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Maybe because she is so energetic and hard working she could often overwork herself, or get in to more things she can handle? If so, it would be good to note how she deals with it - is she able to admit when she has bitten off more than she can chew? Which that answer alone could open up to possibility for another flaw, but the name for it doesn't come to mind right away......UMMMMM. @____@

DUNNO, just offering possible suggestions.

All and all, you have some really great beginnings. I can see something there, but you need to expound on all of those things. You know, how do something effect her daily life? The people around her? Are there draw backs to, say, not ranking in regards to her place on the swim team? Do they think she’s alright, or not pulling her weight? Are people put off by her energetic nature? When she’s sick, how does she get all of that energy out?

Loyal That end bit is a little off putting. Maybe try and reword it. It sounds like she’d drop someone like a hot potato if they tried to make her hurt someone. Wouldn’t she try and find a way to satisfy both sides first? Just a thought.

Other than that it looks really good!

Hey Lemon Mower! Huge apologies on the delay, you weren't meant to be skipped over. It was an oversight on my part, and I sincerely apologize!

ON THE CIVILIAN SIDE

The Untidy flaw isn't really clicking as a flaw right now. Flaws must be applicable in a wide variety of situations, but as this is largely contained to her bedroom, knapsack and locker - which isn't very applicable in many situations. These personality traits should have the potential to be seen in any RP they partake in.

Something to think about: It is said a few times in the profile that she keeps many to-do lists to keep track of everything. Does she frequently lose this to-do list and miss things she needs to take care of? How does her untidiness impact her outside of a general embarrassing messiness in her bedroom/locker/backpack?

ON THE POWERED SIDE

Looks fine to me!

Again, apologies on the oversight before!

Still need someone else to give this total approval, but I'm dropping off a trial stamp. :3



It looks like you've made all the changes to the concerns others have had and she looks good to me. I like the stinging/rash of her early attacks and thought I think the mention of sliminess is unecessary I know you've got it there to relate to the final attack, so it doesn't really hurt anything. heart

You will need to wait for another stamper to come and give it the final stamp. I'll see about nudging some of the other stampers though so hopefully it won't take too too long. Thanks so much for your patience, I know it's been a little while.