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 Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2013 1:02 pm
Do I write a new one, or just pick a different village...? sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2013 1:18 pm
Sexy Illusion Do I write a new one, or just pick a different village...? sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2013 1:45 pm
Amegakure Jounin Post
(Of course this first part doesn't count in the word count)
When we last left Yuu, Takiko, she was in a forest clearing on the border of Kusagakure out on a mother-son trip with young Yuu (Yuu Boy), Aki. She had instructed her son to go and look for any insects that he wished to add to his collection while she went off in another direction to do the same. However, Takiko decided to take this chance to test out her son's skills in dealing with jutsu that he personally does not know or fully understand. Takiko arranged explosives around the field before setting up her final assault for him. When everything was ready she called her son over towards the middle of the explosives trap. Without warning, she set off the explosives all around her son trying to blind him while she moved in explosive clay clones of him in his location. What will happen now?
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A sharp blood curdling yell came out from young Aki as everything came down onto him at once. Takiko looked down and simply just laughed out. “Come on son. Do you really think I would believe that?” She called out as she looked across to see her son standing on his own bird a few feet lower in the air than hers. Honestly, she was very surprised that he knew this technique and even more so that he could actually perform this jutsu well enough to keep it stabilized. He stood there with shrugged arms as if to respond to his mother’s surprise at his abilities. Without saying or doing much of starring back at each other with determined expressions. Takiko’s eyes trailed down to her son’s footing on his bird. He was still very unsteady on it and probably had no real control over its flight. With swift movements of her hands she caused the clay minions to extend out their arms to grab hold of Aki’s clay bird. Aki tried to move the bird away, but he could not think of anything to sever these minions grip on it without causing them to explode. A worried expression melted Aki’s normally stoic face as the clay bird underneath him was torn in two. ‘Come on son. Think about what could save you right now.’ Takiko pulled the clay minions away from Aki as she watched her son plummet to the ground below.
Aki held his palms out with both of the mouths wide open dripping with clay. Before fully reaching the ground, the clay formed into a rough clone that Aki enveloped himself in to cushion the fall. While still in the air, Takiko slowly applauded her son for his efforts, however she performed a few quick handsigns and used Fuuton: Mujuuryou no Kiten on Aki before he was fully out of his clay. “Hey what that?! Mom put me down!” Aki flailed around a moment unsure of whether or not he was supposed to try to get away or wait here. Sometimes she did use this technique to keep him from moving about too much while she lectured him about what he did wrong in his last move. Takiko maintained the jutsu as she lowered the clay bird down for her son to hear her better. “Can you tell me what exactly you did wrong there?” Her tone was straightforward and laced with impatience. Aki just shrugged his shoulders not wanting to really think about what he did wrong. Considering he did not want to be training in the first place. Takiko shook her head and sighed. “You wasted chakra on a simple fall. There were other ways that you could have escaped harm. Do it again!” She said blankly as she further built up wind chakra underneath him forcing him back up into the air a little ways above where he had been during his first fall. “And keep in mind each time you don’t do it right I will toss one of my C-1 bombs directly at you,” She called out to him. This went on for about five more attempts before he finally realized that he was supposed to land on his feet in a proper position to keep from sustaining injuries. However, this did not really matter considering he had taken C-1 explosives to his arms and legs on top of being flung back into the air over and over. He rested on his knees trying to catch his breath while Takiko still remained a top of her bird. By now she was sitting with her legs crossed and her hands on each knee. “You can’t be tired already. Get up. We’re not done yet.”
