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Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 3:16 am
Generally, you want to have the same number of virtues as you do flaws. I suggest that if you have four flaws, you add on another virtue to event it out as well? It also helps to give people a better grip on the character!
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Posted: Fri Jun 25, 2010 5:11 am
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Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2010 3:49 pm
With the actual shop, what will happen to my Sailor ? I don't know. I can't rp her because no stamp, and I don't have the civilian form too....... I don't want to bother anyone, just if someone can give me a little answer. redface
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Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 5:35 pm
For Ariel's 'smart' virtue, she's smart in too many ways and this makes her a bit of an overpowered character. D: Focus on ONE way that she can be smart and make that into a virtue -- think of it this way, if you have a character who's universally smart, then that makes it really difficult for others to get the spotlight once in a while since Ariel will always be able to solve any problem without needing help.
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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 8:50 am
ok I editted a little, I hope it is ok.
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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 10:25 am
So, you're saying she's mathematically / analytically smart? That would make a lot of sense, since her straightforwardness makes her out to not be very people smart -- like, she's always thinking in "logic mode" and not how something might emotionally effect other people. ^^ Just asking for clarification ~
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Posted: Tue Sep 21, 2010 2:35 pm
yeh I wanted it this way ^^ analytically smart, but sometimes it is hard for me to explain it in English XD like I have the image in my mind but in French.....
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Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:12 pm
Lora, pourrai-tu m'envoyer un PM avec ton idée de base, et je vais essayer de t'aider à la traduire correctement, si tu crois avoir besoin ? Je suis du Québec, et non pas de la France, mais je crois que l'on peux se comprendre quand-même ! Je serai ravie de pouvoir t'aider. smile
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 6:16 pm
Ok I added some little details. I hope it is ok now. Tell me if something is missing again.
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 6:41 pm
I think you should bring down her starter attack to only 3 uses -- 20 is far too much! Otherwise, I really love what you did with them, that's a really cool way to use her power sphere. And beyond that...  Ariel's turned out to be a pretty neat character! XD I'm really liking how she wants to / enjoys being a social person, but her personal weaknesses make it hard for her to be one.
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 7:01 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2010 10:16 am
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