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 Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 5:06 pm
RPer's Name: Utsukushi Torgrita
Character's Name: Namine Hyuuga [ I will make her when this is accepted, I want to get everything in order first ya know. She'll be a Hyuuga. ]
Character's Rank: Gennin
Wanted Bijuu: Kyuubi
What are your plans for the Biju? To not only further the story of my character when I make her, but hopefully become a well groomed Jinchuriki and a figure for the village to look up to. [ Maybe even Raikage at some point~? : D ]
What is a Jinchuriki's purpose? To become someone anyone can go to for help or look up to; to be able to overcome all the obstacles in her path to become a well groomed ninja, capable of protecting everyone she cares for; her village and everyone in it.
RP Sample
There’s always a certain problem in shoving someone over the edge, a sort of sense of danger, of excitement. To those causing the pain there’s a rush of adrenaline, a rush of the feeling that they’re superior, that they’re better in every way, more mature. Of course, that’s not really the case, seeming as they have to make someone else suffer, to cry themselves to sleep, to lose their self confidence, to see to absolutely become nothing. It became a high for one, but the crash for the other. It’s a horrible human behavior, one that’s been with humans for as long as we began to think, since we were primordial apes. One would think that with intelligence, and over time, one would lose this behavior and begin to mature… sadly this is not the case for a good majority of humanity, the race that rips itself apart slowly from the inside, worse than a pack of baboons.
This was the day they were pushing her to the edge, testing her completely to see how far she could go without snapping. They had misjudged however, they had shot too hard, too far. They hadn’t been thinking that she would snap so easily, being such a docile person in nature, who didn’t like fighting dummies let alone yelling at people unless she had to. But this was the day that everything had to come to the end, the hate, the bullying, she was tired of it. Even though the jinchuriki and their bijuu were supposed to be accepted, it never really happened. No one paid attention, just ignored it, found a scapegoat. It’s sucked, it wasn’t right, but then again the Jinchuriki went through this pain to make them stronger, their ability to take this pain is what made them special.
The kids surrounded Namine, chanting different names, trying to upset her. She looked around quickly, her head snapping back and forth as they surrounded her like wolves around prey. They reached out for her white blond hair and tugged, pinching her skin and chanting names, working her up, trying to get her completely worked up. Namine was able to ignore it for some time, but after a while it was clear that it was affecting her. Her red eyes teared up, the one eye with the scar over it still closed but tearing up as well. Why were these people so mean!? She was like everyone of them, just a normal kid why couldn’t they see that?
“S-Stop it!!” She yelled, then they began pushing her, in between them, back and forth like a hacky-sack. Eventually the bunny tied at her waist fell off and landed on the ground. Her eyes got wide and she felt the lack of the weight on her wait. “Kunko!!” She screamed out, and tried to bend down to grab the small white stuffed animal, a toy she had since she was small, when she was kicked on her stomach and thrown to her side, slamming her on to the ground. She curled up as the kids began to kick her while she was on the ground. She started crying lightly, the kids kicking and hitting her laughing.
“Are you just going to sit there like that you pathetic girl?” The voice came from inside her head, it caused her eyes to go wide. Where had the voice come from? What was it doing here? She felt like she was dropping, falling, when suddenly it stopped and she fell in to dark water. After she struggled for a bit she broke the surface and let out a loud gasp, breathing heavily to try and gain the breath back. She climbed up to the surface, her long blonde white hair soaked as she clambered up, gaining her balance on the surface as she had a million times before. She looked up, and in front of her was huge gate, behind the gate was nothing but darkness, a deep darkness that made a shiver run up her back. What was there?
“You are pathetic.. Namine.” The voice from behind the gate was raspy, Namine’s eyed went blind. She didn’t know this voice, but it scared her. Two glowing red eyes, almost like hers, but gigantic and with slit pupils, showed up behind the cage. She gasped loudly and stumbled back, her heart hammering in her chest. The thing behind the gate spoke again. “You shouldn’t let them push you around like that Namine, it makes you mad, doesn’t it?” The thing’s eyes glittered, “You want revenge.. don’t you? You want to make them pay, make them hurt.” Namine looked at him for a while and nodded. There was a hearty laughter from behind the cage as an orange, furred, hand reached out and touched her stomach. She screamed, falling to her knees, then darkness overcame her.
