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 Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 7:21 pm
And just a civ name change in order not to conflict an existing quest. Oiy. I think im almost ready, gonna sleep on it at least, and see if I can get more feedback
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Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:00 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 6:30 pm
Didn't see you already got stamped, congrats ^^
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 6:53 pm
-Tempo crit starts here-
I KNOW, FAT CHANCE, ZERO.
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 8:51 pm
One weird thing- cat's don't have a 0 blood type. This is something I found out @-@
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:41 pm
Wow, I didn't know that ! o_o
Gonna change it then, thank you !
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Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2010 3:07 pm
I know, it's real weird isn't it? xD
BUT YES, I'll come back to your quest thread and give it a good read thru later and see if I can help any w/ crits :3
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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 7:49 pm
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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:36 pm
ninja I saw what you did there, lol
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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:41 pm
No you didn't, what are you talking about. talk2hand
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 1:45 pm
I think I have an addiction.
Anyone know if they offer therapy ?
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 2:45 pm
It's okay. The important thing is that you know you're addicted u __ u
OKAY SO basically, since he was corrupted straight into the Negaverse, you have to consider why they'd decide to corrupt him instead of just sucking out his energy and going on their merry way. He's reliable and resourceful, but since he's so reclusive, how would they know? =o Is Ashley gonna try and corrupt him to get him on the "right" "side"?
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 3:37 pm
Damnit, I knew I had forgotten something. XD I am gonna write a whole section on this in the same fashion that I did with Ashley, but I bumped and then went to do laundry and s**t.
Fluorite will play a large part in his corruption, yeah. She's gonna bring him up partly for selfish reasons (girl doesn't want her brother energy-sucked or starseed-yoinked) but also since he's a programmer, he can also find loopholes in firewall programs and code which open some interesting plot possibilities for the negaverse as a whole.
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Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 12:30 pm
switched a few traits around, added why the negaverse bit.
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Posted: Mon Feb 14, 2011 3:20 pm
^_________^ Hiiiiiiiiiiiii Zerooooooo.
I got bored, so I came to crit you! YAY corrupted quest!
For once, I don't have much to comment on or ask really. I like him! I only have like.. maybe 3 things to ask/comment with, really really minor things.
a) Gotta ask, he is a Mac or Pc? Or Linux? All of them? If he's a mac or pc, is he stubborn and 'protective' of his brand? (So many computer nerds have a favorite they champion).
b)Why does he like anime? When did he get into it, did it start as kid with things like Pokemon (and thus why he thinks it's a bit childish?). How does he feel about anime with adult or very dark content?
c)Like his attacks! They're really interesting and pretty bad a**. I'm not sure what I think of his eternal making a person temporarily blind due the darkness, unable to get healing, and making them unable to hear anything. I don't usually think of an eclipse as being silent,. there's lots of creepy, scary sounds in the dark (owls, the wind, random noises). Total darkness yes, bad omen-y ( = no healing) yes. Hearing? Hmmm. sweatdrop I dunno about that one. It just seems like if you deprive a senshi of half their senses (especially ones essential for survival) it would be really, really, really easy to kill them. They'd be sitting ducks really! I could understand how darkness might play a bit of mind games with someone though, and how they might hear something that isn't actually there?
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