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ORIGIN_Shurelia
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 2:32 pm


Hallie Neko-chan
Shurelia, if you want, for some of those hymns I can help. I could possibly add in some Hymmnos as well (depending on how it's phrased, of course).

Since I'm better with dark, angst, and angry lyrics and stories (seriously, you should see my fanfiction lol) I can listen to some of the music and make some suggestions. Not saying that they'll be better than yours or anything, just supply some help. Possibly you could help me too? LOLz

You and Sean both may feel free to replace any lines with hymmnos but I want my originals intact 3nodding

What do you need helps wif? biggrin
PostPosted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 4:18 pm


Omg I can't believe I'm gonna tackle DE=FRAG this soon gonk This hymn will be loosely based by the length of HAIBANATION. (What I mean is HAIBANATION had "days" as the versus. DE=FRAG will have hours as verses) This hymn attacks and separate data stored, it is a very dark and dangerous hymn. (not to mention loooooong!) If the hymn is completed the target data is permanently destroyed and cannot be restored. The use of this hymn is to assimilate humanity into the Fau Pira and delete them. The process requires several steps(verses) to download the Reyvateils minds inside the Fau Pira into Ar_Tonelico. Then ascend the minds of humanity into the Fau Pira to begin the deletion of mankind. No matter how far along the hymn progresses if it is not completed all data backtracks to it's original form. I had originally planned for this to be 10 verses but that just not happening biggrin Purely because I can't think of enough steps so quit nagging scream jk 4laugh


EXEC_DE=FRAGMENT/.

Hour one

On the first hour I release upon you,
the halting of the earth, sky and water.
[I execute the first hour]

My seeds have lost all the nourishment I once provided,
soon they will wither and the earth shall too.
[My precious seeds I created]

With too many sins done by man I cannot forgive,
I will collect retribution for the gift of life I gave.
[Retribution is the only way]

[your sin is too great I must erase it from existence][I will start the world anew with the Goddess][humanity is too tainted by selfishness and greed I must remove it from existence][For so long we have given you life and protected you][only to have you defile and corrupt our gift][I can no longer tolerate the sins of humanity][thus I shall cleanse the server and remove all trace of your sins][Begin system process authorization code: Rhaplanca Fawei Ansul]

Ah----------------
There is no mercy for the merciless. Take your sin and fall into despair, accept death.
Ah----------------

[With the fall of Fa Ciel comes the fall of humanity][Ar_Tonelico will stand alone as an empty shell][Only then can I restore the it to its rightful glory][System process locating data][beginning interface and connecting to Rhaplanca]

My seeds that I have cherished for so long, spurned by the very people I wished to protect.
[I grew them for you only to have them burned to ash by the very people I wished to protect.]
You deserve to rot with them, I have no sympathy for a world that is already dead.
[Together you will perish, a bittersweet and just end for a world that is already dead.]

Fall and perish,
Rot and decay.
Fall and perish,
Rot and decay.
Fall and perish,
[Analysis complete]
Rot and decay.
[Data downloaded to server]
Fall and perish,
[Analysis complete]
Rot and decay.
[Data uploaded to Rhaplanca]

After all I have sacrificed for you, you still insist on resisting?
Your death is imminent now, accept your inevitable fate!

The first hour has ended, the next hour has begun.
[verse one complete]

My lust for retribution continues, I will be satisfied.
[verse two begin]


Hour two

On the second hour I release upon you,
the revenge of your puppets.
[I execute the second hour]

Reyvateils mistreated unjustly by your hands,
now arise and take retribution.
[Fau Pira Dependents arise]

The Reyvateils that you used to gain power,
are now the very cause of your weakness.
[I give you power]

[You can be forgiven by repenting][help the Goddess cleanse the world by uniting with me][Now is the time to seek revenge on your captors][Accept the power I bestow upon you and turn on humanity][Show them the same torture anguish they gave you][Stand against humanity to create a utopia for Reyvateils][Without their corruption we could live alone in peace][With nobody to abuse us we can unite to make our own world][begin system process authorization code Rhaplanca Fawei Ansul]

Ah--------------
Together we can cleanse this world, accept your freedom and sing along side me.
Ah--------------

[With the cooperation of the Fau Pira we will rise above][Ar_Tonelico will stand alone full of our power][Only then can I restore the it to its rightful glory][System process locating data][beginning interface and connecting to Rhaplanca]

Holy beings kept down for so long, forced to serve the very people that harmed you.
[We protected and nourished the humans that turned on and destroyed our utopia.]
You deserve a life free of restraint, together we shall start anew and live in harmony.
[Force humanity to submit and suffer for the sin of destroying our world.]

Arise and unite,
sing and conquer.
Arise and unite,
sing and conquer.
Arise and unite,
[Connection Complete]
sing and conquer.
[Data uploaded to Fau Pira]
Arise and unite,
[Connection Complete]
sing and conquer.
[Link established to Fau Pira.]

Now is the time to sing with me, add your power to mine.
Take back what is yours and destroy humanity with me!