When Aki did not move an inch, she held her hand out as the mouth on her left hand spat out a decent amount of clay down onto the ground forming into a clay clone of her likeness. Without waiting for a response the clone took off towards Aki ready to strike. Just as he rose to his feet, the clone spun around and connected its foot with Aki’s abdomen sending him flying back bouncing a few feet before landing on his back. The clone charged at him once again driving a punch into his cheek. Once the clone went for a third strike, Takiko held her hand up letting the clone know stop. The clay bird she was on lowered itself enough for her to slide off of as she made her way over towards her clone. “You’re not proving to me that you want this to be over,” Aki looked up at his mother as he wiped some blood from his lip. “Prove to me that you want this to end and I’ll stop son.” Takiko sounded near soulless and indifferent towards her child. She held her hand out directing the clone to once again attack her son. The clone made its way towards him ready to land a well aimed kick once again at this face. Instead of connecting with his cheek, the clone’s leg connected with Aki’s forearm as he blocked the attack. He stood up to his feet and took a swipe at the clone only to just barely making contact with it. Takiko had decided to make this one puff into smoke rather than explode on him. She could not send him home too beat up lest her husband give her another lecture for being too hard on their son. The young boy pulled out a kunai and jumped out from amongst the smoke ready to plunge it deep into whatever part of his mother’s body that he could reach. It was quick to tell by her displeased expression that he was being driven by his anger and was no longer thinking clearly. Well at this point she did not wish push him any further than was necessary. As her son made a swift movement with his kunai, she side stepped him and grabbed a hold of his arm tightly. After twisting his arm around she held the kunai up to his neck and smiled. “That was a nice try son. Here’s your prize. I found it before we got here.” She moved a jar with her other hand to his eye level to reveal a rare insect sealed in a bug carrier. Takiko released his hand so he could grab onto the carrier with a tiny smile on his face.
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Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2013 7:43 pm
Jounnin application for Konoha Iwagakure
The rain was spilling down from the clouds, each droplet of water could be felt on her arms as she walked down the muddy road. Each step would sink into the earth, making a quiet squishing sound before the next step would drown out the old one. A lady in a dark red robe, made darker by the rain, walked towards the village gates, the slight glow from various lights could be seen through the trees, she knew she was getting closer.
As the a large group of trees began to form in front of her, she looked around cautiously, the trees continued to thicken as she walked forward, making the area darker and darker, yet the rain was still able to pour through unhindered. With the snap of a twig, she stopped dead in her tracks, not making any sudden movements, but not allowing any area to go unchecked. Something, or someone was with her on this cold night. She slowly let her hand fall to a pouch on her left thigh, popping the button open to grab a kunai.
As she slowly removed it from the pouch, using her robe to hide her arm, she took a grip on it, running a finger down the hilt to confirm the feel of paper round the base of it. With a satisfied change in texture, she tightened her grip and continued walking. Her pace had only changed in that she walked a little slower, taking in the area much more thoroughly. Hearing the second snap of a twig, she spun around quickly, throwing the kunai towards the source of the sound. With a satisfying thunk, the kunai hit a tree somewhere in the darkness, and several treetops began to rustle. The woman smirked before several men all jumped out at once, burying a dozen weapons into the ground where she once stood.
All of them exchanged confused glances, several well built men in old armour, well into their age. They stood, withdrawing their weapons from the ground and looking around for the woman. One of the men motioned to an object buried in the ground, a small, dual pronged kunai with an odd looking tag on it. It wasn't explosive, so what could it be for? One of the men looked up to meet the confused gazes of the others. "Search the area then, make sure we find he--"
With a hard thud, a small boot collided with the head of the man holding the kunai, who was sent face first into the mud, tossing the kunai in the air. The dark robed figure, who had just sent a well trained mercenary's head slamming into the ground, grabbed the weapon and vanished in a flash, as if it was a ghost. One of the men drew his long sword, a terrified expression on his face. Then a larger man begun barking orders. "Everyone spread out and catch her! I don't care how you do it, just find this b***h!"
With that said, each of the men scattered in different directions, diving into the forest with their weapons drawn. A young man with a scruffy beard that hadn't quite grown in yet walked over to investigate the area where the kunai first landed. He walked around the tree slowly with his weapon at the ready. He took a look at the hole in the tree where the kunai made impact, it was gone now but the woman must have taken it, she couldn't be far. He turned around, to see a set of footprints in the wet mud, leading off deeper into the forest. "Ok, I can do this." He said to himself before running off in the directions the tracks led.
As the man continued walking, he spotted a small object in the mud, another kunai? The woman must have dropped it when she ran off. He bent down to pick it up, turning back to leave the way he came as the rain was washing away the tracks now. He didn't want to get lost, instead, joining up with the others would be his best idea. Maybe he could convince them that he killed her and took this as proof. The reward for this bounty was huge anyway, even if he couldn't get the bonus it'd be enough to live off for a long while.
