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 Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 2:01 pm
((Look again!, 1- your character is not faster, 100 agents 120!, , and so there is nothing wrong with my post besides the fact that i said you released your zanpoktou. ))
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 2:40 pm
It was 60 when I made the post so watch it pal -3-
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 2:41 pm
at any rate, please fix your post so future confusion wont happen when people read the fight >>
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 2:44 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 5:05 pm
((Sigh just post already, i want to be done with this fight soon, it becoming boring. And the resown why it changed is because i updated it to the new Ranking. Just post already. I fixed my post))
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 6:51 pm
Tsubaki smirked and sheathed her wakazashi and spun her Zanpakutou wile he was releasing his. She then tossed hers at U'kiro. "Cry...." She said softly then shunpo'd to it grabbing it in mid-flight and was only a few feet away from him, thus avoiding his attack "....Fenrir." Her Zanpakutou changed into two unique shaped blades and an invisible explosion shot out in all directions without warning threatening to knock U'Kiro backwards or even over. Tsubaki then made several slashes and punches with the knuckle like bladed surrounding of the hilt of her blades. "Don't talk to much!" She warned as she performed her attacks.
((If you want me to post quicker PM me after you post then instead of whining about it.))
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 8:12 pm
I have to agree wit Akira.
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The dead-line is up, and I'm speechless as to who wins this.
As far as descriptive writing Tsubaki:
Scale of 1-10= 8
Grammer= 8
Total= 16
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Discriptive writing Tenkie:
Scale of 1-10= 4
Grammer= 5
Total= 9
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You both have a good style, but the score stands as is. Now it is up to my second Judge for a final.
P.S. Both of you need to pay attention to the others post.
Tenkie: ~Tsubaki clearly said she was attacking from BEHIND you. And you spoke, and then attacked FORWARD.
~You said you had a barrier...How? And why are you attacking with it up?
Tsubaki: ~U'kiro had a barrier around him, so the rock thrown would do nothing. Nor the slash at the back....
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 8:45 pm
--Everythings wrong...--
Harris got to this before me.
I second his ratings.
As he said, make sure you know what you're reading, and writing. A barrier, for starters, is actually kind of illegal from where my rp originates from, but even if it isn't here, attacking with it up is abit..broken, I might say? At least give it some weakness. Attacking a barrier is...well..pointless. Some detail wouldn't kill either of you, even if its just a bit more then it is now.
Remember, we aren't saying anything to try to hurt any feelings, take sides, put any one down, but instead to improve the quality, and enjoyment of the guild and all those who have hopes of having fun while rping here.
Also, don't forget that a challenge can be issued any time, as long as you make it convenient for the other. And on a last note, when some one is involved with an rp with you THEY SHOULD NOT have to pm YOU, to remind you to post. Regular check ins are usually what can help. At the very least, twice a day can be helpful.
--I'll make it right--
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:02 pm
Thank god! its finally over!!!! : DDDDDDDDD i don't have to deal with it yes!!! i didn't win but idc i don't have to deal with this any more!!!!
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:05 pm
I would also like to point out my barrier it was a Kido barrier, just so i could stay in the water. I never attacked and i never used it for assault. But idc i will challenge tommorrow or some-time later in the month :], when ever i get free time.
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II The Metal Alchemist II Crew
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:12 pm
Wow.
I'd like to address a very serious concern about this thread.
Firstly, you both seem to have a good ability in Role Play. However, this thread consisted of more OOC than actual Role Playing, if you want to make an impression for yourself, I suggest sending comments or concerns through PM.
Now, onto the Role Playing, itself.
From the five posts that were actually Role Play, out of the twenty, I cannot say that either of you are better than the other necessarily in any particular field.
I'm not to keen on the statements where one believes they are obliviously more powerful than the other, as it stands, you are both semi equally matched, I know there was adjustments recently with the Ranking system, but that doesn't matter, you should never state that your character is far more superior than another, it does not make for good role playing when someone is acting arrogant, even our most insensitive character in the guild would never state that he is more powerful in this and more skillful in that, you aren't going to create friends that way, and will not be looked upon with admiration for acting cocky.
At this moment, I will agree with Harris on his choice, however, that does not mean that Tenkie is not amazingly capable of holding a high position. Remember, a third seat position is still able to have a Bankai.
However, I am going to remind both of you on a few things that I will be watching for from both of you.
Firstly, neither of you are to use pure OOC in any RP forum anymore, this thread should have consisted of only RP with comments from your Captain only.
Secondly, don't ever state in a RP that your character can easily do this or that to another character, doing so is border line god-moding which can and will result in a warning or banning.
Thirdly, it is no ones job to remind you of a RP that you are in, you should be checking in on it regularly, I wont see complaints like that anymore.
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:25 pm
Bowes, yes sir head captain!
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:25 pm
--Everythings wrong...--
In addition to that I think three things should be kept in mind for sure: Grammar, spelling, reading comprehension. This will lead to truely out pacing another, up to a certain point at the very least.
--I'll make it right--
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:58 pm
2 questions, first being when did I ever say he HAD to remind me? If I recall I never said anything about him reminding me of anything. Second question, does this mean I'm the new VC of squad 2? O.o Before I end up assuming anything I would adore a solid answer to question #2 :3
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 11:53 pm
Tsubaki Mizuru ((If you want me to post quicker PM me after you post then instead of whining about it.)) --Everythings wrong...--
Well.....And yes, as far as I know, this does mean you are the Vice Captain.
--I'll make it right--
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