The second hour has ended, the next hour has begun.
[verse two complete]

Our lust for retribution continues, we will be satisfied.
[verse three begin]


Hour three

Upon the third hour I release upon you,
The betrayal of your invention.
[I will rewrite the Fau Pira]

Your coveted Fau Pira will resonate with Ar_Tonelico,
and transfer over the minds of your former puppets.
[F.P.D.s will be reunited with Ar_Tonelico]

I will strip the Fau Pira of it's sin-born power,
and render it useless to you.
[Reyvateils return to Ar_tonelico]


[If you long to be reunited with our Goddess][Accept your rightful place inside of Ar_Tonelico][Allow you minds to assimilate back into the server][Our utopia awaits you within Ar_Tonelico][accept my gift and connect with me][We will be as one and pass judgment upon humanity][protect our new world and trust in your role][Begin system process authorization code: Rhaplanca Fawei Ansul]

Ahhh--------------
Doesn't the warth of the server feel good? Together we will be unstoppable.
Ahhh--------------

[Within the server our power is growing exponentially][Ar_Tonelico will stand as a beacon of power][Only then can we restore it to it's rightful glory][System process locating data][beginning interface and connecting to Rhaplanca]

Incomplete Ar_Tonelico, who has stood unfulfilled for song long.
[We shall re-write you and create a true utopia]
Within your server we shall live free in harmony with you.
[Accept our hearts and minds into you]


(At this point in time Rhaplanca has difficulty singing the hymn, despite her authorization code allowance thus far, without the authorization code of the administrator, the process of downloading the Fau Pira contents into Ar_Tonelico is slowed and takes a toll on Rhaplanca's duration and body. However, the download continues.)


Accept and welcome,
gain and strengthen.
Accept and welcome,
gain and strengthen.
Accept and welcome,
[Download Complete]
gain and strengthen.
[Data uploaded to Ar_Tonelico]
Accept and welcome,
[Download Complete]
gain and strengthen.
[Assimilation received into Ar_Tonelico.]

With our power unified we can erase humanity.
Join your desires with mine as we remove their existence!

The third hour has ended, the next hour has begun.
[verse three complete]

Our lust for retribution continues, we will be satisfied.
[verse four begin]


Hour four

On the fourth hour I release upon you,
the ascension of mankind.
[I execute the fourth hour]

I will drain your life into the empty Fau Pira,
accept it's alluring light.
[I will lead you]

Do not fear the loneliness of your undeniable fate,
you shall all be together.
[Accept the light into you]

[Ascend as one into the Fau Pira][My sisters and I, along with the Goddess, will be free][You have spurned our love and selfishly abused us][We had the chance to live in harmony together][But with your negative thoughts and distrust][Harmony is unattainable and we can not live in unison][Begin system process authorization code: Rhaplanca Fawei Ansul]

Ah----------------
Accept unconsciousness and assimilate. Together you will ascend into the Fau Pira.
Ah----------------

[Humanity will enter a higher state of being in the Fau Pira][Ar_Tonelico will stand alone as our utopia][Only then can we restore the it to its rightful glory][System process locating data][beginning interface and connecting to Rhaplanca]

Do not regret your sins now, soon they will seem to have never occured at all.
[Allow the light of ascension to bring you stillness and calm.]
I will allow your demise to be painless, as a last act of love you won't feel a thing.
[Together you will accept the unconsciousness and your fate.]

Sleep and dream,
Ascend and die.
Sleep and dream,
Ascend and die.
Sleep and dream,
[Download complete]
Ascend and die.
[Data downloaded to Fau Pira]
Sleep and dream,
[Download complete]
Ascend and die.
[Data uploaded to Rhaplanca]

Are you grateful for my love and mercy now humanity?
Death is your retribution to make your sin known!

The fourth hour has ended, the next hour has begun.
[verse four complete]

Our lust for retribution continues, we will be satisfied.
[verse five begin]


Hour five

On the fifth hour I release upon you,
the deletion and extinction of man.
[I execute the fifth hour]

Humanity will no longer be an influence on our world,
finally their existence will be removed.
[We shall live in harmony]

With too many sins done by man I cannot forgive,
I will collect retribution for the gift of life I gave.
[Retribution has come]

[your sin is too great I must erase it from existence][I will start the world anew with the Goddess][humanity is too tainted by selfishness and greed I must remove it from existence][For so long we have given you life and protected you][only to have you defile and corrupt our gift][I can no longer tolerate the sins of humanity][thus I shall cleanse the server and remove all trace of your sins][Begin system process authorization code: Rhaplanca Fawei Ansul]

Ah----------------
There is no mercy for the merciless. Take your sin and fall into despair, accept death.
Ah----------------

[With the fall of Fa Ciel comes the fall of humanity][Ar_Tonelico will stand alone and whole once more][Only then is it restored to its rightful glory][System process locating data][beginning interface and connecting to Rhaplanca]

My seeds that I have cherished for so long, spurned by the very people I wished to protect.
[I grew them for you only to have them burned to ash by the very people I wished to protect.]
You deserve to rot with them, I have no sympathy for a world that is already dead.
[Together you will perish, a bittersweet and just end for a world that is already dead.]

Fall and perish,
Rot and decay.
Fall and perish,
Rot and decay.
Fall and perish,
[Deletion complete]
Rot and decay.
[Data not found]
Fall and perish,
[Deletion complete]
Rot and decay.
[Data not found]

At last______your retribution has ended and our utopia is born!
------[Finally]-----------------------------[our utopia is born!]





[*HUGE SIGH OF RELIEF!* DONE!]

ORIGIN_Shurelia
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 3:07 am


** EDIT: Recieved help from Sean on my monster of a Binasphere. Thank you! x3

Okay, so, I'm really tired and logging off right after this. I stayed up really late finishing this off. I'm pretty sure there are at least a few errors in it but please be nice to me.

