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 Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2011 10:57 pm
 ғeel free to call me. . .
Zidmon Bloodsmear
υnless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . .
Male
чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. .
Lets say.... 2500 years old
The υniverse welcomed me on. . .
Nov. 2
α lot of people say I'm. . .
A very strict vampire of a teacher, wanting nothing less from perfection from his students. After what happened to his life, don't think happiness complies to him. He gets pissed off easily and can even send a student 5 hours in detention. Though he does have a sense of dark humor once in a while.
can you blame me for what I am now? After all, I grew up. . .
With a curse of an abnormal skin tone when he was born. His parents never let him out due to his appearance and they would never let any mortal see him either, so he lived very lonely in his house with his family. His powers came to him when he read some forbidden books of spells in the library of his private tutor.
By his powers he was very needed in the clan at the war times between werewolves and vampires. He became a general and was also an instructor for wannabe wizards and warriors.
Since the war was over centuries ago, he became really bored. Drake's uncle is a friend of his and was told about the mystical academy. He gave it a thought and decided to go there and become a teacher.
αbilities? Yeah, I have . . .
He's a master of the Dark Magical Arts. He can do series of dark sorcery, hexes and alchemy that can make a man's life miserable. His magic leaks out of his body whenever he's in a bad mood, giving him a smoke-like aura around him. It can be an advantage to block the sun and he can use it to extend his spells but it drains his magic source and might end up weakening his spells if he's not careful. He's good in hand-to-hand combat and his scepter doubles as a bow stick.
I aםore. . .
○ Darkness
○ Sorrow of others
○ Classic Music
○ Good pupils
єvery time one of these come into my life, things just go downhill . . .
○ Failure
○ Noise
○ Being challenged or questioned
○ Repeating his words
○ Wolves, to be specific, WEREWOLVES
мy class isn't boring, really! I teach. . .
//unapproved yet//
чou see, I'm controlled by . . .
Vladimire_Vlod
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Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2011 11:34 pm
Sorry for the late reply!
Everything looks pretty good, but please give what you've written a good read - through. You have several simple issues with spelling and grammar that can be easilly corrected.
Also, please add a little more to his personality, it sounds more like a threat to students than a description of personal characteristics.
As for his class, many in the Magics & Weaponry Department have already been filled, but you are welcome to look around for an empty slot and fill out an application. The other departments have many more openings, if you're interested.
Lastly - Being a teacher, Zidmon Bloodsmear has the option of living in an Academy-owned teacher home, or having his own place to stay. Check out the Teacher / Privileged Student Housing subforum.
Please quote me once you've made the edits, or if you have any questions. Thank you!
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Rukia Arisawa Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 6:24 am
Spelling: no idea what your talking about Grammar: done Personality: thought so edited Application: I thought I saw the black magic room open. Place to live: with that attitude he should have his own place. Also I think Drake and his servants need to move out the dorm -I'm the only one active in there-, so maybe the vampires could live in one mansion.
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 8:10 pm
vladmir_vod Spelling: no idea what your talking about Grammar: done Personality: thought so edited Application: I thought I saw the black magic room open. Place to live: with that attitude he should have his own place. Also I think Drake and his servants need to move out the dorm -I'm the only one active in there-, so maybe the vampires could live in one mansion.
As for a home: If you'd like the Bloodsmears to live in a mansion, please supply a picture and/or description, an send it to Fuyu Muley titled "Bloodsmear House". Thank you!
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Rukia Arisawa Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 5:49 am
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 1:02 pm
That's much better! : D
Okay, last thing, I swear - be a little more descriptive about the types of black magic and hexes he can do~ (I should have mentioned it in the last one, sorry :c )
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Rukia Arisawa Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 8:08 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 3:47 am
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Sorry for the wait.
Thank you for your improvements - looking good now ;o
Zidmon has been sorted to now, I presume.
Vetkin has been approved and sorted into, hm, Eirannes.
A dorm will be assigned shortly.
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Posted: Sat May 25, 2013 3:45 pm
 ғeel free to call me. . .
Kiel Bloodsmear
υnless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . .
Male
чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. .
16
The υniverse welcomed me on. . .
Oct. 30
α lot of people say I'm. . .
Emo, he's quite numb in an emotional way and tends to have a frown or poker face all the time. Unlike most of his hothead relatives, he's quite calm and level headed. Quite shy and quiet, he's really nice once you get to know him better. He only fights when necessary and would never do it in anger.
can you blame me for what I am now? After all I grew up...
Was raised in a vampire family and is mom's favorite. Nearly neglected by his father after her sister was born, he was mostly loved by his mother but she was far too busy at her work. Much worse for him is that her little sister gets on his nerves all the time. If he tries to make her stop, his father solds him and not her. But when her mother is around, she'll be on his side.
He doesn't have much luck with making friends at his former school, he was constantly bullied and being ignored. His mother think its not good for him and it wories her that he's not happy.
When his weird powers came in, it didn't bother them about the disapearing thing but he couldn't stop making people sleep unintentionally, they knew that was dangerous. When they heard about this academy they had to send him here and to her mother, he may find a friend or two here.
αbilities? Yeah, I have . . .
Enhanced speed and knows karate. He is light on his feet so you can barely hear him coming. Can disappear in the naked eye and make people fall asleep if they look into his eyes long enough at night time.
I aםore. . .
○ Chocolates
○ Books
○ Spiders
○ Bats
○ Paranormal stuff
єvery time one of these come into my life, things just go downhill. . .
○ Bullies
○ His little sister
○ Accedentally using his powers
мy House, Dorm, and Homeroom are. . .
House: unapproved but guessing Burnar
Dorm:
Homeroom: Magics and weaponry
чou see, I'm controlled by . . . Vladimire_Vlod
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Posted: Sat May 25, 2013 3:54 pm
Note:
I change some things in Drake and Zidmon's profiles. So they may need to be reaproved again.
I deleted Vetkin.
Kiel is new and unaproved.
Since Muley seems innactive, nevermind with the Bloodsmear Household.
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