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[Q] Christopher Gallo / Valhalla of Jupiter (Crit/Mark? <3) Goto Page: [] [<] 1 2

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Guine

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:45 am


No, no! Thank you! Your crit was very helpful! He does look a little earth knight-y, and I want to incorporate the Valkyries into his design, but I think I was worried about treading into Wulkurie's territory of design. Soo, I'm just going to leave it up to the artist if he's ever upgraded. <3

And yeah, I agree with the circlet. I was trying to figure out something to do that would be influenced by the viking helmet, but without an actual helmet, at least for this first stage.

And I edited his magic/attack. I'm leaning towards an electrical charge of sorts, the kind that would make it seem as though his attack didn't do anything "magical" until the person who was hit gets a nasty static shock from touching something on their own. And then... I'll try and work out his knight attack some more to make it more reasonable. I just didn't want him to be the wimp of the knights! Ha ha...

Thank you so much! <33
PostPosted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 11:55 pm


YAAAY VALHALLA! ... I just had to get that out there. * n*;;;

I'm just going to touch on the weapons/magic portion of your quest! The way I understand it is that magic for the knights is supposed to be more status effect-y than actually offensive, so thinking along the lines of... like green magic, is how it was explained to me. His attacks right now are reading as something closer to actual buzz/shocks and physical pain, which I would think would be more in the realm of senshi.

Since you said that you want to incorporate direction, how about something disorienting? Like he could hold up his compass and it could send a wave of magic out that temporarily confused directions for his opponent. They may try to step forward and find themselves going backward, or something, so they'd have to adjust their thinking really abruptly or be all over the place. If it only lasted a little while, since the magic would be weaker at that point, they could probably just get adjusted ("Oh hey, I have to step to the right to go left right now!") when the magic wore off, which would lead to a little bit of re-orienting again. Even if it was only for about thirty seconds, that'd be seriously disorienting and would mess up your groove for a battle, which is my impression of what knights are meant to do with their magic.

I really love the theme you have going and the direction you could take with it (AUGH PUN UNINTENDED) and I hope that's helpful! Another idea for the pot, anyway. 8D;;

And now for the shameless portion of the event! Crit back, please? * u*;;

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Guine

Crew

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:13 pm


Thank you so much! And that idea is amazing, omg. Like, I really, really love it. Like... I already changed his attack. XD;

But yeah, you're totally right about the magic. Huuurrr... That's now gone and Val's now focused more on the actual disorienting aspect, rather than physical magic attacks. Also changed up his weapon a little. Well, I shrunk his squire stage so it's more magic based, and then, because I really wanted to use a spear to reference vikings/the Valkyries, I changed his Knight weapon to that.

If anyone thinks it's too much of a leap, then please tell me and I'll figure out how to correct it! I was basically going with taking a certain aspect of the compass and making that into his weapon. (In this case, the arrow.)

But yes, thank you! That was awesome. <33
PostPosted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 9:24 pm


I'm glad you like it! I really love his concept and hope that I get to see Valhalla around soon. * n* <33

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Akina Tokuwa

PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 10:43 pm


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Thanks again for participating in the Blood Moon Court event! I think his powered side looks good. I was a little confused at why his awesome gyroscope became a spear in his final stage (which seems less interesting in comparison), but that might be something you choose to revisit when he reaches that point. Otherwise, this is great! Congratulations.
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