Almost there! There's just a few fiddly fixes and clarifications and I think we'll be good to go!
For his eternal attack the person that can also be shielded, can they be shielded anywhere in that four feet (a radius); or only behind Anubis (a cone)? Could you also clarify how large the shield is? What happens when a physical attack hits it, does the shield weaken/break, how many hits does it take? Same goes for energy attacks in do they weaken the shield / how many hits can it take; then could you also clarify what kind of energy attacks does this attack just absorb the offensive energy attacks, or defensive energy attacks or both? These are questions that'll come up in rps as well, so easier to snag them now than to worry about them later.
I also wanted to ask for clarification on the marigold scent. How long does the marigold scent linger? Often things like this need a time limit, if it ends with the attack's time limit that's fine, or have it end a few seconds after. Either way you go, you can always write in an option for players to exceed the time restraints written if they wish this to happen; however, having a time limit provides those who don't want their character to smell like marigold's all night a way out of that.
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