PupSage
The Ghost of Xmas Awesome
PupSage
The Ghost of Xmas Awesome
Twere I a man of wealth of taste, I would merely add a stipulation of having a drowning penalty unless a water source is nearby, (water sky convergence) and other such water jutsu suitable as a substitute. Otherwise this a lovely little number and I see no trouble. You'd need to go into more detail on the contract in general though wouldn't you?
Also, if you really wanted to remove the limitation to water, just have them know the Ningen no Keshin Jutsu. It's old system, but I made it and since it's already passed should be easy enough to get passed again. I'm still counting my summon as knowing it. The training stages are the only thing that would need to be revamped anyway, so it's really just a technicality. It's a pet jutsu, but it allows summons to use it for reduced chakra cost and requirements, since they're even closer to humans already. It allows animals to take human form thus, I think, bypassing your problem yes?
Also, if you really wanted to remove the limitation to water, just have them know the Ningen no Keshin Jutsu. It's old system, but I made it and since it's already passed should be easy enough to get passed again. I'm still counting my summon as knowing it. The training stages are the only thing that would need to be revamped anyway, so it's really just a technicality. It's a pet jutsu, but it allows summons to use it for reduced chakra cost and requirements, since they're even closer to humans already. It allows animals to take human form thus, I think, bypassing your problem yes?
Well as I said earlier, this one floats, so it would theoretically drown in water.
3nodding Then there's no problem to discuss or fix, yes? Merely elaborate on this in greater detail and expand a bit more on the contracts and background, ideals, and history, and I'll be sold.
As above?
Looks good. Though you'd put the description of kurai under her background wouldn't you? Either way it looks good enough to me. I'll give a thumbs up.
Just a note, the quest that you need to get your hands on a contract is always real kicker, (Mine to get the Snake contract for Xen was a one hundred post delve into an evil madness inducing labyrinth) so you'll probably want to think up the details of your quest and such before you talk to your Kage about it, that way they have more to work with.
