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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 4:53 am
OH I FOUND YOU!
I love this clan...
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 4:03 pm
Qyp Clan Name: Kanjosuru Shuzoku (Emotion Manipulation Clan)
Village: Otogakure [Maybe should be rethought for the moment, not much going on there xd ]
Element Affinity: Fire (usually males) or Water (usually females)
Description of Clan:
Doujutsu: Dokangan (Empathy Eye)
The ability to read, feel and manipulate the emotions of other people. Reading is done through the emotional aura of their body, mind and chakra. So that means it is possible to predict what others thinking through their feelings and able to counter it. So they read the aura's brightness, shape, speed of flow, texture, etc. Example: if the aura is like fire, or not bright, it is negative even if the colour is different. So they know when one has blood lust or sexual lust.
In game Stats:
+20% Charisma +20% Chakra +15% Genjutsu
-20% Strength -20% Dexterity -15% Taijutsu
[Like the stats, very balanced!]
Jutsu List:
Emotion Manipulation Description: The power to manipulate the emotions of others. They amplify the emotion. [Why does that cause mental damage?] Rank: C D-S Cp Cost: At user's discretion. See Damage. Attack Turns: 2 + 2 per 20 chakra. Will DC: 10. Damage: 10% less of chakra used, is the damage done to MHp due to the victim's natural reaction to resist. (100 Cp used, 90 MHp damage) Requirements: 14 Chakra Control, 15 Genjutsu, 10 Concentration. Training: 3 stages. Stage I: Chakra Control DC 24, Chakra sent to the eyes and projected outward. Stage II: Concentration DC 20, Concentrating on the target victim and think of the emotion you want them to feel. Stage III: Genjutsu DC 25, Combine what is learned to manipulate the emotion. Special: Will DC goes up a rank per 20 Cp. [No special effect?] Owner: Kanjosuru Clan
[Not crazy about this one... It's basically just Mhp damage. With what it is it could have so many cool effects, it just seems a waste of its potential to limit it like that.]
Emotion Amplified [The first technique already mentions amplifying emotions, it seems to be very similar in description] Description of Jutsu: The emotions of the victim is made greater than it already is, depending on how much chakra is used, is how much it is amplified. it is done through the eyes of the gan. Rank: D-S Cp Cost: 25 per multiplication. Attack Turns: Will DC: 10 Damage: Training: X stages. Stage I: [Skill/Stat] DC X, Description of stage. Requirements: 15 Chakra Control, 15 Genjutsu, 12 Concentration. Training: 3 stages. Stage I: Chakra Control DC 25, Chakra sent to the eyes and projected outward. Stage II: Concentration DC 22, Concentrating on the target victim and think of the emotion you want amplifed. Stage III: Genjutsu DC 25, Combine what is learned to manipulate the emotion. Special: Will goes up per 25 Cp. Owner: Kanjosuru Clan
[Is this technique finished?]
You Are Safe Now Description: A Genjutsu in association with emotion manipulation. It gives off the illusion of some nice calm field with no sign of man, just animals grazing or playing, making the target feel calm and safe emotionally. Rank: B Cp Cost: 40 Attack Turns: 4 Will DC: 15 Damage: N/A Requirements: 27 Genjutsu, 25 Chakra Control. Training: X stages. Stage I: Chakra Control DC 35 Stage II: [Skill/Stat] DC 37 Stage III: [Skill/Stat] DC 39 Stage IV: Genjutsu DC 37, Forming chakra in to the illusion you want them to see. Special: Owner: Kanjosuru Clan
[Ok, just realized maybe you weren't done yet xd I'll let you be.] Owner: Qyp
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 6:39 am
Hoshigaki Hiru [Ok, just realized maybe you weren't done yet xd I'll let you be.] Made some small changes...
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 4:16 am
Oh what a waste... my poor doujutsu ;o;
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 11:58 am
WOW!! I should've sworn that this was approved by now. confused
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 11:12 pm
Redo the Japanese stuff for me?
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The Ghost of Xmas Awesome
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 1:32 am
xd *loud rocous laughter* Ahhhhhh..... confused Qyp. We love you, man. We do. Really. But you gotta stop with these OP things, bro.
Ahhhh okay. Let's see.
Jutsu Name: Emotion Manipulation Description of Jutsu: The power to manipulate the emotions of others. Rank: D-S Cp Cost: See Damage. Attack Turns: 2 + 2 per 20 chakra. Will DC: 10. Damage: 10% less of chakra used, is the damage done to MHp due to the victim's natural reaction to resist. (100 Cp used, 90 MHp damage) Requirements: 14 Chakra Control, 15 Genjutsu, 10 Concentration. Training: 3 stages. Stage I: Chakra Control DC 24, Chakra sent to the eyes and projected outward. Stage II: Concentration DC 20, Concentrating on the target victim and think of the emotion you want them to feel. Stage III: Genjutsu DC 25, Combine what is learned to manipulate the emotion. Special: Will DC goes up a rank per 20 Cp. Owner: Kanjosuru Clan
This technique so ridunkulously OP it's not even funny. xd Well okay, it is kind of funny.
