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 Posted: Thu May 12, 2011 8:59 pm
Nio thanks so much for the criticism. I was sure there would already be an envy demon so I tried to make it as he's more of a descendant. Even played in a cousin vainglory. [[A lesser known sin]] But for good measure I will go investigate the other envy smile
Also he is totally open for plot derivation. Who knows how he'll feel or outlook in the future ^_^
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Posted: Thu May 12, 2011 9:15 pm
I have read up on Livius Addams by Eyulra. In no way does my Avarice Envy conflict with hers. In fact they look to be on opposite ends of an envious view. I quite like that.
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Posted: Thu May 12, 2011 11:24 pm
((I feel like such a newb I didnt even know you could get an Avarice demon after the event!! Then again I dont have any plans for getting a demon so.. ))
Well I do think you have something sturdy here to go with but yea agreeing on learning more about how he functions in RP. Personally I'd REALLY love to see him in action but I can't come up with a solo prompt xx; Ill probably be saying this a lot to people but dialogue is always nice to get a preview of! o/
Otherwise good luck to you!
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Posted: Thu May 12, 2011 11:40 pm
Ohhh good idea.
I will definitely fix something up for a dialogue example. I really hope they don't mind me using an avarice demon. If not I can change him into another type of demon race. But the same powers. They go outside the borders of an envy demon anyways o 3o
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 2:08 pm
I spoke to zoo about my slight alterations. All green lights on the natural ability tweak since it's so closely tied into the fear ability.
Need to look into the Chance Field of dice rolls I think.
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Posted: Mon May 16, 2011 3:59 pm
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Posted: Mon May 16, 2011 4:07 pm
I came here to crit and found.....nothing to crit... >w<
I love him completely. He is so unique and creative~
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Posted: Mon May 16, 2011 5:23 pm
Aww thank you. I just hope he get a mod review soon smile
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Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 5:31 pm
Bump for front page smile
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2011 6:59 pm
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Posted: Fri May 27, 2011 8:49 pm
-Pokes Guild-
Notice meee
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