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Apologies, Xaumeric.

In combination with waiting for some kind of permission to proceed from Lan and with work, I haven't been able to get to this yet. Since Lan has yet to get back online or respond to me, I'm going to go ahead and review anyway, since you've been waiting a ridiculously long time. My bad.

My Notes on your profile app:

• One of two things: Does your character have a surname? Takashi is a fairly common Japanese male given name, though it is also a surname. Given how you refer to him by that though, I can only presume it's the given name. So...does he have a surname as well? If so, please include that.
  
  
• The only other real thing I could pick up on was the bankai "stats". I didn't find anything you wrote that described the drop in statistics, so I guess I'm just left wondering if that was left "blank" intentionally or by accident. If it was the latter, please fill that in, or if in the case of the former, could you write that in? Clarification just so that we all know why there's nothing specified on the bankai "stats". ^^;;
  

Status: PENDING

Mmm, all righty.

I see you added some stats to the perfect bankai as well, guud guud.

The bankai stat allocation itself though, remains blank. So I still remain confused. gonk I'm terribly sorry for being rather dense (though it is 3 am and I'm not quite up to par, this is the first chance I've gotten since the initial reply. ^^:; ).

So could you explain to me or edit it, or write in somehow if that's intentional or not? ^^;;

Many thank you's again. (:

Status: Pending

Okies, I have done a bit of research, and I thank you for adding in the points for the bankai and perfect bankai.

However, with my research, it seems you're selling yourself short on stat points. ^^;;

http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=20136887

^With posts 4 and 5 in that thread, my research indicates you are entitled to 3 additional stat points in your bankai AND 6 additional stat points to use in perfect bankai. (I know you don't have them yet, but I thought I'd save the both of us trouble later on, and so that you don't sell him short. ^^;; )

Status: Pending

ok i think i got it down now lol

Full Name: Urara Muzenki
Nicknames: The Wicked Witch
Age: Unknown, Age is different whenever you ask her
Gender: Female
Birthdate: Unknown
Rank: E
AC Points: 0
Division: 9th
Seat:
Element: None
Riatsu Color: Black
Race: Shinigami




Quick List:

• Deceiving
  
• Flirtatious
  
• Enigmatic
  
• Observant
  
• Deviant
  
• Dangerous
  

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People are scared of Urara. Any person would be if all of your secrets could be brought to light, and Urara certainly will bring them out purely for her pleasure. A combination of a sadist and a masochist, she takes extreme pleasure through the suffering of others and in turn, suffering herself as her powers dictate.

Urara is also known to be a pathological liar, which she takes pleasure spreading rumors about other people, or weave a false tale. The reasons why she lies about others might be a result of her desire for corruption, though there have been no stories about others that did not bear some hint of truth to them. However, what is to be believed or what is useless information is difficult to decipher. Much of what she says is farce, though particularly about stories involving herself in anyway to the point of being ridiculous. It is implied that she seeks to keep her secrets to herself, and throw off any others who seek to pursue her origins. None have succeeded, but she welcomes anyone to try.

Despite such a crazed fetish and a compulsive desire to deceive, Urara is not classified to be crazy or mental unstable. Urara is very intelligent, surpassing many of her peers and out-thinking most of her superiors. As a person, Urara has no desire for money or power. She values knowledge and secrets above anything else, and many times blackmail others using secrets as a form of 'currency'. Extortion makes her unapproachable to most people, and thus often avoid her.

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Weaknesses:

• The extremely strong willed
  
• Poor fighting ability
  
• Secrets
  

Strengths:

• Extortion to get what she wants
  
• Knowledgeable in nearly any subject
  
• Manipulating people to do what she wants
  
• Inducing fear upon others
  
• Using seduction
  
• Exploiting mortal weakness
  

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Secrets: (optional)

• UNKNOWN FACTOR
  

Fears: (list at least three)

• Sunlight?
  
• Love?
  
• Death?
  

