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Eidetic memory isn't commonly accepted to directly exist in the form of total perfect recall, so you may want to look at the different ways in which unusually powerful memory tends to present for adults and what might work best for Leporis and make sense for her character. Eidetic memory is generally considered specific to visual memory rather than including the other senses in the same way, so for a character with impaired vision it's up to you whether you think she would rely on her eyesight as her primary way of recognizing the world. If you wanted to play with the memory angle, it could instead be interesting to say she under-relies on her vision because of the impairment, and has unusually good aural pattern recognition and attention to sound -- perhaps she recognizes people's voices very quickly, or is good at discerning emotion through tiny variations in tone and speech patterns, or is good at picking up on distant sounds or sounds that don't 'belong.' It's up to you how you want to work it. smile

I love Banishment as a sphere, btw.

Changed sphere to mochi and fixed attacks.

Traditionally, mochi is pounded to create its texture - that's how I meant it to be connected to her sphere.

I had problems with making her attacks too much like a negaverse teleport or like a rift. I also wanted it to tie in with her twin's sphere and that was changed as well.

Fixed.

Hey, Mei!

You have a neat profile (and an interesting sphere!) so I'll try to make this quick for you! <3

For her civilian side, I wanted to go over one thing! One of her virtues—"Forever in my Memory" sounds more like a skill she has rather than a personality trait! A personality trait would focus more on how it affects her behavior and how it is a positive aspect of her life, so while it is fine for her to have an eidetic memory, I'd love to hear more about how this affects her as a trait so I can drop a stamp! For example, does her eidetic memory make her quick witted—so she is capable of thinking on her feet, or is she well-rounded (retains a lot of information about a lot of things so is helpful when it comes to memory related things or random information), or focused (and focusing allows her to recall more details, or she can preserve memories clearer, or it makes her a valid ally because her ability to stay on track stays with her), or detailed or specific (because of her eidetic memory she pays attention to detail and can recall important things, and it aids her in staying on track and focused)—these are just general traits that could tie into her genetic ability (eidetic memory) while still exploring facets of her personality that will aid in roleplay!

For her powered abilities, I just have two questions! For her Basic attack, what is the radius for the area covered? (I think a fifteen foot diameter around her would be reasonable to conceal her in the cloud of powder if you wanted!)

For her super attack, the same question! How big is the radius or diameter of this attack—and does it affect the general environment or does the powder just cloud around the opponents and stick to them? (For example, the powder could hit the targets and no matter where they move, the air around them—up to three feet—stays powdery and disorients them or obscures vision).

I know I have a lot of words here, and I am sorry if they are intimidating! I just try to give as much information as possible, but I think this is a cute profile! If you have any questions or make any changes, please give me a quote and I'll be back as soon as possible!

(Also, in the future it helps if you can link to the celestial body/wonder name! This was an easy one for me to google, but a lot of times places have obscure names, or multiple locations share the same name/nickname so we just want to make sure there is no overlap!)

Thanks so much, she looks great to me!