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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 11:39 am
Yeah Urban, that's really OP. Fenrir shouldn't even accept it. Your drawback is very weak too.
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 12:00 pm
The hell do you want from me? Damn crippling drawbacks? It's not like I plan on using this every two seconds. I mean, in a day, I can do this 26 times.
Cry: Quit hating because Fen put Cerberus down.
Met: Now what's so OP about this? It's not offensive (As in attacking), and it doesn't tell me what they think. It's basically Googling someone!
And at any rate, I'm a master. As well as a Mage. I mean, I'm already able to kill you in a single post. As long as you stay away from me. But still. And it's through touch. Not just automatically knowing. I must touch you in some way. I mean, didn't you at least read the sample?
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 12:15 pm
But seriously, this is just another way to metagame Urban. Just by touching them you'll be able to know everything? That's ridiculous.
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 12:18 pm
.....why......cerburus....... crying *crawls back to emo corner*
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 12:28 pm
Well, maybe I was thinking too critically on this. Maybe you should amp up the cost, because it is pretty 'powerful.' I mean seriously Urban, it's really easy to touch someone, although they may not like it.
@Google: Google isn't that good. I can't even find myself.
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 12:49 pm
I mean, it's not like I really care to know everything. There are just certain things. It's just part of a plan. Call me crazy, but a few characters are hiding dirty little secrets.
And don't you want Yae to know what she really is? To understand? To give you a port to actually collecting things? Just one of my many plans waiting to be played out.
There's a lot I want to do with this. And even though i said skills, I already know what character are capable of. It's called a profile. Like Xiomar gives a damn what you know.
But yea. It's not as OP as you really think. It's very much unique.
Plus, I wanted some notion to the psychic world, but fen dislikes PK. And I absolutely wasn't going to Read Minds. Then I'd be able to "predict" everything.
Trust me, I thought this one out. More then you know. Though Fen will most likely disapprove of it anyway. And even then, your a VC too. As is Fen.
Google: It's cause you suck.
Cry: Good, that ought to keep you quiet for about an hour.
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 1:26 pm
Well, like I said, I'm going to scrap Yae, and Laura. They got boring. >_>;;
Going to bone people with a Knight.
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 2:33 pm
No more Chimera? Are we keeping it?
Can I has it? biggrin
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 2:40 pm
The Urban Superstition No more Chimera? Are we keeping it? Can I has it? biggrin You don't need it...
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 2:44 pm
Hmm...so your skill is basically allow you to know their skills and s**t but not their thought and what they plan to do...is that kind of like a quick encyclopedia on them? Small question I want to ask is what do you mean by purpose? Like their goal and stuff?
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 3:40 pm
Tiny: Pretty much.
May: Lol I figured you'd say that. How come? Scared I might become God Mage? The only reason Yae was never a god like character was cause met never killed anyone. Lazy b*****d. If I'd have had the Chimera before, you bet your a** I'd have collected every thing I could.
But the only reason it would make me god mage is because we don't have any magic bloodlines, and everything we have made is all strength strength strength.
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Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 9:52 am
RPC Name: Cry Black heart Rank: Sage Talent Description: It is the ability that can absolutely control someone.The one thing it cannot do,is make someone cause physical harm to themselves.It only works if the user,is doing it to someone of a lower rank.The Mind control only last for five or ten posts.Unless Cry activates it's long term ability where he basically creates a sleeper agent.Which means he can give them order to obey them,without their knowing.If activated,The user would have to face the side effects of,being blinded and at the mercy of tremendous headaches.For 15 or more posts. Talent Weakness: It can only be used 1 once every 30 posts.It has a side effect as well.Once used,the user become quite drowsy and his vision blurs for 5 posts.If used twice before the time limit is up,the user's energy pool will automatically drop to zero.If used three times before the time limit is over,the user will die. How did the character get this talent?:He stole the talent from his maker,who was the former king of vampires.He got the talent after he opened his master's coffin and smashed his skull in with a blunt object.Then his face,after that he ripped out a pocket knife sized piece of his spine,and stabbed his heart multiple times.Chunks of brain,teeth and bone.All over the floor. Sample: It was quiet,and dark.The only sound that could be heard was the sound of dripping water at the end of the hall.The only light that could be seen was the light peeping out of the cell.Soon footsteps could be heard,they got louder and louder as the went over towards the light.
Once the sound ceased a man glared into the cage.He was a fairly large man.Had a few scars on his face,he looked like some wanna be cleshay biker."Look at you.You look kinda hungry.Some King you are?"The guard said to the figure at the far end of the cage.Once the figure heard this,it arose from the darkness and into the light.It turned out to be a man he long,silver hair,and a black cloth covering his right eye.He appeared to be smiling.His eye's began to glow red,as he looked the guard dead in the eyes,and said."Come on in,and I'll show you what kind of king I am."
The guard had no choice,as he unlocked the door and walked right in.The man Only started to laugh.Once he was close enough the man grabbed him by the collar and bit into his neck.Draining him of all of his blood.Once their was none left,the dropped the pale corpse and sat back down.
(Short and stupid,but I don't care.It's the basic idea. >.>)
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Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 10:48 am
Cry, I know Urban judges this, but when did you become a Sage?
Also, controlling the character of someone else beyond influencing, isn't allowed. (At least I think so.)
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Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 11:27 am
Well here's a few things. First off, Mets right. Your not a sage. Not even close. Secondly, 3 times and you die? Yea, like you'd actually do it. Thirdly, Ripping out his heart? Lame. So lame. Come up with something better. You don't just get powers for ripping people hearts out. Fourthly, this ability will fail harshly, since your an Adept. What are you going to do? Hypnotize trainees to have sex with you?
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Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 11:53 am
Urban: Its close to being accepted, but not quite. I want the energy cost of using your talent to be 1/4 of your total energy supply. That way it really does drain you and I think with that plus the 'only being able to use it once a day' rule this should be pretty well balanced. Just know that you HAVE to touch your target to read their information.
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