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Motto: "Let me help shuffle off your mortal coils... Ahahaha..."

~~~~~~~~~Looks~~~~~~~~~

BUILD
Built like a voluptuous model, there is almost no sort of imperfection upon her body that do not draw the eyes of both men and women to her. Standing five feet and seven inches tall, she isn't generally noticeable in height, but her heels and her long hair creates an illusion to her real height. A wide bust, along with a slim waist and wide hips define a sexy figure, gartering the attention of all around her, despite her wicked personality.

HAIR
Scarlet locks flow over her head in a wild mane, seemingly to ignore earth's gravity, flowing around her as if she were swimming through an ocean. Despite being rather untame, her hair is unnaturally soft, as if her luscious locks were made off spun cotton.

FACE
Urara's face is a beauty to behold. A heart-shaped face rests above a long, elegant neck. Her long, thin nose moved in a deep slope in the center of her face, bearing two pouty lips, hiding a wicked smile with elongated fangs. Light freckles decorate the bridge of her nose and under her eyes, giving a sort of girlish beauty to such a smoldering temptress.

SKIN
Pearl polished ivory skin wrap over her body with such delicate care that it seems like a single touch would shatter her skin like porcelain. However, those that were blessed enough to touch her skin would find it softer than cream, and smoother than silk.

EYES
Fox-shaped eyes colored in bright amber stare at others with a wicked gleam, as if waiting to pounce upon unsuspecting prey.

CLOTHES
Calling her dress-style ostentatious would be much too modest for Urara. Dressed in skin-tight, purple latex, she's adorned more of a dungeon setting with whips and chains rather than the noble work of a shinigami. Despite emphasizing her womanly features, it only tantalizes men more as the cuts of the latex reveal everything but the naughtiest details that irk the libido of males. Because it draws so much attention to her, it's required that she wears a rather loose fitting robe, though it does nothing to tempt the hearts of men, as it still leaves nothing to imagination.

~~~~~~~~~Autobiography~~~~~~~~~

PAST

No one knows for sure who Urara is, let alone where she's from. Records indicate however that she has been active in Seireitei for the pass few decades working as both a scholar and the local freak of nature. Rumor has it that Urara is actually a being from the outer frontier lands, and is actually a monster in disguise of a shinigami, though there has been no proof of such matters. All that is known is that she isn't quite normal from the average Shinigami. Some believe she suffers from a mild form of vampirism, though that could be mere another fabricated story that she helped perpetuate.

During the plague years, Urara was never inflicted with the disease. It is believed that the suffering of hundreds of shinigami kept her so well fed that the virus could not host themselves upon her body. On a constant bases, the suffering of those inflicted with the plague, along with the sadness, the sorrow, the fear, the dread, and the impending doom of thousands left a gigantic feast for her to revel in. Others believe that she actually knew about the disease, and thus knew how to properly protect herself from the plague. Other, more spiteful members of Seireitei would say that she brought the plague.

As for a reason why the Soul Academy would accept such a loathsome creature among their honored ranks is unknown, much like everything else about her.


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PRESENT

Current Residence: 9th Division
Occupation: City Stalker

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~~~~~~~~~Stats~~~~~~~~~

Base Stats
Strength: ♦
Technique: ♦♦♦
Intelligence: ♦♦♦♦♦♦♦♦
Defense: ♦
Agility: ♦♦♦♦♦
Stamina: ♦♦
Reiatsu: ♦♦♦♦♦


Bankai
Strength: ♦
Technique: ♦♦
Intelligence: ♦
Defense: ♦
Agility: ♦♦
Stamina: ♦
Reiatsu: ♦♦


