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Meighei


Bishoujo-senshi Mahou-shoujo

PostPosted: Sun Jul 31, 2016 8:39 pm


LP


Let me know if the changes are good enough!
PostPosted: Sun Jul 31, 2016 9:02 pm


Meighei


I think we're almost there.

So I think I might have confused you with the term Area of Effect. An Area of Effect does not, effect only one target. It affects a field within a certain range of the caster. I'm not sure if you've played this but there's a massive multiplayer game called Ragnarok Online. Their wizards have attacks that are Area of Effects in which they effect multiple targets that are in the Castor's Area of Effect.

So your Eternal Attack in that regards is still too weak, in that it just effects one person, where it should effect people in a radius of x feet. (x equaling the number of feet you want this effect to happen in.)

Also, I didn't catch this sooner, so I apologize for missing it, however you cannot have an attack that give the player two choices. They cannot choose between Disorientation or Hallucinations. The attack has to have one or the other, or both. The only time attacks are allowed choices are in severity of damages done if it's a physical harming attack.


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Meighei


Bishoujo-senshi Mahou-shoujo

PostPosted: Sun Jul 31, 2016 9:14 pm


LP


Would ten feet be a decent radius? Too large or too small? /is not the best with dimensions
PostPosted: Sun Jul 31, 2016 10:19 pm


Meighei


10 foot is fine for Eternal radius.

However, allies cannot choose to not be affected by her effect, again this goes back to what I was saying about they can't choose one effect or the other. The attacks must be definitive in the regards to the type of attacks you have. So you can choose now to either have the allies not affected by her attacks or they can be affected by the attacks. Either way it has to be one or the other before I can stamp it.


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Meighei


Bishoujo-senshi Mahou-shoujo

PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2016 6:23 am


LP


Allies can't choose either. It wouldn't make sense for them to be harmed by it either. I changed the wording to they cannot be affected.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2016 6:05 pm


Meighei


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Thank you so much! A GM'll be by shortly.


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PostPosted: Fri Aug 05, 2016 8:57 am


Meighei


This looks good to me! I can stamp her as a white moon senshi, but she will need a corruption proposal before she can be played as a corrupted senshi—or, alternatively, if you win her as a corrupted senshi she will not need a corruption plot (she can just be corrupted by any General Sovereign!)

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