combination lightning and wind, again not sure if it's true.) I got two other techniques, one is a basic attack amplification and the other one is sensory jutsu. Not sure If he can use the sensory jutsu. Never mind need magnet for the sensory jutsu.
Those aren't canon, so you'd have to create a clan to utilize them. The combined elements are always Kekkei Genkai. Not just anyone can use them.
And you don't need magnet release for sensory techniques. Not all of them, anyways. Not exactly familiar with a Magnet Release Sensory technique though.
If I have to then no choice, I orginally want the clan that I'm thinking have kekkei genkai to be senjutsu.
Are you referring to the Rinnegan?
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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2017 7:48 pm
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Which technique?
To Dragon's Bane(It was orginally called shango's hunt) instead of fire and lightning, it's plasma and shock(I was reading about the shock and plasma element and it says that plasma is a combination of flame and lightning, not sure if it's ture. It also says that shock is a combination lightning and wind, again not sure if it's true.) I got two other techniques, one is a basic attack amplification and the other one is sensory jutsu. Not sure If he can use the sensory jutsu. Never mind need magnet for the sensory jutsu.
Those aren't canon, so you'd have to create a clan to utilize them. The combined elements are always Kekkei Genkai. Not just anyone can use them.
And you don't need magnet release for sensory techniques. Not all of them, anyways. Not exactly familiar with a Magnet Release Sensory technique though.
If I have to then no choice, I orginally want the clan that I'm thinking have kekkei genkai to be senjutsu.
Are you referring to the Rinnegan?
Not the Rinnegan. Although that would be interesting to have.
