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The Shade of Casin

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 18, 2014 10:37 pm


Clyry Miss Misery
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Thank you very much. I am glad to hear it is an enjoyable plot. I have not really had any amount of decent feedback.


Oh! Oh! I am on page 35 already!!!! And to tell you what I do love to finish your book!!

^ Guess not everyone is feelin' your humor.
I am confused what you are talking about with the feeling my humor.


Sorry to confuse you with the arrow what I intended to tell about the humor is the feedback you get from your book.

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I am glad that you are enjoying my humor, It bonces back and forth.


Yup I did enjoy your humor so damn much!
I am very glad. again any questions feel free to ask; If you include your page number i will make sure not to spoil
PostPosted: Wed Feb 19, 2014 8:25 am


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Clyry Miss Misery
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Clyry Miss Misery
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I am confused what you are talking about with the feeling my humor.


Sorry to confuse you with the arrow what I intended to tell about the humor is the feedback you get from your book.

sweatdrop
I am glad that you are enjoying my humor, It bonces back and forth.


Yup I did enjoy your humor so damn much!
I am very glad. again any questions feel free to ask; If you include your page number i will make sure not to spoil


It is I who should be thanking you! You made my day by giving something to read! i love that! I'm on page 35 gotta stop I forgot I have deadlines to submit.


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 09, 2014 6:01 pm


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How Goes it? / Guild bump
PostPosted: Sun Mar 09, 2014 9:06 pm


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How Goes it? / Guild bump


I am in the part where The Doktor and Tezalant have to tell the Detectiv the whole thing that happened to his family.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 2:45 am


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I am in the part where The Doktor and Tezalant have to tell the Detectiv the whole thing that happened to his family.

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^.^ sorry to pester
PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2014 6:24 am


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I am in the part where The Doktor and Tezalant have to tell the Detectiv the whole thing that happened to his family.

3nodding
^.^ sorry to pester


Its okay. I can't focus on it --- I mean totally focus on reading it. My deadlines is summoning me. But I find it very entertaining.

emotion_yatta


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PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2014 10:33 am


Clyry Miss Misery
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How Goes it? / Guild bump


I am in the part where The Doktor and Tezalant have to tell the Detectiv the whole thing that happened to his family.

3nodding
^.^ sorry to pester


Its okay. I can't focus on it --- I mean totally focus on reading it. My deadlines is summoning me. But I find it very entertaining.

emotion_yatta
I am happy that you are finding the book worth reading
PostPosted: Fri Mar 14, 2014 5:15 am


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Clyry Miss Misery
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Clyry Miss Misery
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Clyry Miss Misery
How Goes it? / Guild bump


I am in the part where The Doktor and Tezalant have to tell the Detectiv the whole thing that happened to his family.

3nodding
^.^ sorry to pester


Its okay. I can't focus on it --- I mean totally focus on reading it. My deadlines is summoning me. But I find it very entertaining.

emotion_yatta
I am happy that you are finding the book worth reading


Every book is worth reading it was like connecting to the author anyway.

3nodding


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PostPosted: Fri Mar 14, 2014 9:16 am


Clyry Miss Misery
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Clyry Miss Misery


I am in the part where The Doktor and Tezalant have to tell the Detectiv the whole thing that happened to his family.

3nodding
^.^ sorry to pester


Its okay. I can't focus on it --- I mean totally focus on reading it. My deadlines is summoning me. But I find it very entertaining.

emotion_yatta
I am happy that you are finding the book worth reading


Every book is worth reading it was like connecting to the author anyway.

3nodding
Thank you so much. It is a good feeling to have.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 15, 2014 11:31 pm


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Clyry Miss Misery
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Clyry Miss Misery
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Clyry Miss Misery


I am in the part where The Doktor and Tezalant have to tell the Detectiv the whole thing that happened to his family.

3nodding
^.^ sorry to pester


Its okay. I can't focus on it --- I mean totally focus on reading it. My deadlines is summoning me. But I find it very entertaining.

emotion_yatta
I am happy that you are finding the book worth reading


Every book is worth reading it was like connecting to the author anyway.

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Thank you so much. It is a good feeling to have.


Your Welcome and thanks as well for the entertainment.

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 15, 2014 11:33 pm


Clyry Miss Misery
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Clyry Miss Misery


Its okay. I can't focus on it --- I mean totally focus on reading it. My deadlines is summoning me. But I find it very entertaining.

emotion_yatta
I am happy that you are finding the book worth reading


Every book is worth reading it was like connecting to the author anyway.

3nodding
Thank you so much. It is a good feeling to have.


Your Welcome and thanks as well for the entertainment.

3nodding
No problem, are you enjoying the story? Questions so far?
PostPosted: Sat Mar 15, 2014 11:36 pm


Roilvn Whiro
Clyry Miss Misery
Roilvn Whiro
Clyry Miss Misery
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Clyry Miss Misery


Its okay. I can't focus on it --- I mean totally focus on reading it. My deadlines is summoning me. But I find it very entertaining.

emotion_yatta
I am happy that you are finding the book worth reading


Every book is worth reading it was like connecting to the author anyway.

3nodding
Thank you so much. It is a good feeling to have.


Your Welcome and thanks as well for the entertainment.

3nodding
No problem, are you enjoying the story? Questions so far?


Yeah I am enjoying the story. Well no questions at all but I let you know.

emotion_yatta


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2014 12:12 am


Clyry Miss Misery
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Clyry Miss Misery


Every book is worth reading it was like connecting to the author anyway.

3nodding
Thank you so much. It is a good feeling to have.


Your Welcome and thanks as well for the entertainment.

3nodding
No problem, are you enjoying the story? Questions so far?


Yeah I am enjoying the story. Well no questions at all but I let you know.

emotion_yatta
Well I am happy that you are willing to stick it out.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2014 12:18 am


Roilvn Whiro
Clyry Miss Misery
Roilvn Whiro
Clyry Miss Misery
Roilvn Whiro
Clyry Miss Misery


Every book is worth reading it was like connecting to the author anyway.

3nodding
Thank you so much. It is a good feeling to have.


Your Welcome and thanks as well for the entertainment.

3nodding
No problem, are you enjoying the story? Questions so far?


Yeah I am enjoying the story. Well no questions at all but I let you know.

emotion_yatta
Well I am happy that you are willing to stick it out.


Of course why not. It was not bad.

3nodding


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2014 12:56 am


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Your Welcome and thanks as well for the entertainment.

3nodding
No problem, are you enjoying the story? Questions so far?


Yeah I am enjoying the story. Well no questions at all but I let you know.

emotion_yatta
Well I am happy that you are willing to stick it out.


Of course why not. It was not bad.

3nodding
Very cool ^.^ Favorite Characters/ Scenes so far?
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