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 Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 6:16 pm
Alright, I got my helpful advice biggrin . So what about you guys?
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Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 6:27 pm
Yeah, I did. Thorn's advice is awesome. One of these days, I should try that myself! :>
Moon, I found the most helpful site! I'll post it here tomorrow!
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Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 6:36 pm
Ahhh, tomorrow? But I'm to impatient for that stuff xd and we could have homework. But ah well, if I have to wait, then I will and I have another question if you guys don't.
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Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 6:50 pm
Well, if you ever get on, here's the site. This teaches you about common cliches, and the definition and sometimes, even how to avoid it.
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Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 7:26 pm
Okaaayy, but where do you go on the site? Also, what do you guys like better when you start a book for the first time, a description of the scene or have it start off with dialogue?
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 11:36 am
I persinaly enjoy emersave story lines the more I can connect with the chiriters in there situation the better I enjoy it a story line with lots of free dome is good too cause it lets the readers mind wonder as to "what would happen if....." and finish the blank there its hard to do but like with halo some chiriters in the story have set paths thay take and serten things thay do but minor chiriters it dosn't have every step of there jerny so in rp's or in my own head I can have fun with thes
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:48 pm
Moonstorm Eclipse Okaaayy, but where do you go on the site? Also, what do you guys like better when you start a book for the first time, a description of the scene or have it start off with dialogue? You click on the blue letters that say the site. DX And also, I prefer when there's a description about the scene. I honestly don't know why.
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 6:25 pm
I know you click the link, but where do you go after that?
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 6:31 pm
Oh, just a show you love (or hate XD) and then scroll at tyhe examples they have, and just click one.
That is what I usually do. XD
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 7:11 pm
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 7:42 pm
Yay! This site is just what I needed! Danks! (I think you now the tone twisted )
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 7:51 pm
You know me too well.... Your welcome!  YES, SOUTH PARK!! XD
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 8:17 pm
AH! How do you get it to show the pictures?
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 8:46 pm
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 8:55 pm
Oh Gald those are HILARIOUS!
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