Namine’s outside appearance began to change as she laid on the ground, her eye, which closed tightly shut then shot open, was now red with a slitted pupil. Her teeth began to sharpen and extend as an orange like chakra began to bubble around her. It burned the skin of the kids kicking her and let off a slight hissing sound. Then kids stumbled back, fear in their eyes and panic in their hearts, as namine limply began to rise, the orange chakra completely surrounding her, then forming two ear like apparitions and a tail, one that looked like a fox. Her eyes were closed and she straightened up, her screams now subsiding. As her finger nails grew to claws, her eye snapped open again and she let out a loud scream, dropping to all fours and glaring at the kids that were now in a broken up circle around her.
The kids were screaming now, they weren’t sure what was happening, only sure that they had shoved Namine past the point she could stand. They looked at her, and could tell there was no real, rational thought in her mind, only pain and anger. They could tell she was slipping, falling, falling deeper in to the kyuubi. They weren’t fast enough to react as she launched forward, slamming a kid in to a wall with the chakra surrounding one of her hands , forming in to a claw and literally swatting the boy away like he was nothing more than a fly. This caused the rest of the kids to run in terror as Namine loomed over the boy as he screamed. Sooner or later ninja would come and stop her, seal the Kyuubi away, but she wasn’t thinking about that. She wasn’t thinking that she might be in trouble for letting her Bijuu go loose. But she just hurt too much! All this pain, she wasn’t able to handle it anymore! All of the bullying and name calling, the exclusion and the torture; she was tired of it all, she was going to end this. End it right here and right now! Just like she should have a long time ago!
“That’s right Namine… kill him.” The words that floated around in her head were accompanied by a shrewd laughter, malice and evil laced it to every chuckle. That stopped her, her clawed hand raised above his head, her angered glare looking down at him, when it suddenly snapped back in a normal human eye, the chakra drained away and left the cuts and scrapes and bruises on her healed. Her nails and teeth went back to normal and stumbled away.
The boy looked up at her, cuts with burns around them on his body, his eyes full of tears, wide, fearful. He scrambled up and away to tell the kage, his eyes wide, Namine collapsed back on her butt and put her head in her hands, letting out a loud sigh and feeling tears welling in her eyes. This was wrong… she had let the pain take over, she was a pathetic Jinchuriki. She got up and ran after the boy as well, beating him in to the Raikage’s office, her eyes wide and teared up. She ran in to the office, literally kicking open the door, starting to cry lightly. Her chest was heaving in heavy sobs, her eyes wide, tears freely flowing. Her white blonde hair was messed up, her red eyes wide, but with normal pupils now. Her shirt was torn up from the ruse of the kyuubi’s chakra, which still hung lightly on her.
The raikage rushed to her, her eyes wide, probably already knowing what had happened. Namine knew she was probably of a high enough level to be able to sense the Kyuubi’s massive chakra. She thought back on Kurama’s evil eyes, she remembered how they looked, and shuttered. He knew her greatest weakenesses, knew her thoughts, what she hated and disliked. He listened to everything, watched everything, knew everything. She found herself crying more, dropping to her knees as the Raikage started asking her question after question after question. She had only one answer to all of them, and she answered with a broken and pained voice.
“I… I hurt someone…. The… he… he broke free… he broke free… I’m so sorry Raikage-chan.. I-I’m so sorry.. “
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Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 6:13 pm
The Hyuuga in Kumo with the Kyuubi has been accepted, however you must explain how your character ended up in Kumo. Due to the Hyuuga's tradition of not allowing the Byakugan to fall into the hands of another village, we leave that explaining up to you as to how your RPC ended up there. Keep in mind, saying that you were "Abandoned at birth" is something that would likely not happen, due to the clan being so cultural, we trust that you will find an interesting way to explain it. If this is too much trouble, however, your RPC is more than welcome to join Konoha. Overall, we leave that decision to you.
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Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 6:25 pm
Thank you, and I will. ^ ^
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Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 8:05 pm
May I ask how you made a post like that on your phone?
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Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 8:09 pm
Some Witty Name May I ask how you made a post like that on your phone? Because, my good sir, the basic layout had been made and stored in my PMs for the longest time now. I simply never used it for much. As I said, Mileena is a character I enjoy using and I based this post off of her and the clan she was a part of in a different guild. Have you heard of TUP - The Unknown Path? That was the name of the guild. Are you insinuating something?
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Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 8:15 pm
You said you didn't know how it looked off of a phone, which is why I questioned it is all. Regardless of my question, I'm not insinuating anything, due to me being someone who writes RP posts on my phone, so I know how hard it can be to write a post off of one. At any rate, we're going to wait a bit before deciding, due to you already having a Jounin Uchiha within Konoha. We're trying to avoid giving a lot of power to a single RPer, and having both a Jounin Uchiha and a Jinchuuriki character so soon is something we need to consider. With that being said, your application will be placed on the back burner for a day or so while we talk amongst ourselves.