This hymn is in complete opposition of EXEC_DE=FRAGMENT/.

The feeling in this song is Hikari attempting to plead for the lives of the people dying from DE=FRAGMENT/. "Arguing" with the Hymn. She is using the Hymn to purify and take control over the Fau Pira once again. However, in the middle of the song, you see the negative words she is singing, which is signifying that someone is attempting to hack her as well. She basically pulls out the big guns to reverse the Hymn using Binasphere. Afterwards, she is accepted warmly as the Administrator of Fau Pira once again. However a Hymn such as this is really draining, especially on a Third-Generation Reyvateil.

RESON_MODE_DEBUG/.


Turn back the hands of time and start over from the beginning;

[In a concentrated trance, I execute a song]
[Rrha ki ra exec hymme]

Rewind and revisit days long gone into the far past.

[I execute the purification of Fau Pira]
[Exec ini tes Fau Pira]

There is so much of life we missed. If you would give us just this one chance…
Maybe we could find a place for us all to exist?

[Why…]
[Whai…]


Because, we are lost. We need a world where we belong to.
Every living thing needs a place in this whole wide world; a home to return to.
And the world needs every one of us, for it to continue traveling across this vast universe;

**(In the back round of this repeated)
[In this concentrated trance, I execute a purifying song within Fau Pira]
[Rrha ki ra exec hymme ini enter Fau Pira]**

Everything is relative…

[Unaccepted]
[Na ates]

Foolish children, why should you be allowed to exist here?
In this wondrous place, certainly there is a place more fitting?
Inside a purgatory, inside a tomb? Oh little children, let yourselves be destroyed!

[Sacrifice!]
[Salavec!]


No, I won’t give up! We will continue on living! I sing for many lives covered in darkness and despair!
We will fight! We will prove our worth!

[Sacrifice the girl!]
[Salavec anw wim!]


To my dying breath I will never let you! I will stop you with my song!

[In deep concentration I sing to save God‘s beloved children!]
[In this concentrated trance I execute the song of purification for the defiled world!]
[=>WAS RRx HA KI RA KI RA SONx WE EXx EC SUx WAx HYMx ME NT MEx
VALx WA LEx NAS TES BEx DIAx SEx JA CIEL
EXEC hymme 2x1/0 >> 0110] **(Repeated four times and then repeats continuously in the back round)

[I am happy to accept you]
[Wee yea ra ates yor]


This is our power! This is our will! Countless lives resonate within me! Listen to their voices crying for freedom!

Return everything to the way it was! Back to the beginning! To the way it’s supposed to be!

[I am very happy to accept you]
[Was yea ra ates yor]

[In a concentrated trance, I have become Fau Pira]
[Rrha ki ra chsee Fau Pira]

[In deep concentration I separate myself from Ar Tonelico…]
[Was ki ra pakz mea tes Ar Tonelico…]

Turn back the hands of time and start over from the beginning...
PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:12 am


DE=FRAG is so amazing @////@ Oh my lordy... Just reading it, it gives so much emotion and feeling, it's kind of overwhelming~ I'm very proud of you : D It must have taken so long to write...! Ah, but just one thing... I don't mean to be a bother, but Rhaplanca is singing to both the Fau Pira and Ar Tonelico, right? I think in that case, the song would be considered a METHOD_with.EXEC, or a METHOD_over.EXEC song... I'm not sure though, because I didn't study all of that. METHOD songs are used to interface with the Infel/Fau Pira, right? And EXEC type songs are used to interface with Ar Tonelico... Well, I'm not too sure anymore, but the song in itself is really magnificent~ I'm not sure if you're planning on writing more hours, but it's a really great hymn : D I love it~

As for RESON_MODE_DEBUG/., it too is really fantastic : D I'm astounded at both of you, you both did really great jobs ^^ The idea of having Hikari argue back and forth with the EXEC_DE=FRAGMENT/. is really genius : D I like the concept~ But, I noticed something with your Binasphere formula and the sentences. I'm going to deconstruct it using your formula:

[=>WAS RRx HA KI RA SONx WE EXx EC HYMx ME SUWx ANT VALx WE TES BEx JA MELEx NAS DIAx SSEE CIEL
EXEC hymme 2x1/0>>101101100]

Line 0: Rr ra exec me val beja nas ciel

Line 1: Was ha ki sonwe hym suwant we tes mele diassee

Binasphere is used to put two seperate lines of hymmnos together into one powerful block of song. The two verses here don't make sense though. I tried to put the particles together according to the Binasphere formula, and decipher the meaning behind the lines, but it seems to not correspond together... I'll try to fix it for you, if you don't mind : )

This is the Binasphere particles put together into one sentence
Quote:
Was rrha ki ra sonwe exec hymme suwant valwe tes beja melenas diassee ciel


The two sentences that I constructed, using the english lyrics of the Binasphere and putting together the word particles. By the way, 'purify' or 'purity' is spelled 'valwa'.

