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 Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 7:55 pm
Answered the questions about her dragonfly hunting hobby, she's out to catch them all but hasn't had much on an opportunity to travel. She hopes to one day go into the field of science.
Moved her nerdy trait to hobbies and added intelligence into her virtues(please let me know if that's a little overused and I'll change it).
Flight of Dragonflies lasts up to a minute or until she hits something. Changed Swarm of the Dragonflies so that it just boosts an ally rather than giving her another physical boost. As for Dance of the Dragonflies I would say that the dragonflies are about normal sized if not a little bit smaller than a normal dragonfly. I lowered the time limit to 1-2 minutes but kept the amount of dragonflies, if any of you think that there are still too many I can lower the amount ^^.
Thank you so much for all the help.
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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 8:40 pm
Intelligence is a fine virtue to have, but instead of describing her general smartness you should focus how she's uniquely intelligent, e.g. what she's smart at and what that makes her good at. <3
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 12:29 am
Specified what she specializes in, so hopefully that helps? If not I'll try again ^^
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Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2010 8:03 am
Alright, just to clarify, you're saying her intelligence comes from being resourceful with the knowledge she has? o: If that's the case, make that the main focus of that virtue.
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 6:29 pm
Fixed her intelligence virtue so it's more clear! (I hope XD)
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 4:54 pm
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