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Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 8:21 pm
Some Witty Name You said you didn't know how it looked off of a phone, which is why I questioned it is all. Regardless of my question, I'm not insinuating anything, due to me being someone who writes RP posts on my phone, so I know how hard it can be to write a post off of one. At any rate, we're going to wait a bit before deciding, due to you already having a Jounin Uchiha within Konoha. We're trying to avoid giving a lot of power to a single RPer, and having both a Jounin Uchiha and a Jinchuuriki character so soon is something we need to consider. With that being said, your application will be placed on the back burner for a day or so while we talk amongst ourselves. ................. I don't know what to say to this...... *Sigh* Forget it. I didn't really want to make a second character anyway............. v_v
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Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 8:25 pm
 Uchiha Roxas
Jellisha.
As disappointing as it is, you must be able to look around you and see our position as Moderators. We must preserve the balance of fairness in the guild and allow people to apply for things and not just the same people. You already have a Jounin and not just any Jounin but an UCHIHA Jounin with an SS Rank technique that you're going to learn and all sorts of other things, to give you a bijuu aswell would be somewhat unfair to the other members and show favouritism. Which would not be good for the guild as a whole.
So, I am sorry you feel this way about having to wait and see if anyone else applies for the Hachibi but we just think it would be better for the guild if we waited and saw what new blood could possibly take this bijuu.
Sorry for any inconvenience and thank you for your application.
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Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 11:31 am
RPer's Name: Seiji Kouga
Character's Name: Not made yet, But I'll be using Alexander
Character's Rank: Genin I assume?
Wanted Bijuu: Hachibi
What are your plans for the Biju? To restore the peace across the land and create a stong bond between host and demon. With a strong enough bind they will be strong enough to show thier purpose.
What is a Jinchuriki's purpose? To become known more than just a demon child. He wants to prove himself to his village and the world that just because you are different, does not mean your weaker.
RP Sample
Bold text For Hachibivoice
Color for character voice
Alexander walked into the darkened cave as his breath were deeper than normal, his eyes scanned the area around him as he gripped his shirt over his stomach, while his face easily expressed his pain. Talking a few steps within the cave he fell to his knees as he began to make grunts of pain. His free hand began to slam into the ground below as he was trying to get the mere thought of pain focused away from his stomach. “What the hell does it want!....Why can’t I control this!....This is really happening huh?....Sensei warned me about this!” He loudly thought to himself as he slowly began to push himself up, his pain began to grow with every resistance within his body. “You are an annoying one CHILD!....Why do you wish to resist me...You and I both know you were the one who had started this.” A voice inside his head called, not really knowing how it was able to speak he began to realize that the seal had begun to grow weaker with every second. Alexander knew what the creature was talking about, as this was basically his fault for not keeping his emotions in check. A demon child like him was looked down upon the village just for being alive, now the fact he could be showing signs of the beast within try to escape though him would only bring more emotions to surface. That is why he ended up into a cold dark cave like this one, nobody was around to hear his cry for help and to Alexander nobody would really care if he was alive or dead.
Finally getting back to his feet tears ran down his face as he would still be reminded of all the pain he had been though all growing up with this "Thing" inside of him. Who would do something like this?, what was their intent of doing so? And why Alexander of all people?. Questions, faces of those who looked down on him and anger surged throughout his body as he let out a large roar which had been mixed with the beast within. A red flow of chakra surfaced though his skin, some would just float up in small bubbles while the others would just surface in large clumps. His teeth clamped together as he could feel great power surge throughout his body, though knowing well enough it was not his to begin with. His body began to sake his vision began to go into a burl and his rage began to surface. Three tails would shoot out from his lower back and his eye’s would glow the color dark red and his veins began to rise to the top of his skin. “Why are you doing this!” Alexander yelled to the top of his lungs, though all that could be heard was just an empty echo that eventually grew dim after repeating some many times. His hands formed into a fist as he slammed it into large pillars within the cave, his sense of judgement was slowly fading from him now, the color red was all that he could see behind his rage. The factor of his large emotions was only amplifying the power of the beast within. It would at first seem that the beast was trying to escape but it was more or less being summoned by Alexanders emotions towards the world that has been rejecting his kind.
