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Hello thar! C: A few suggestions for you~

- Her natural ability is interesting (and hey, yay Death Note? XD) but I cannot think of a single time it would be useful to you in RP - the only times we've had true character death in TiH have been serious, dramatic metaplot moments that would never be revealed to anyone ahead of time. So, while it's interesting, I don't think you'll get to actually use it. sad So I would suggest picking something else that you will get to use actively and have fun with! Though I know it pulls away some of her motivation for the Avoidance trait - maybe she could just be afraid that someone's going to die without it relying on the natural ability?

(And this is me speaking from personal experience; back in the day I picked a natural ability for one of my characters that just... was never used. It suited the character perfectly! It made logical sense! And yet... it just never came up in RP.)


- I like her personality; she seems complete and well-realized. C: You've thought out why she has the traits she does, which is awesome. *brofist*


- I agree that with her character design, the horns would be a demon/monster trait, not so much a ghost one. I can't quite tell from the form if you want to keep the horns, but I'd advise you not to pin your hopes on it, ok? (I do agree with Nio that banshee is definitely the right species for her. XD No question.)

Here's how you can get your quest character! I'd just keep checking the main thread for info on customs/bribes/events. :>

We have a third banshee as well~

On natural ability... I would say that it reads as literally death note shinigami, if mostly because you call it shinigami/how it is defined. Perhaps just changing a bit around to something like 'Death premonition'.

As far as her seeing 'death' in relation to halloweeners- they technically 'die' in a sense a whole lot given how they dissipate/reform on a pretty common basis in some ways. And when they can live over what could possibly be... hundreds and hundreds of years... They don't so much die as they fade or simply choose to stop existing. This information is kind of hard to find but I think it bears thought due to how your girl is centered a bit on her ability to 'see' dates of death.

A few things seem less like personality and more like quirks (such as strength, singing, getting lost) I'd scoot them a little further down to help better identify them, and a small thing, ghosts are not really 'strong' as a race so I might suggest making not of how strong she is in relation to say, a monster, another type of ghost, an undead ect ect. I also will suggest giving her another virtue on a whole though, just to make her a bit more balanced.

Other then the things I've mentioned its a really good profile, and I hope you'll join up with RPing her in the event!