Perfect Bankai
Strength: ♦♦
Technique: ♦♦♦
Intelligence: ♦
Defense: ♦
Agility: ♦♦♦
Stamina: ♦♦
Reiatsu: ♦♦

~~~~~~~~~Techniques~~~~~~~~~

SS-rank Techniques
(Have to be S-rank at least to have one)

S-rank Techniques

A-rank Techniques

B-rank Techniques

C-rank Techniques

D-rank Techniques

E-rank Techniques

Class Unknown

Empathy - Empathy is a word often used in the light of good. However, nature is not so simple, as the purpose of the word is both white and black. Urara trends into the dark side of the woods, relishing the demise of her enemies using their own memories and mental state to attack them. Combined with a light sense of telepathy, Urara opens the minds of those around her sub-consciously, unhinging memories, feelings, thoughts, and senses that she can read. She can evoke these feelings, and in turn, use them against her opponents.

Truth - Urara reveals a truth about the opponent, usually in the form of some kind of insult or revelation that they do not wish to be known. Evoking any emotion from these words trigger a mental coil that causes physical pain relative on how strong the reaction is. This ability attacks both the conscious and the subconscious mind, thus the truth will hurt, as long as the person affected does not gain closure over their problems or still have lingering emotions with it. While it is possible to block this attack, it requires either a diamond-hard will, or one-hundred percent admittance in body, mind, and spirit of their truth.

Empowerment - Urara has the power of Empathy, thus not only does she know what her opponents feel, she also shares in their feelings. Different emotions give off certain vibes of energy which she feeds off of, empowering herself to be faster, stronger, and more lethal. However, her personality tends to enjoy suffering the most. While others dwell upon their delicate, more sensitive emotions, Urara revels in such pain due to her rather masochist behavior.

~~~~~~~~~Racial Powers~~~~~~~~~

Zanpakutou
Zanpakutou Description It is not one, but two, seven-inch serrated blades, now attached to her shoes, acting as stiletto heels. With impractical in a fight, her flexibility makes up for such an odd weapon,

Shikai Name Uriel

Shikai Release Phrase "Let us feast upon their torment."

Shikai Physical Description Years of suffering becomes unlocked, and now both her fingernails and her blades excrete a violate purple energy known more commonly as chaotic energy.

Shikai Abilities



Bankai Name Uryll

Bankai Release Phrase "Scream for me, the pleasure is all mine."

Bankai Physical Description Much like her shikai form, the suffering that lies dormant within her swell into malevolent energy which takes a physical form. Now her entire hand is coated in such power, and the concenterated energy takes the appearance of rotating sawblades that hover above the back of her hand, and below her palm. These blades spin with quiet speed, spreading the chaotic energy, making it appear as if her hands were ignited by a purple flame. Urara is much more lethal in this state, as she's empowered further by chaos, unleashing a violent beast within the beauty.

Bankai Abilities



Zanpakutou Spirit

Spirit's Name Ursula

Spirit's Physical Description Ursula is a rather ugly creature, quite contrasting to the weilder. Her heavily scarred, pale flesh is the only white thing upon her world, Silvery locks cover over her eyes that glow with an evil yellow gleam. Instead of hands, her fingers grow out into razor sharp claws, painted black from the blood of something unknown. She's poorly dressed, wearing only sparse clothing that have been shredded and ripped in many places, no doubt from her own doing.

Spirit's Personality Despite her ugly features, Ursula is not a malevolent being. Actually, she's quite shy, and has a good heart toward others. Thus is the reason she doesn't interact with others due to her hideous appearance and a constant thirst for pain. To sate her hunger, she often cuts herself, just to keep herself from harming others around her.

Spirit's World A void, flat landscape where the ground, sky, and everything else are colored black. Light is nearly nonexistent, save for the occasional break upon the black clouds, giving way to a dull gray sunlight to shine upon such unholy lands.

You also missed that for stats, each category is limited to five points at the beginning...unless you're allowing that with her. >.>

((If I might make a small note to Urara's personality section, and this is just a nit-picking thing:

"...taking extreme pleasure through the suffering of others."

That's a sadist, not a masochist. If she would take unusual levels of pleasure from enduring suffering and tortures of varying kinds, THEN she would be a masochist. exclaim ))