"Your feelings are the downfall of your skills child...I am now only just a tool that will be created by you and your emotions....The more you lose control of these emotions of yours the greater the overwhelming power will escape and will finally free me of this seal. Though getting out of here would be great it will only cause me more of an headache than what you are giving me now!...You need to get a hold of yourself..." All that would respond from Alexander was just loud roars, the echo would be enough to shake the cave itself.The fourth tail would finally surface as almost all of his human features would begin disappearing as a red cloak of charka would engulf his body which would also show features of the best within him. His had a very bright white glow within them as the roar of rage surface past his mouth. His two hands touched the ground into a crouched formation. His hands ripped into the ground clutching the mixed soil of hard rocks and soft dirt within them. The ground around him began to crack as his surging power was not at this point slacking off, the growl of the monster was growing louder within the moment. Alexander began trashing around the area smashing pillars of rock and anything that might be into his path. Two more tails would soon surface from his body which now made his sight go completely black the echos of a beast roaring could only be heard as his body felt numb and motionless. "Am i dead?...or have I been swallowed by my own power" His vision began to come to as he found himself into a different place that he was before, it was like an under water world and a gate was there in front of him. A tag covered the gate and two large gleaming eye’s hid behind the gate. His body shook from fear of this and he felt like he was drowning into his own despair. His hands gripped his throat as he though he was really drowning until he would actual gasp for air into this underwater world he had been into.
The monster began to laugh at his actions as his eye’s narrowed looking at Alexander as if he was looking into his soul. “I did warn you, Did I not?” The creature spoke as his sharp teeth glittered within the darkness. Alexander looked around as all that was there between the two was a gate, plus a small little tag was keeping that giant beast behind the bar. Alexander was a little confused at this point as he slowly began to walk towards the gate. How was such a small seal able to keep this giant thing behind bars, it was a little funny at first even though this was not the actual time to think of funny things. Alexander was now standing five feet away from the gate as he was looking the monster straight into the eyes at this point trying to see what he should actually do. He soon began to notice there was a small rip into the seal which had allowed the beast to surface so much power at a time. "What will you do now child?, will you open the door for my escape or will you finally start to fight this?...You may be different from the others, but that does not make you less of an ninja..." The voice called behind the gates. Alexanders head tilted to the side with a very confused expression onto his face. "Why are you giving me this advice? are you not trying to escape? I think you might be loosing your mind behind those bars.." Alexander spoke into a sarcastic tone towards the demon. The demon grew closer to the gate as he was basically able to reach his fingers out to touch Alexander, if it actually wanted. From this close Alexander could see the full detail of the eight tailed demon. It was very different looking that he would have imagined and it seemed to be like a bull shaped monster with a octopus style lower body. Alexander took in a deep sigh as he took another step towards it. "So what are you trying to do? Are you helping or escaping?"
He spoke into a curious tone towards the eighth tails. The demon snorted out a steam of smoke though its nose as it gazed at Alexander. " My only wish is for you to stop this constant emotional surges...It awakes me from my slumber....Get over baby fits and become a skilled ninja..." Alexander took a step back as the speech of the eight tails surprised him, at this point the demon was acting more of a friend than anyone else of the village. He soon took a big gulp as he reached into his and pulled out a paper seal to put on his skin whenever he felt the surge of the beast power awaking. His sensei give him this at his first day of class. Only thinking of him as a person who was also scared of him, he did not see what his true motives where for the actual seal. Alexander nodded as he smiled and looked up at the tailed demon. "You may return to sleep" After that said Alexander swamp up to place the new seal over the old one, the eight tailed slowly backed back and its eyes began to slowly close. "Till next time.. " His voice spoke into a soft tone. Alexander sat up gasping for air as he have seemed to returned back to normal now, looking around at the damaged cave all he could think about was what the demon said. Finally he slowly returned to his feet and began to walk out of the cave. The bright orange rays of the setting sun made him feel at peace while he just peered down at the village below with a small smile on his face as he was lost in thought. "I will become a great ninja...You just watch!"
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 2:32 pm
I apologize for the delay on my response, these past couple of days have been kinda busy for me.
As for your sample, I see that you have met the word count, however I'm afraid I must decline you. To be simple, even though that you have met the word count, your post was hard to understand, due to your grammar being somewhat difficult to make sense of. Because of this, we really need a strong RPer in both writing and being comfortable with a character's abilities to effectively use the Bijuu to its full potential. Thank you for applying, and once again, I apologize for having you wait for so long, for a decline. :l
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 3:34 pm
wow....Okay well i am done. Sorry for your time :/
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 4:42 pm
It's fine, no need to apologize, after all, you don't need a Biju to RP in WotS c:
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 4:46 pm
Thank you anyways, but I have quit the guild XD, Guess I am not into teh role playing level.................
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