Quote:
sonwe suwant melenas diasee
[Sing to save the beloved children of God]

exec hymme valwa tes beja ciel
[Execute the song of purification for the defiled world]


Now that both lyrics have been seperated, I'll add in emotion sounds according to the english lyrics

Quote:
Was ki ra sonwe suwant melenas diasee
[In this deep concentration, I sing to save the beloved children of God]

Rrha ki ra exec hymme valwa tes beja ciel
[In this concentrated trance, I execute the song of purification for the defiled world]


And now to construct the Binasphere using both sentences. You have to follow these rules:
1) Seperate both lines into Line 0 and Line 1

Quote:
Line 0: Was ki ra sonwe suwant melenas diasee
[In this deep concentration, I sing to save the beloved children of God]

Line 1: Rrha ki ra exec hymme valwa tes beja ciel
[In this concentrated trance, I execute the song of purification for the defiled world]


2) Afterwards, everything needs to go into capital letters, and you need to split the big words into particles (you did this part in your Binasphere, but I'll seperate the particles so that we have an equal amount in both lines).

Quote:
Line 0: WAS KI RA SONx WE SUx WAx NT MEx LEx NAS DIAx SEx E
[In this deep concentration, I sing to save the beloved children of God]

Line 1: RRx HA KI RA EXx EC HYMx ME VALx WA TES BEx JA CIEL
[In this concentrated trance, I execute the song of purification for the defiled world]


3) Mix up the particles of Line 0, with Line 1. This is where it gets really tricky, so what I'll do is use two distinctive colors, so we can tell apart the words from Line 0, and Line 1. Line 0 will be dark red. Line 1 will be blue

Quote:
Line 0: WAS KI RA SONx WE SUx WAx NT MEx LEx NAS DIAx SEx E
[In this deep concentration, I sing to save the beloved children of God]

Line 1: RRx HA KI RA EXx EC HYMx ME VALx WA TES BEx JA CIEL
[In this concentrated trance, I execute the song of purification for the defiled world]


3. a) The first part is to mix up the particles so that we can place them in an order that'll have a nice, repeating pattern that ends when the Binasphere Formula ends. We have 14 particles on Line 0, and 14 particles on Line 1, so we can use a simple, repeating formula that will repeat itself over until the song ends. It's really important, though, that when you're near the end, the last number of the formula is the last particle of the Binasphere formula. After going through a lot of formula's, the one that works really well is 0110. For the sake of making the formula obvious in the actual Binasphere block, I'll write the number of the line next to the particle, like this:

Quote:
Line 0: WAS[0] KI[0] RA[0] SONx[0] WE[0] SUx[0] WAx[0] NT[0] MEx[0] LEx[0] NAS[0] DIAx[0] SEx[0] E[0]
[In this deep concentration, I sing to save the beloved children of God]

Line 1: RRx[1] HA[1] KI[1] RA[1] EXx[1] EC[1] HYMx ME[1] VALx[1] WA[1] TES[1] BEx[1] JA[1] CIEL[1]
[In this concentrated trance, I execute the song of purification for the defiled world]


Using the formula 0110, I'll place the particles in an order that is 0110. The words should match up like this: 0110/0110/0110/0110 and so on until we get to the end of the sentence. I'll put a / to show the repetition of the formula between the words

Quote:
WAS[0] RRx[1] HA[1] KI[0] / RA[0] KI[1] RA[1] SONx[0] / WE[0] EXx[1] EC[1]/b] SUx[0] / WAx[0] HYMx[1] ME[1] NT[0] / MEx[0]VALx[1] WA[1] LEx[0] / NAS[0] TES[1] BEx[1] DIAx[0] / SEx[0] JA[1] CIEL[1] E[0]


3.c) Now that that's done, let's put in the appropriate structure of the formula so that it looks like a Binasphere. The numbers and dashes aren't necessary, and neither is the color; it was just to show the repeating pattern. So, let's put it all together with the formula and english lyrics:

Quote:
=>WAS RRx HA KI RA KI RA SONx WE EXx EC SUx WAx HYMx ME NT MEx
VALx WA LEx NAS TES BEx DIAx SEx JA CIEL
EXEC hymme 2x1/0 >> 0110

[In deep concentration I sing to save God‘s beloved children!]
[In this concentrated trance I execute the song of purification for the defiled world!]


And there we go : D All done~ I didn't change the meaning of the words, or the emotions behind the sentence, just corrected the Formula and structure. I hope this was helpful to you : D

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:40 am


I'm reposting the CORRECTED version of NEGA=TONELICO/. for all of those interested xD Thanks to aquagon of ARM [A Reyvateil's Melody] who corrected the Japanese and Hymmnos lyrics for me so that everything is correct : D I'm really grateful for his hard work ^^ He also informed me that NEGA=TONELICO/. is the first song on all of the ARM site, and possibly in all of Hymn history, to use Pastalia words in Binasphere : DDDD ISN'T THAT EXCITING?! XD My song is the first to use Pastalia Dialect in Binasphere~ : D -fanboy squeal- xD

Quote:
METHOD_NEGA=TONELICO/.
zz LYAglansee tonelico, envied Ar Tonelico enegd tes uje ieeya
[Disrespected tower, idiotic Ar Tonelico… become numb to my evil wishes]

xN rre zodaw sElLYO cremia dn gLYIwYInN vega sphaela xevxl /.
[Death believes in salvation by means of guiding this world to despair]

Zz gNvwLYO, dewee tie Adazua_sarla/.
[Do not fight; kneel to my song of darkness]

NEGA=TONELICO/. -> zz LYAglansee fOwYIrn deleir tie YEsphaela ag yEzEt gral
rre Rhaplanca poe gIkLYInNeh dn fayra/.
[NEGA=TONELICO -> the devil's wish to maliciously surround your world with
calamity and to happily desire all of Rhaplanca's seeds to be eaten by fire]

