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 Posted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 10:13 pm
Nipples of Poseidon Would you like me to approve Kali for you? that would be enjoyable
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Posted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 10:31 pm
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- ғυчυ αcαםємч -
cяєω Whether or not you will feel offended, I will honestly tell you that parts of her biography and personality need to be improved and detailed. I will give you things to touch on, as some are too choppy and obscure.
The following for personality:
Why is she a quiet girl? What caused this or is it just personal preference, if the latter, please explain.
Why is not easy to tell her what to do? Is she headstrong, confident and independent or is she simply too lazy?
Why does she enjoy the library? Is she intelligent and humble, confiding within the library or just killing time?
The following for biography:
Why did she want to go to a normal school? Define normal, please?
Why is being a kittymorph so constrictive to her going to regular school? Is it the only reason she did not attend?
Why did she not hide her ears with a hat or hood if she dislikes being mistaken for a neko? Touch on that.
Why was she depressed? Honestly, she couldn't have been depressed because she couldn't go to public school - hell, I'm depressed because I do.
Why did her parents home school her rather than hiding her nature and having her attend regular school, or possibly, an institute for her kind?
How did they hear about Fuyu and why did they choose it of all places, why didn't they continue to homeschool or?
I'm very sorry about the negative feedback, once changed, I will be more than happy to approve. If you take this personally, it is important for you remember what I've told you to improve on for future characters.
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Posted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 11:06 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 11:21 pm
The bio is better than before, I've approved Kali.
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 12:40 am
Nipples of Poseidon The bio is better than before, I've approved Kali. what about house placement?
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 9:35 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 6:27 pm
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- ғυчυ αcαםємч -
cяєωKali now has a dorm!
Catian House, Carnation Dorm
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