Tripp_Trapp
He sounds like an interesting character. XD My Questing character, Everett would get into fights with Melas all the time and tend to avoid Phos and Damien. I sense intense and fun rp's with this one but it sounds like fun!
Maybe for the four pairs of the eyes of death is it kills the senses for a short amount of time, leaving them mute, blind and deaf? Maybe for 1 turn. Enough for a strike or a quick get away. :3 Just an idea.
Maybe for the four pairs of the eyes of death is it kills the senses for a short amount of time, leaving them mute, blind and deaf? Maybe for 1 turn. Enough for a strike or a quick get away. :3 Just an idea.
Lol Melas is going to get into fights with tons of students, this I can foresee very easily. 4 EOD a critically debilitating gaze.... thats something to consider. Looks like i'm going to have to do a little research on Everett in the near future.
Blade Kuroda
Oh wow there is a LOT here. XD
I can't really think of anything much critique-wise, but here's a few questions just out of curiosity...
About how often does he switch from one persona to another?
Does he have any particular goals?
How do each of the personas feel about the other two?
And.... Which persona is responsible for calling Jericho 'puff'? XDD
Good work though!
I can't really think of anything much critique-wise, but here's a few questions just out of curiosity...
About how often does he switch from one persona to another?
Does he have any particular goals?
How do each of the personas feel about the other two?
And.... Which persona is responsible for calling Jericho 'puff'? XDD
Good work though!
heh heh, when I write, I write.
Well he switches quite often, I could say..... 4-5 shifts in a day, and possibly up to 10 to 20 if there is an internal debate.
His current goal is to gain a better control over his personalities so he could return back to his clan and show his elder how much hes improved and probably take then reins, but as the years go by I think hes going to change his latter goal.
How they feel about each other? this requires quite a bit of explaining.
Phos has no hate for his brethren, he really loves them and believe that deep down, they are as much a softie as himself. he's very optimistic about that.
Melas? Oh he LOATHES them, but none more than Damien. there's jealousy that Demi is the foreman and he's backup. He wants it to be the other way around as for Phos, he thinks of him as an annoying fly that needs a permanent muzzle.
And Lastly Demi: He may not enjoy having them around, but he knows he has to tolerate them. Always the indifferent one that Demi.
Oh Puff? that started with Melas if it wasn't obvious, but seeing as the other two overheard it, they felt it was suitable and decided to use it for themselves. just note that its only Demi and Melas that say it in a condescending manner, Phos says it out of love, he sees the inner Puff in Jericho.
Most of the time its Melas talking on Groanspring.
It takes alot of writing because basically, its three people in one package. FUN!