Let's say I am a Kage. I have alot of chakra. Say 2340. Kay? Kay. Now. I am facing another kage. This other Kage is scary. So I want to beat him. I use this clan jutsu leaving naught but ten cp remaining. Will DC 116 damage 2097. Well, so much for THAT b***h.
So no. Cool idea, but not system compatible. Too OP. MORE OP, than the Uchiha Mangekyou stuff during it's run. Cause least that you could dodge.
I would advise you just make various degrees of this technique with different levels of damage. Fair, levels of damage.
Jutsu Name: Emotion Amplified Description of Jutsu: The emotions of the victim is made greater than it already is, depending on how much chakra is used, is how much it is amplified. Rank: D-S Cp Cost: 25 per Attack Turns: Will DC: 10 Damage: Training: X stages. Stage I: [Skill/Stat] DC X, Description of stage. Requirements: 15 Chakra Control, 15 Genjutsu, 12 Concentration. Training: 3 stages. Stage I: Chakra Control DC 25, Chakra sent to the eyes and projected outward. Stage II: Concentration DC 22, Concentrating on the target victim and think of the emotion you want amplifed. Stage III: Genjutsu DC 25, Combine what is learned to manipulate the emotion. Special: Will goes up per 25 Cp. Owner: Kanjosuru Clan
Same as the first. Good idea, too OP. Rework it. Could break any genjutsu far to easily. FAR too easily.
Jutsu Name: You Are Safe Now. Description of Jutsu: A Genjutsu is association with the emotion manipulation. It gives off the illusion of some nice calm place that they have always liked to go. Then with that, the Kanjosuru makes the person feel calm and safe emotionally. Rank: B Cp Cost: 40 Attack Turns: 4 Will DC: 15 Damage: N/A Requirements: 27 Genjutsu, 25 Chakra Control, 25 Wisdom Training: X stages. Stage I: Chakra Control DC 35 Stage II: Wisdom DC 35 Stage III: Chakra Control DC 37 Stage IV: Genjutsu DC 37 Special: Owner: Kanjosuru Clan
Too vague, what does this actually do system wise...? According to the special all it does is make me feel good. I can still conceivably do anything while this is going down. Because system wise nothing is happening. "Wow, thanks for that man." Your opponent would say while stabbing us in the face. xd Fine idea, no real problem, just fill out the special. It heals MHP damage maybe? Or stuns people until hit? Stuns until they break the jutsu? What's happening here? These are questions the system must know, my friend. 3nodding
Name: Forbidden Technique: Destroy Emotion Description: This is actually a permanent effect jutsu, once the victim is effected by it, they forget how to feel all emotion forever. There is no repair possible, that is why it is forbidden to use it. This a high degree of emotion manipulation, and clan members are told of how doing so, will cause a person to no longer care what they do. The victims do not state what they are doing, or state why they do it. They do everything and anything without thinking of anyone else. But they are not selfish, or selfless, for they know not what either is... so they are nothing. Rank: S Cp Cost: 300 Attack Turns: 6 Will DC: 18 + Wisdom mod Damage: Permanently emotionless. Requirements: 55 Chakra Control, 52 Concentration, 50 Wisdom. Training: 7 stages. Stage I: Chakra Control DC 65, Description of stage. Stage II: Wisdom DC 60, Description of stage. Stage III: Concentration DC 62, Description of stage. Stage IV: Chakra Control DC 67, Description of stage. Stage V: Wisdom DC 62, Description of stage. Stage VI: Concentration DC 64, Description of stage. Stage VII: [Skill/Stat] DC X, Description of stage. Special: Once the emotions are taken away, even the caster is vulnerable to attack. There has yet to be found any kind of cure for this technique. Owner: Kanjosuru Clan
rofl AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! rofl This, this is what kills me xd . Cheers. cheese_whine Okay. I can safely say that this jutsu will not, ever, get my approval. You could rework it till it shone like a new dime and it STILL wouldn't get my +1. It's WORSE than an instant death move. It is literally WORSE, than an instant death move. I did not think it was possible...but I have been proven wrong. I would tip my hat if I were not bare headed. *cough* neutral So no man I don't think this last one is gonna happen. xd The only way I would allow it is if you made it only usable on people who had 0 MHP. (were essentially already dead.)
Besides that? I cannot possibly say heck no enough times to this last one.
Rest are workable, base idea is freakin awesome, stats are fine, love the history. Jutsu are the only real problem with this and nothing that can't be easily solved. wink Seriously though. This last jutsu? burning_eyes lol There is NO way.
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 1:56 am
^^ What he said doubles for me. Change the damage, make set levels, ditch the last one.
And furthermore, make the training fit the levels. You essentially made somebody train for a C rank jutsu in order to become a god. I could use this with Masa's build and kill most people up to level 20.
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