崩れしまう塔を感じる
Houkai shitsutsu aru tou wo kanjiru
[I feel a crumbling tower;
狂気の声を聞く
Kyoui no koe o kiku
I hear the voice of madness;
私の心は切断される
Watashi no kokoro wa setsudansareru
My heart is cut open]

人生の意味はもういらない
Jinsei no imi ha mou iranai
[Life is no longer meaningful]
Background Choir: [死の声舞]
Background Choire: [Shi no koemai]
[Background Choir: Vocal Dance of Death]
あなたは塔の悲鳴を聞こえる?
Anata wa tou no himei wo kikoeru?
[Can you hear the screams of the tower?]

xN rre qejyu zYUzYIx, xN rre Ar Tonelico dInLYIgYOeh naave willie/.
[The people despair, Ar Tonelico is pierced because it is weak]
xN rre ruinien wEsLYO pawr ut mea/.
[Destruction happily gives power to me]

あなたが出来るながら、笑え、謳え、微笑め
anata ga dekiru nagara, warae, utae, hohoeme
[Laugh, sing and smile while you can]
死はあなたと一緒に、笑う、謳う
Shi wa anata to issho ni, warau, utau
[Death is laughing, singing along with you]
あなたの終焉の音と共鳴して [終焉]
Anata no shuuen no oto to kyoumeshite [Shuuen]
[Resonate with the sound of your demise [Demise]]

踊れ、そして永遠の眠りの喜を祝う
odore, soshite eien no yorokobi o iwau
[Dance and celebrate the ecstatic joy of eternal sleep]

xN rre qejyu zYUzYIx, xN rre Ar Tonelico dInLYIgYOeh naave willie/.
[The people despair, Ar Tonelico is pierced because it is weak]
xN rre ruinien wEsLYO pawr ut mea/.
[Destruction happily gives power to me]

Zodal!
[Death!]

Xc=hOmLYImNr fanalea -> vLYNa NEGA=TONELICO en zz saash zz merfa tErLYIm/.
[If I viciously sing loudly then I will produce NEGA=TONELICO and the demons
impure wish will come true!]
Noglle cupla, gLYOvYIw, desfel eazas, xA rre <-x kajya ttu jUzLYIt ayulsa
YIzodaw_qejyu/.
[Black sin, this world-s angry fighting, mutual hate; these are necessary
in order to execute the people's eternal death, which brings you suffering]

=> Kiax af fa mEtLYx noglx Iyy vex le zax ga getx clemenx rra zen LYIsarla ieeya lonfa ttu xN cEzE sorr tie zodal_x wUx sLYU daedu zz ttu LYAglanx mEtLYIyy cest see_pawr ttu pawr sEsx ween LYOw AR=x TONELICO delex ir yanx gauzex je wiga degle bex parge vl ja tonelico sphaex ag la_tatakax fria aAuAk_eje/.
EXEC hymme 2x1/0>>01010110

[Unconcious and unfeeling, I listen to the impure wishes of the grief-stricken souls which give me the demon’s
power needed to transmit calamity and despair, I cut loose the magic from the tower in order to focus within my heart
And weave this insane song of destruction to transform it into an ugly thing of death to unleash the true strength inside of Ar Tonelico, forever destroying the existences of this disgusting world]
PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:55 am


@ Sean:

Thank you so much! As for the mistypes, I found a couple myself. I mispelled "Diasee" I believe, too. LOL wow I have to stop pulling all nighters. xD

And Binasphere, I studied it for a long time, and I guess I don't understand it very well yet. I don't know if I ever will... However, I'm really glad that you fixed it for me! ^-^ Thank you very much!

And congratulations to your Hymn! I really should start posting on that site more, but I find that this one takes up most of my time lol.

As far as what Shurelia was shooting for, I think it was meant to be somewhat like EXEC_HAIBANATION/. where she is singing and someone is hacking into the Fau Pira, as well as her, and Hikari has to fight for control over it and for the fate of humanity, somewhat along those lines?

EXEC_HAIBANATION/. did not need to be sung over METHOD or anything of the sort. (That is one thing I actually DO know... why do I have to learn the useless info first??? D: )

I only hope Shurelia likes my hymn... gonk

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 1:35 pm


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@ Sean:

Thank you so much! As for the mistypes, I found a couple myself. I mispelled "Diasee" I believe, too. LOL wow I have to stop pulling all nighters. xD

And Binasphere, I studied it for a long time, and I guess I don't understand it very well yet. I don't know if I ever will... However, I'm really glad that you fixed it for me! ^-^ Thank you very much!

And congratulations to your Hymn! I really should start posting on that site more, but I find that this one takes up most of my time lol.

As far as what Shurelia was shooting for, I think it was meant to be somewhat like EXEC_HAIBANATION/. where she is singing and someone is hacking into the Fau Pira, as well as her, and Hikari has to fight for control over it and for the fate of humanity, somewhat along those lines?

