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shibrogane

Stellar Lightbringer

PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 2:57 pm


HI Tempo sounds cute * u*

so! You present a really coherent character here. Everything leads back into other traits, which really leaves me with very few questions I want to ask. 8|a Still, I do have them~!

Does Tempo keep a blog or something along those lines? Does she like to read newspapers in order to get even more information, or does she just read the web edition? Does she have an email where she can get newsletters and keep up with her favorite bands? Does she steal Xavier's headphones?

I'd be careful with the "observant" trait, because things can get a little gamebreaky there. Does this only apply to physical examples, like the ones you've included in the writeup?

The thrillseeker flaw came out of nowhere. Maybe mention this up in Helpful or Protective? =o

All in all, though, Tempo looks pretty good! I like her * u*
PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 3:21 pm


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Does Tempo keep a blog or something along those lines?
Good question. Probably not, since most of her day to day things arn't exactly things that are internet-shareable. If she does, it's either very sparingly updated, or filled with made up things, and why should she bother to make things up for a blog when she has so many other things to do ?

Does she like to read newspapers in order to get even more information, or does she just read the web edition?
She'd love to read newspaper, really - like so many human things, it's all very fascinating to her, but it isn't that easy with no opposable tumbs, hm ? So she mostly consult the web edition, if only not to fumble with paper. Smack a paw down on a mouse button and you're mostly good !

Also, her typing is far from stellar. She's a cat, after all. Even if her keyboard is rather big, she still has to be careful when typing and it takes her awhile. Xavier would pretty much build her a massive list of bookmarks she'll just need to click to help her out.

Does she have an email where she can get newsletters and keep up with her favorite bands?
Oh, definitively, yes ! I totally never thought about that ! XD

Does she steal Xavier's headphones?
YESSSS. XDDDDD

I'd be careful with the "observant" trait, because things can get a little gamebreaky there. Does this only apply to physical examples, like the ones you've included in the writeup?
Only physical examples, yes. Like, she's good at reading body language, so if someone is upset she'll probably know. She's good at remembering faces and bodies which is why she can pick up differences from one meeting to another. Ill go see if I can rewrite it.

The thrillseeker flaw came out of nowhere. Maybe mention this up in Helpful or Protective? =o
I am going to be honest here - Thrillseeker is her weakest flaw mostly because I wanted a 4th flaw to keep things balanced, so it was either add a flaw or knock a virtue, which I didn't want to do since I think her virtue set works very well for her. If I decide to keep it, ill be sure to work it in, but im open to finding something that would fit the rest of her traits best.

THank you my dear <3

A Wandering Esper

Beloved Stargazer


zippedsiren

Dapper Spirit

PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 5:57 pm


I gotta echo Roma here, Tempo is very coherent and well done which doesn't leave me with much to comment/question on. heart

So just a few thing:
- Her internet hobby reminds me of this. So out of curiosity I feel like I need to ask: does she leave badly spelled comments on youtube? AND, how does she feel about LOLcats? Is she prone to talking in meme/lolcats type speech "I can haz?"

-People-watching, is there any kind of action or social interaction that Tempo is interested in watching most? (Like how Luna is curious about kissing/love in the Super movie), does she later ask Xavier about anything she might find odd or interesting?

-When it comes to being helpful, is she helpful in any ways other than senshi-related ones? Examples: Would she try to help Xavier or Ainsley with their homework? Would she try to escort an old lady across the street? In what way would she be helpful to a civilian?

Potential other flaws I can see based around other traits (meddling or nosy)---SO: Is she meddling or a brown-noser at all (trying to be 'helpful' to point of meddling, or trying to get all the info she can by 'spying' sort-of?)

I ABSOLUTELY ADORE HER APPEARANCE/ THE IDEA OF A RAVER-LOOKING CAT. heart
PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 6:12 pm


She doesn't leave comments on youtube, just watch videos/listen to music. She probably reads them for amusement though, and oh my god why did I not think of lolcats ??? XD She probably does it in light-hearted situation/as a joke, but not in normal situations. XD Too bad only Xavier really gets it, unless Ainsley is more computer-savvy than she looks. XD

The second question is very interesting, and I will have to think on it for a bit, but it's a neat thing and ill see if I can explore it. :O Or this might just be something ill leave open and see if something happens in rp.

She might try to help with homework, though she'd probably be better at helping Ainsley, since Xavier is pretty much college level. She'd be the cat brain-storming the background, though XD Does it count as cheating if your cat comes up with your essay topic for you ? XP

With civilians, there's little she can do without revealing herself - she might try to lure a civilian away from a youma, or toward a senshi who could provide protection from said youma - she is rather mindful of trying to come across as a normal cat to civilians.

She might not be able to help that old lady cross the street, but she'll follow her home to make sure she gets there okay, if that makes any sense ?

Meddling sounds perfect, actually. Let's see if I can make it work !

Raver cat is amazing, no lie. :B

A Wandering Esper

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zippedsiren

Dapper Spirit

PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 6:29 pm


I doubt it's cheating if your cat comes up with his thesis. Who'd know anways? XD But it'd be super cute if she tried to easy Xavier's stress and senshi burden by "attempting" to do/help with his home work. (which would probably just add more stress, accidentally handing in an assignment with kitty marks on it)

luring away/leading somewhere safe sounds like a perfect civvie interaction. I guess you're right there's no much she could do without giving herself away other than try to point someone in the right direction (or bringing them slippers...). Following home makes sense too, it fits with both protective and helpful!

heart Happy to help!
PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 6:37 pm


All edited in ! Ill probably elaborate on meddling later, but I think it really works for her <3

A Wandering Esper

Beloved Stargazer


A Wandering Esper

Beloved Stargazer

PostPosted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 5:33 pm


Oh look, a ref (finally)
PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2011 3:57 pm


Still up for crits if anyone's interested <3

A Wandering Esper

Beloved Stargazer


Akina Tokuwa

PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 3:08 pm


Former stamp snipped out at Zero Dream's request to allow for quest revision and resubmission.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 10, 2011 9:52 pm


A lot of things were modified - mainly switch to corrupted cat. The previous stamp no longer stands and I will be submitting for a new one.

A Wandering Esper

Beloved Stargazer


cibarium

Noob

PostPosted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 3:38 pm


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