An hour passed when the mercenaries regrouped. All of which brought back a single kunai that bore a resemblance to the older one. "So none of you idiots could find a single trace of her? What am I paying you morons for?!" The captain of the mercenaries was obviously annoyed, but let out an exasperated sigh. "It's been a long night, let's head back to the drop off point and hand in these Kunais as proof of the kill, everyone good with that?" The man looked around the group, who seemed to have no complaints.
As the captain turned around, several loud thuds were heard behind him. In horror, he turned around wide eyed to see the group of men laying on the ground, and the dark robed woman standing there once more. She pulled down her hood and gazed at him with an amused smirk. She reached over, taking her kunai from the man's hand. I'll just take that..." She whispered before turning around and walking away. "Have a good night, make sure to keep them out of the rain. Don't wanna get sick." With that said, the woman vanished, with nothing left but a puff of smoke where she once stood.
Most of the men in the small team of mercenaries lived on, most quit their job after the event and went to live decent lives, the captain ended up dying in his home, someone had set it ablaze and he managed to get his family out. But no one saw the woman in the dark red robe again, leaving nothing but a nickname "The Crimson ghost." Some say she's living as a high ranking shinobi in Konoha, some say she still wanders the forests.
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Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2013 7:58 pm
You cannot have two character's in the same village.
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Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2013 8:00 pm
II Blow Meh II You cannot have two character's in the same village. Keruin is gonna be this one, i'll just edit her as she isn't finished yet.
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Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2013 8:03 pm
Sexy Illusion II Blow Meh II You cannot have two character's in the same village. Keruin is gonna be this one, i'll just edit her as she isn't finished yet. Alright works with me. Approved.
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 12:13 am
I think I'll leave my application like that.
I figure if I go on a bit more, it might get a bit much,
Besides I'm sure you don't want to read it that much,
but I'm leaving the application like that and it's ready.
Sorry for not fighting or anything ; n ;
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 4:50 am
Alright so here is My Post ,Its for Jounin of Kirigakure: 1180 Words
The air In Kirigakure was saturated in blood, the smell of Dead bodies had contaminated the air and those same dead bodies littered the floor Dismembered, disfigured and literally Disarmed, It was a horrible sight that would make even the best of shinobi’s gasp only to have the taste of death enter their throats as they Inhaled. However one shinobi continued walking to move on, that shinobi Takuya Mitsuhide, He had seen one too many things to let Dead bodies and the smell get to him, it was all too familiar to him so he could just shrug it off as if it didn’t affect him in the slightest. As he continued to walk the Bodies on the floor seemed to become much more disfigured then the last. Takuya stopped for a moment and he glanced down at a body that he wouldn’t event know how to Describe, Disfigured wouldn’t even come close to the word, this Body was missing a Chunk of its waste, Both its arms the top of its head and the jaw of the body had been ripped clean of, He began to think to himself that this wasn’t the handy work of a human, No it was more like an animal or animals had did this, He began to run threw his mind on what animal s could do this Wolves ,Bears, Snakes, no it couldn’t be snakes because snakes Prefer to swallow prey Whole, With the thoughts of Dangers animals running threw his mind he continued forward, However he was dead wrong in thinking that I was just an animal as he would soon find out, As he walked further into the village he came to its sensors where dead bodies seemed to Pile up on each other ,no doubt that whoever or whatever did this was close, pulling out a kunai in his back pouch he crouched down and got ready for an attack, Suddenly from the west a Shuriken flew past his face cutting his cheek a bit, But before he could counter a huge wolf Came sprinting Towards him, Takuya Rolled to his stomach and Raised the kunai in the air, as the wolf went over him the kunai Sliced opened its Belly Covering Takuya in blood and other insides of the wolf, getting back up to his feet takuya was unaware that he had been surrounded, and the smell of blood would make the wolves surrounding him more Vicious. For a Moment takuya stood there and tried to think of an approach to the Situation, However his thought was interrupted by a wolf Ramming into his chest, Gripping the wolf’s under belly Takuya would use its momentum and pick the wolf up and dropping Down slamming the wolfs head into the ground effectively Cracking its skull immediately.