EXEC_HAIBANATION/. did not need to be sung over METHOD or anything of the sort. (That is one thing I actually DO know... why do I have to learn the useless info first??? D: )

I only hope Shurelia likes my hymn... gonk

I love it 4laugh
We all do awesome work cool

You bring up a valid point about my hymn, but what does EXEC_over.METHOD really mean?.. *shrug* i dunno ._. I know that EXEC_with.METHOD required two reyvateils so what on earth is the meaning of EXEC_over.METHOD mean? gonk
PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 1:54 pm


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@ Sean:

Thank you so much! As for the mistypes, I found a couple myself. I mispelled "Diasee" I believe, too. LOL wow I have to stop pulling all nighters. xD

And Binasphere, I studied it for a long time, and I guess I don't understand it very well yet. I don't know if I ever will... However, I'm really glad that you fixed it for me! ^-^ Thank you very much!

And congratulations to your Hymn! I really should start posting on that site more, but I find that this one takes up most of my time lol.

As far as what Shurelia was shooting for, I think it was meant to be somewhat like EXEC_HAIBANATION/. where she is singing and someone is hacking into the Fau Pira, as well as her, and Hikari has to fight for control over it and for the fate of humanity, somewhat along those lines?

EXEC_HAIBANATION/. did not need to be sung over METHOD or anything of the sort. (That is one thing I actually DO know... why do I have to learn the useless info first??? D: )

I only hope Shurelia likes my hymn... gonk

I love it 4laugh
We all do awesome work cool

You bring up a valid point about my hymn, but what does EXEC_over.METHOD really mean?.. *shrug* i dunno ._. I know that EXEC_with.METHOD required two reyvateils so what on earth is the meaning of EXEC_over.METHOD mean? gonk


Your hymn is just fine, Shurelia. 3nodding It only requires Rhaplanca to sing it, as both towers are being hacked.

EXEC_OVER.METHOD, is possibly using both towers to execute an action within Infel Pira? It makes sense to me and correct me if I'm wrong, but that's what I believe.

However, if Rhaplanca was going to sing EXEC_OVER.RESON or something, she'd need a Reyvateil in tune to the Fau Pira tower (or METHOD/ Infel Pira) as she cannot access the tower directly herself. Opposite holds true for an FPD/IPD.

And I'm really glad you liked it. I was afraid it wouldn't be enough to match up to your DEFRAG/. hymn. That one is really amazing! It would kinda fail to not have an opposing hymn at least somewhat as good as it!

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 04, 2010 5:00 pm


Alrighty : D If HAIBANATION didn't need METHOD_with.EXEC then neither should DE=FRAG : D

Yeah, that makes sense Hallie, a lot of sense, actually o__o;; In my mind, a METHOD_over.EXEC was a song where the IPD took over the Reyvateil's singing, as in like where instead of the IPD being the one singing background or supporting the Reyvateil, it's the Reyvateil who's supporting the IPD, which would mean the Infel Pira / Fau Pira actions take priority over Ar Tonelico. -scratches head- but your explanation makes more sense. The SUBLIMATION series are METHOD_over.EXEC songs... Maybe doing a bit of research into those will help?

ANYWAYS, both your hymns are awesome XD And I'm writing a new hymn soon~
PostPosted: Mon Oct 04, 2010 8:08 pm


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Alrighty : D If HAIBANATION didn't need METHOD_with.EXEC then neither should DE=FRAG : D

Yeah, that makes sense Hallie, a lot of sense, actually o__o;; In my mind, a METHOD_over.EXEC was a song where the IPD took over the Reyvateil's singing, as in like where instead of the IPD being the one singing background or supporting the Reyvateil, it's the Reyvateil who's supporting the IPD, which would mean the Infel Pira / Fau Pira actions take priority over Ar Tonelico. -scratches head- but your explanation makes more sense. The SUBLIMATION series are METHOD_over.EXEC songs... Maybe doing a bit of research into those will help?

ANYWAYS, both your hymns are awesome XD And I'm writing a new hymn soon~


It probably would be easier to understand with more research. But that's how I understood it, anyways. Like I said, useless info to me. I'd be so happy if I could understand Hymmnos instead of the technical stuff LOL.

But both EXEC_WITH.METHOD and EXEC_OVER.METHOD were both being sung by both an IPD and Standard Reyvateil together. One for each server.

I can't wait to see your new hymns x3

Did ya get a chance to take a look at CALAMITY? I actually love that song, unfortunately it's unfinished. Still, I love it. I hope to finish it someday.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:15 pm


I now feel so accomplished! I have officially finished RESON_SUSTAIN/.

Now all that's left is SELF=DESTRUCT and Nelia's hymns. gonk
PostPosted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 6:58 pm


So, I think I finally have a handle on Hikari's outer and inner Cosmosphere. Though I redid it again. >.<

I also haven't had time to translate it into Hymmnos...

Hikari’s Outer Cosmosphere
Dream

Hikari's Outer Cosmosphere

Was touwaka ra linen revm crushue akata.
Was yea ra yorr reen rre akata mea.
[I strongly wish to tell (you) a story (that I) crafted in a dream.
I would be very happy if you listened to my story.]

[Would you stay beside me under the moon,
And listen to a story as we watch the stars?]

[A dream of you and I together,
under the sparkling heavens.]

[With pure emotions dancing around us.
Two children playing together for eternity.]

[As you take my hand in yours, can you see?
The magic that we’ve crafted in this harmony.]

[And since the night is waiting,
Let’s dance the night till morning away… ]
Revm mea… [My dream…]


Hikari is a whimsical daydreamer. She is also naive and childish at times. This song reflects her strong desire to be lost, and stay lost in a waking dream.

Hikari's Inner Cosmosphere
Insanity

Hikari's Inner Cosmosphere

[In this immense impatience, I will descend into insanity,
destroy the child, and happily devour your mind.]

