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Mi-chan in all his prettiness.

OK: You missed a 'tengu' replacement, but another question: How does he 'carry around a pair of pupils'. Does he actually carry a pair of eyes with him? Also, the pupil is the center part of the eye, which is black/colorless. From your drawings I think you mean the Iris?

You've also made him extremely standoffish. He hates people, he's a psychological bully, apparently emulating the people who bullied him in a stroke of irony, but he also doesn't like to talk to people, and apparently has a good pokerface. ((Or anyway he's permanently set on 'madface' wink ))

If he's so standoffish, and literally trusts -no one- at any level, you're going to find it extremely difficult to interact with people on a repeat basis, since he has no reason to want to. This may work fine for a time or two, but it'll become harder to find reasons for people to want to interact with him a second time if all they can expect is staring, the occasional brush off, and the poker face. I think you'll want to take into consideration things that would make him want to interact with people again, outside of the 'Damn I've got to' classroom setting, or potentially make it something you aim for as an rp goal.

He has an interesting personality. He does seem angry, of course from the background mentioned in the personality briefs it seems like he has a good reason to be.

Also, I'm kind of torn here, the descriptions of the traits seem a little long and there's a few grammar errors that make them sort of hard to read. At least, there were a few places where I personally had to go back and reform sentences to make sense in my head. (This may just be me.) However, I think there is the makings of a strong personality here if a little bit of time was taken to read the traits out loud and try to fix the small errors. ((If you need help I'd be more than happy to try to help. I know English/American grammar is a pain to learn, and honestly I'm still not all that great at it either.))

In your trait Just a small quirk there seems to be a list of hobbies. While I see what you're trying to get at here, I'm not completely sure this is necessary to make a good trait. The list to me bogs down the personality and makes him sound like he's often too busy for school work. Perhaps, another route to take would be to list only one or two things that might seem out of character for him then the trait sounds less busy and it gives the reader the general idea of what's intended.

I don't honestly know much about fears but this sounds like an interesting attack. I really don't have much to say except for the fact the profile seems a bit busy to me as I normally think, and expect; the goal of the personality and the traits to be showing what the character themselves is like and just a little bit of why they are, while leaving the family stuff for a bit of a back story.