For the moment the wolves seemed to be Biding their time so Takuya took this moment to Hop to the roof of a house, From the house he could see almost everything ,But what he didn’t see were the wolves, where had they gone, Had they Retreated, No something else was up, everything was all too quiet, Takuya crouched down and slowly moved over to the edge of the roof, He peered down to the ground and saw nothing so he stood to his feet only to be tackled off the roof by another wolf, he fall wasn’t enough to Kill takuya or break anything but man did it hurt, Takuya got up to his feet Looked around the wolf was gone, that didn’t sit to well with him, Where did the wolf go and for that matter who was controlling them, these wolves were all to coordinated to be doing this of their own free will, No there had to be someone controlling them but who he thought, Once again it was too quiet so takuya got ready he had Kunai in his right hand he was crouching, Just then another wolf sprinted towards him takuya got ready the wolf Jumped over him, and takuya turned around only to see another wolf the wolf opened its mouth to bite takuya but takuya Stuck his hand down the wolves mouth and grabbed its tongue then he drove his hand down its throat and held it there, soon the wolf stopped moving and died due to lack of oxygen to its lungs, the other wolf that had jumped over takuya sprinted back towards him but takuya was ready, he launched the kunai at the wolf hitting it dead center right between the eyes, And before Another wolf could appear takuya jumped up and ran into the forest, there he hid in a tree and waited. Takuya peered through the tree and noticed a man walking into the forest he could here the man say “ god damn Kid he killed My wolves’……When I find him im going to rip him limb for limb and Devour his heart “ Takuya Hearing this immediately knew that he had been partially wrong It wasn’t just wolves eating people it was people eating people, this was much more then what he had initially Signed up for though he didn’t sign up for anything, Takuya glared at the man from the tree and began his attack, He pulled a kunai from his pouch and launched it at the man intentionally missing, he then silently hoped into another tree and launched another one, The man Became confused .
He began to think that there were more then one Ninja attacking him so he ran to the edge of the forest at least 2 more wolves trailing behind him, Takuya would follow until the man who would eventually lead him directly to the great naruto bridge, the bridge that connects the land of Waves to the land of Fire, Once the man was at the middle of the bridge takuya appeared in front of him, The man grunted and yelled “ you Little b*****d, you will play for killing my Pets “ Takuya simply Replied “ and you will for what you have done to the village “ The man being incredibly angry sent his remaining wolves after Takuya but takuya was ready the first wolf lunged itself towards Takuya’s chest but was easily killed off by a Kunai to its throat, which spilled its blood everywhere the remaining wolf Tackled Takuya to the ground and began its attempt to bite takuya’s throat but takuya Rammed his kunai into its neck repeatedly before tossing it to the side. Now the only one left was the Man before him, the man responsible for all the carnage and the man who had been controlling the wolves, Takuya raced towards the man but seconds before he to got him, Anbu had descended in font of takuya stopping him and 2 more anbu appeared behind the Man who had been controlling the dogs and Executed him, by slicing his head clean off.Once the mans head hit the floor the anbu collected his body and head and vanished the Remaining anbu escorted Takuya back to Kirigakure.
Hope its good enough biggrin
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 5:41 am
- Approved -
You'll need to make a NPC for the Jounin Now.
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 5:47 am
Metal Trsu - Approved -
You'll need to make a NPC for the Jounin Now. Is it Okay if i make Takuya the Jounin or Do you want me to make another Character period
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 5:56 am
XkiragamiX Is it Okay if i make Takuya the Jounin or Do you want me to make another Character period
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 6:06 am
Metal Trsu XkiragamiX Is it Okay if i make Takuya the Jounin or Do you want me to make another Character period
Alright and Thanks Ill quote you when changes are made
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 11:17 am
Is there a reason why Kumogakure isn't on the list? I'm not sure if they already have Jounin or not... but I was just wondering.
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 4:12 pm
xNew York Slavex I would like to hold a jounin / Chunin spot for a current Amegakure shinobi
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