JUST A NOTE: Pippin will need to fulfill RP requirements before he can assume his human form in RP -- these are the same as the Super -> Eternal requirements for a senshi. Until then he's ICly stuck as a cat, and may not even be aware that his kind can assume a human form until he sees another cat do it.
In addition to this, guardian cats know what their duty is right when they awaken. Pippin would know from the get-go that he is a guardian cat destined to awake, teach and protect Sailor Senshi -- it's pretty much instinct for him. It would be extremely unlikely that he would have delusions of being a human boy in light of all this. He could, however, dream and
wish that he could be a human instead and still have all those odd behaviors.
On to the crit~
Friendly and
Loving should be merged into one virtue. They're both about how he's super affectionate and willing to cross physical boundaries to communicate his affection for people.
Along with this,
Charming doesn't seem to be very much of a virtue at all! Virtues need to have a POSITIVE affect on others. Here he is lying and using his charm in attempts to get what he wants, which isn't exactly something people are going to like him for. This might be better as an expansion on his
Greedy trait -- you already have him wanting anything he can get his hands on, so trying to charm people to get what he wants would be a part of that.
Talkative and
Pushy are also too similar to really work as separate flaws: both of them talk about how he's really wrapped up in his ideas and viewpoints to the point where he really doesn't let others express their own. I would merge these and name the whole thing
Pushy or
Overbearing.Pathological Liar is misnamed -- a pathological liar is someone who lies to psychologically manipulate people, and this does not seem to be what Pippin is doing here. He's more of a
habitual liar than a pathological liar. XD Just pointing that out~
You will need to add a couple new virtues in order for Pippin to be properly balanced. I would take another look through his hobbies to see if there is anything virtue-worthy in his motivation behind them, or try and see if you can put a positive spin on some of his flaws!
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