Fou... num... ga... gaunji... [Feeling slightly nothing... torment...]

[In this immense rage I will destroy the child,
discard my emotions into the deep abyss,
and sever their chains to fill my heart with hatred.]

[I strongly wish to realize my nightmare of death.
In this concentration, I will sing without any emotion or remorse.
Feeling nothing, I will become the end of the world.]

[In this fear that our love will not be eternal, I will devour you.
Feeling nothing, you shall become me.]

Was ki ga... [In this deep concentration]
Zadius... [Hatred...]
Rrha num ga... [In this numb trance...]
Lamenza... [Lament...]

[In this fear that our love will not be forever,
I will devour you completely.
In this concentrated trance, I will imprison your body and soul.
Feeling nothing, you shall become me.]

[I will be very happy to give you my pain.
I will concentrate on devouring your spirit.
Feeling nothing, you shall become me.
In this insanity, we shall end the world.]

[In this rage, I will descend into madness,
And devour your spirit.
In this insanity, we will become one,
And enter the darkness together.]

Ahahahahahahahahahaha~!

[In this rage, I will descend into madness,
And devour your spirit.
In this insanity, we will become one,
And enter the darkness together.]

[In this rage, I will descend into madness,
And devour your spirit.
In this insanity, we will become one,
And enter the darkness together.]

[I strongly wish to devour your mind.
In this immense sadness, I will devour your mind.
I strongly wish to disappear.
In this immense sadness, I will disappear.]


Omigosh, I messed with the lyrics again and I really like this this time.

Full of hatred and confusion, the inner Hikari is trying to erase the other personalities inside of her and at the same time is trying to use Gannon to accomplish it in order to abandon her feelings and become the perfect weapon. At the same time she has developed an attachment to Gannon and rather than have him destroyed she plans to trap him inside her for eternity.

The biggest threat to this persona of Hikari would be the childish persona, "Kari" because she not only represents Hikari's memories but the very core of who Hikari is. As long as Kari exists, Hikari cannot become the "perfect" weapon she yearns to be.

Reformatted Cosmosphere Theme: Oblivion
Reformatted Cosmosphere Theme: Oblivion

Wee yant wa... Polon... [I'm scared... lonely...]
Wee nyasri wa... Polon... [I'm sad... lonely...]

Ma num ra yanje dhezeall vonn rete, [I'm feeling nothing eternally imprisoned in dark oblivion]
Presia, rrha zweie ra yorr pat vonn syec mea. [Please, in your determination, set me free of this dark abyss.]


After Hikari's Cosmosphere has completely collapsed and been torn apart, it has been reformatted to a blank slate. At this point she'll need to rely completely on Gannon to put everything back the way it should be in her Cosmosphere. No pressure or anything.

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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2011 4:44 pm


Okay, for this song, it may be kind of confusing. She switches back and forth between dialects and so for the Fau Pira Dialect I'm going to use the color red. For the Standard Dialect of Hymmnos and its translation I'm using blue. This Hymn is a storm of very powerful emotions, positive and negative, battling each other, however that is what summons the immense power of the Server. Also, that level of power from the Server, plus those surges of emotions overloads the Reyvateil singing and before long will destroy her Cosmosphere. Immense power at a steep price.

RESON_SELF_DESTRUCT/.

Ah, [NAaaaaaah~!] [FP-Dialect=overwhelming sadness]
Ah, [YAaaaaaah~!] [FP-Dialect=overflowing happiness]

Rrha yea ra enne sos cremia…! [In this delightful trance I pray for salvation…!]
Ma au wa coall corpu mea tes ciel! [Sadly accepting, I return my body to the earth!]
Was yea ra…! [I’m very happy…!]
Was ki ra chs salavec sos ciel! [I will concentrate to become the sacrifice for the sake of the world!]
Was yea ra…! [So very happy…!]


**LOOP Ahhhhhhhhhh~!

[With tears of sadness, Osanna gave her precious life up for the world.] Yanje! [Forever!]
[Osanna happily gave her last Song, her life, but she was forgotten and vanished.] Syunaut! [Disappear!]

This beautiful earth and everyone I love,
I am so sad to part from them.
Yanje! [Forever!]

However, the thought of their survival gives me just the happiness I need.

If I step into the eternal abyss for you,
will you remember me?

Will I live on in your hearts or become not even a memory?


[With tears of sadness, Osanna gave her precious life up for the world.] Yanje! [Forever!]
[Osanna happily gave her last Song, her life, but she was forgotten and vanished.] Syunaut! [Disappear!]

Was… [So very…] NAaaaaaaaah~! [Overwhelming sadness]
[With tears of sadness, Osanna gave her precious life up for the world.]
Yanje! [Forever!]
Yea… [Happy…]
YAaaaaaaaaah~! [Overflowing happiness]
[Osanna happily gave her last Song, her life, but she was forgotten and vanished.]
Syunaut! [Disappear!]
Ra… [Lasting…]
NAaaaaaaaaaaah~! [Overwhelming sadness]

Rrha yea ra enne sos cremia…! [In this delightful trance I pray for salvation…!]
Ma au wa coall corpu mea tes ciel! [Sadly accepting, I return my body to the earth!]
Was yea ra…! [I’m very happy…!]
Was ki ra chs salavec sos ciel! [I will concentrate to become the sacrifice for the sake of the world!]
Was yea ra…! [So very happy…!]
** LOOP until song completes
PostPosted: Mon Sep 30, 2013 10:06 pm


Okay, so I forgot I wrote this hymn. I managed to make it fully in Hymmnos for Nelia. It is the hymn to reactivate the Song Magic in the Tower.

