Xevra
Thank you guys so much for your help! I held off working on this quest for a bit while waiting for the conformation that the amnesia sphere is okay. (By the way, if I cross any boundaries with her attacks, please let me know and I have no problem to change them!) Then I got a little lazy. xP So I've made some changes and would like to know how she looks now. :3
Sure, I don't mind giving some more feedback!
I'm honestly a little confused about what the effects of her attack will be. For instance, in the Sailor Stage you say that the short term memory loss will be determined by the player... but what does that mean for me, as a player? Do characters simply fail to absorb new information? Do they forget how to speak correctly? How to summon their attacks? Do they have flashbacks that confused them?
You can still leave it up to the player (I do the same with Pasiphae's attack), but providing some examples of what kind of things might happen when short term memory goes away would be helpful, I think. For example, in her Super Stage, you say both long and short term will be affected and give an example - forgetting people. That's something I can latch onto as a player and respond to accordingly.
Hope this helps!