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 Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2018 9:09 am
chi honda Yes thank you! oops I didn't notice that thank you. Well thank you I'm glad it works. I saw it and honestly I'm kinda glad the other one was taken. =] Now if I claim a slot for a civilian or powered for her with my crown tokens - do I need to wait to say I claim her till someone takes it on? I wasn't sure how that works. Yes she is a chibi! I knew I forgot something. It won't fit in the title so I put it in the senshi form. So I finally came up with a final attack. Its more on the defensive side, but I feel like after looking at the lores and learning more about mistletoe. it's fitting. It kind shows the sweeter side of it. The love/tears that made it what it has become. My only fear is it might be over powered. Thank you for helping me open my eyes to how fun mistletoe can be. I really didn't even realize how much past was behind it. <3 Its so much fun and super enjoyable just learning about it.
Your attack visuals are certainly creative, I love how imaginative you are in your descriptions <3
My concern would be the aiming and the strength of her attack. Since we don't want to control other people's characters, we can only hope that her berries land on a friendly target, we can't state that they will. As well, a blanket statement of "protecting them from harm" is too broad and powerful, especially since Christabel will be a chibi and her attacks are weaker than those of an adult senshi.
I think limiting the barrier to magical attacks could work, in theory. If the berry successfully lands on the friendly target, they're protected from one magical attack and once the attack hits the barrier, the figurative force field dissolves.
So it could go something like:
Christabel wills herself to cry and the first tear turns into a white mistletoe berry, which she then has five seconds to toss towards a friendly target. If the berry makes impact, the berry's "kiss" against their skin provides a temporary barrier, protecting the ally against a magical attack for one use, dissolving after the attack makes successful impact. If the ally is not attacked after 30 seconds, the barrier fades on its own. One use per battle.
I tried to incorporate the tears and kissing elements into your attack since you felt them important towards the lore but please feel free to tinker with it (I just wanted to offer an example to help clarify what I meant).
With her being a chibi, I would say 15 seconds for the Basic attack would work, 20 seconds for the Super and 30 seconds for the Eternal. Once she grows into an adult senshi, we can always revise the times and potentially the number of uses, since she'll be growing stronger/more powerful as she transitions into a full senshi.
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2018 11:52 am
Ghouliboo Once you post in the Crown Tokens thread that you are redeeming your tokens to obtain her, you will have secured the names (unless someone else has obtained them before you, in which case staff will contact you). Sirene maintains both the Master List and the Crown Token list, so she'll be able to add your reservation to the list as you wait for the art to be done.
Your attack visuals are certainly creative, I love how imaginative you are in your descriptions <3
My concern would be the aiming and the strength of her attack. Since we don't want to control other people's characters, we can only hope that her berries land on a friendly target, we can't state that they will. As well, a blanket statement of "protecting them from harm" is too broad and powerful, especially since Christabel will be a chibi and her attacks are weaker than those of an adult senshi.
I think limiting the barrier to magical attacks could work, in theory. If the berry successfully lands on the friendly target, they're protected from one magical attack and once the attack hits the barrier, the figurative force field dissolves.
So it could go something like:
Christabel wills herself to cry and the first tear turns into a white mistletoe berry, which she then has five seconds to toss towards a friendly target. If the berry makes impact, the berry's "kiss" against their skin provides a temporary barrier, protecting the ally against a magical attack for one use, dissolving after the attack makes successful impact. If the ally is not attacked after 30 seconds, the barrier fades on its own. One use per battle.
I tried to incorporate the tears and kissing elements into your attack since you felt them important towards the lore but please feel free to tinker with it (I just wanted to offer an example to help clarify what I meant).
With her being a chibi, I would say 15 seconds for the Basic attack would work, 20 seconds for the Super and 30 seconds for the Eternal. Once she grows into an adult senshi, we can always revise the times and potentially the number of uses, since she'll be growing stronger/more powerful as she transitions into a full senshi.
Oh okay awesome! ^_^ well I should be able to claim her soon so hopefully no one beats me to the punch. lol. Aww well thank you. <3 That makes sense. That was actually the part I was worried about. Hmmm I actually like that revision on it. It's still got the white berries, tears, and kisses and protects from harm. It's beautiful! So I have officially updated attack time and the final attack to the example you posted. Since it really is pretty similar just more chibi like honestly. Though I think I am officially done with her profile. Thank you so very much for all the help to get her to perfect. This was super fun and I can't wait to get her created! =D
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2018 1:50 pm
chi honda Oh okay awesome! ^_^ well I should be able to claim her soon so hopefully no one beats me to the punch. lol. Aww well thank you. <3 That makes sense. That was actually the part I was worried about. Hmmm I actually like that revision on it. It's still got the white berries, tears, and kisses and protects from harm. It's beautiful! So I have officially updated attack time and the final attack to the example you posted. Since it really is pretty similar just more chibi like honestly. Though I think I am officially done with her profile. Thank you so very much for all the help to get her to perfect. This was super fun and I can't wait to get her created! =D
A GM will be by shortly for a final review!
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2018 11:40 pm
Ghouliboo I can't wait to see her come to life, she looks lovely! <3
A GM will be by shortly for a final review! Oh my gosh yayyy!! Thank you for the stamp or well trial stamp! I can't wait either! and not sure if it matters but she is officially claimed in the crown token thread. =] or well her civi at least. ^_^
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2018 4:00 pm
Congratulations on claiming her civ in the crown token thread! Have fun (and good luck winning her powered side!)
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