Music for EXEC_RE=INSTATE/.

Gotta love me some Yuki Kajiura! Decided to use her music for Nelia's hymns! heart

EXEC_RE=INSTATE/.

Ma wol ga exec hymmnos RE=INSTATE,
en tasyue manaf oz Ar tonelico.
[In this urgency, I invoke the hymn RE=INSTATE,
Offering Ar tonelico‘s life.]

NELIA_ANSUL_SOL_FA enter Ar tonelico.
[Nelia‘s hymn code, enter into Ar tonelico.]

Ieeya, ieeya sos papas mea ede sarla yor.
Ieeya, ieeya sos papas mea ede sarla yor.
[Hope, hope for my belief in your song.
Hope, hope for my belief in your song.]

Ma ki ra granme sos dius yor,
en waath sarla mea!
Ma ki ra granme sos dius yor,
en waath sarla mea!
[Concentrated in protecting my precious you
and reviving my song!
Concentrated in protecting my precious you
and reviving my song!]

Ma ki ra crushue sarla ede enne sos Diasee oz ar ciel!
Was zweie ra sonwe coall sarla yor sos ieeya granme ar ciel!
Rrha ki ra crushue sarla coall pauwel oz sarla yor!
[I craft a song in prayer for the sake of God‘s children of the world!
I‘m determined to sing to return your song in the hope of protecting the world!
In a concentrated trance, I craft a song to return the power of your song!]

Was zweie ra waath sarla mea, iem!
Was zweie ra waath sarla yor, iem!
[In determination, I revive my song, now!
In determination, I revive your song, now!]

Was zweie ra waath sarla mea, iem!
Was zweie ra waath sarla yor, iem!
[In determination, I revive my song, now!
In determination, I revive your song, now!]

I want to believe in your strength,
So I place my life into your hands.

I trust in you to take care of it from here,
Protect and show there’s nothing to fear.

Was zweie ra waath sarla mea, iem!
Was zweie ra waath sarla yor, iem!
[In determination, I revive my song, now!
In determination, I revive your song, now!]

Take the strength of my song and make it yours!

Was zweie ra waath sarla mea, iem!
Was zweie ra waath sarla yor, iem!
[In determination, I revive my song, now!
In determination, I revive your song, now!]

Was zweie ra waath sarla mea, iem!
Was zweie ra waath sarla yor, iem!
[In determination, I revive my song, now!
In determination, I revive your song, now!]

Ieeya, ieeya sos papas mea ede sarla yor.
Ieeya, ieeya sos papas mea ede sarla yor.
[Hope, hope for my belief in your song.
Hope, hope for my belief in your song.]


Super repetitive at times but I seriously spent a loooong time on it. And I forgot what computer I stored it on till now. LOL

Oh and here's Nelia's other hymn. The life hymn that as of yet has no name.

Nels Hymn

Come my little children before me and I shall sing you a Song.
Come, little children and hear my wishes for your eternal happiness.
[Sonwe! Sonwe! Sonwe soare manaf!
Wearequewie ecchra enerel/.
Was yea erra soare rre manaf ecchra enerel/.]
[I sing! Sing! Sing the song of life!
I wish for it to echo for eternity.
I will be eternally happy to pray for life to echo always.]

Sacred Priestess Kikyo


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PostPosted: Mon Sep 30, 2013 10:30 pm


With Rinna, since she technically is a Life-Giver (though nowhere near as powerful now, or ever will she be as Rhaplanca or even Rhemi), I had written her version of the Chronicle.Orgel hymn. She likely will never sing it in the RP or if she does it will not be able to be much more than a Song pleasant to the ears, as she isn't a mature Reyvateil yet, nor will she be anytime in the near future. But! I wanted to share it and see what you think of it, Shurelia! heart

Honestly, with the song I used for the skeleton of it, the lyrics flowed beautifully. It's one of my favorites that I've written, probably more so than any of the others that I can think of at the moment.

Music for Rinna's version

EXEC_CHRONICLE.ORGEL/. ~Rinna Extracting

La, la, la, la, la…

This Song becoming one with the world, crafting eternal harmony…
[Wee yea erra sonwe ciel sarla…][I will be eternally happy to sing the world‘s Song …]

**LOOP**Within this precious hymn,
I can feel all your lives,
Soft breaths,
Oh, each gentle heartbeat!

[My Song! Oh, become a Prayer of life.]
Wee yea erra sonwe ciel sarla… [I will be eternally happy to sing the world‘s Song…]

La, la, la, la, la…
[My Prayer resonates with your world.]
La, la, la, la, la…
[My song, your prayer, our irreplaceable world…]
La, la, la, la, la…
[Oh, irreplaceable world!]

Accepting your gift of strength to share my Song with the world,
How could I not sing?

I now offer you a gift in return;
I give to you my life,
My soft breaths,
Oh, my gentle heartbeats!

This Song becoming one with the world, crafting eternal harmony…

[Wee yea erra sonwe ciel sarla…][I will be eternally happy to sing the world‘s Song…]
[My song, your prayer, our irreplaceable world…] **REPEAT 3x, then LOOP to first LOOP if song continues.
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