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 Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 6:31 pm
"Blah, blah blah! Fine!" Mint chan said, sticking out her toung, her outfit was normal to any girls....baggy black pants, 'street' shoes and a baggy mecca shirt from thier last concert. "Better?!?!" She said, bored with a original outfit of a tomboy.
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Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 8:16 pm
 Zane Hajime "Listen to what your taught..." ____________________________________________________
Looking down at Kira he gave him a piece of paper and pen. "I want you to write down what you see in this room. Describe the room, it is a typical academy classroom. Sometimes during the RP you are required, especially if someone enters YOUR room or office, to describe what others are seeing or where they are entering. I want you to do that for me..." Zane commanded him.
After finishing with Kira he loooked over at Tosatsu and sighed, simply out of annoyance that the boy just couldn't really sit still. "Boy, you've got a lot to learn, now if you don't want to receive the same beating I just gave him..." he said as he too placed a piece of paper and pencil. "I want you to write down what you think makes a good rper..."
That's when he heard several blah blah blahs...his brow twitching rather profusely. Looking back at the girl, he realized that she finally had some clothes on. "Well...that's a bit better, but there is still plenty of room for improvement!" Zane exclaimed as he pointed to the window. "Go to the window and tell me what you see outside."
____________________________,,________________________ " ...or suffer the consequences! "
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Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 8:31 pm
Sosay looked up at Zane with fear in her eye's. This guy meant business and he wasn't going to be all happy-go-lucky about it. Closing her eye's, she sighed out, only to reopen them and stare directly into his. "If I were to watch you show up late sir, I'm pretty sure I'd be rather ticked at you." she paused to laugh quietly to herself. "I'm sure your ticked off at me, and hey I don't blame you. If I were in your shoes I would be too, having to come here and teach others better ways when you could be out somewhere else doing more important things." she finished, a grin appearing on her face. Sosay didn't find it hard to tell him what she thought after she got going, it seemed to just flow out of her mouth like a river overflowing. She tilted her head slightly as some other shinobi's entered, taking mental notes on their looks and the way they acted.
{OcC: Hey Zane... your kind of scary here compared to VR... Your making your other character look nice. =P}
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Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 8:45 pm
Tosatsu stared at the new occupants of his desk. It was time for an essay now? Or did the man want a book? Well, there was only one piece of paper, so he decided to do a fact sheet, with explanations on various points of course. On second thought, how about a book styled fact sheet the size of an essay? Tosatsu smiled, that was a wonderful idea. Picking up his pencil he went to work.
Role playing is the textual version of acting in a movie. You do various things, whatever comes to mind, in the hopes of entertaining those that are watching you. And have fun doing it of course. But, sadly, it is not as simple as that.
A good role player follows many rules, some being rules imposed by higher authorities, some self imposed. The most basic of these rules is to keep things realistic. That means not doing things that just can't be done, or as people like to call it, God Mod.
Beyond that comes attention to detail. A story can be told with quick three letter sentences, yes, but it does not show the deeper meaning. To truly become a good role player one must learn to express everything that happens around them. That doesn't mean going to extreme detail about every little thing. Too much detail is actually detrimental to RP, as it draws attention away from the story, and clogs things up. Establishing a good balance between detail and action is key.
Possibly the most important thing of all is literacy. One cannot enjoy what they cannot read. Spelling and grammar are things that have fallen by the wayside in our modern internet centric world, but in role play, there is nothing more important. A single word out of place can change the entire meaning of your sentence, and therefore your action. It could mean the difference between banishing someone, and giving them a delicious treat.
Kyoujin Tosatsu
Smiling Tosatsu set down his pencil and cleared his throat to let the teacher know he was done. If there was one thing he could do, it was write long paragraphs about something, and role play was one of his favorites for doing it.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 2:02 am
Three loud and fast hits on the door could be heard, at the other side of the door, there stood a young man, seemingly he was rushing. From last movements, his shorts which were in length under his knee, were still fluttering, they were a deep silver color, while the top that he was wearing, was thick, and a black color. His silver hair was spiky, and in a rather medium level. He was panting, yet it seemed that he was running all the way to there, he knew he was late for the RolePlaying Class. He didn't truly know what sent him there, maybe it was the instinct? Or did someone control him? Ignoring the thought, he waited for an answer, hoping that he was in the right classroom.
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Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 12:12 pm
Kira looked at the paper, and picked up the paper and pen. He began to write down what he saw in the classroom. The boy began to write, observing every aspect of the room.
The entrance of the room is a sliding door, which has been kicked off its hinges. When one walks in the door, they are at the top of a large staircase, about a seven steps are in the staircase. On each step, there is half a dozen wooden desks, three on each side of the room, which are made out of what seems to be oak. In between the sections where there are desks, are sections where there is just stairs, so one can walk down. The whole room is painted a very plain shade of tan.
At the bottom of the staircase, there is a large desk, made out of the same wood as the others. It forms a rough U shape, with a chair in the middle where the teacher would sit. Various documents are on the desk, as well as an apple, and a can containing various writing tools. Behind the desk is a large black board which fills up almost the whole wall. The blackboard has the words "Role-play" written on it in large, bold white script.
Kira finished, and handed his paper to the Teacher.
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Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:17 pm
Zane Hajime "Listen to what your taught..." ____________________________________________________
"EXACTLY!" Zane cried out, a vein appearing on his forehead from sheer anger. "And you know what I want you to do...RUN LAPS!" Zane told her as he pointed at the door. "I want you to run a single lap around the school on the outside. And if you don't do a good job describing your run around the school I'll keep making you do it until you get it right!" Zane scolded as he turned to the next shinobi. This was really starting to get tiresome.
Zane looked at the smiling Tosatsu, his brow twitching as he picked up his writing. "This has got to be the most pathetic thing I've ever seen, I should shove this piece of paper down your throat!" he told him as he took out his lunch. "But instead, I'm going to make you eat this tuna surprise that my mother made for me. The surprise...well...you'll be surprised when you eat it. Now eat it and describe its taste!" Zane commanded him.
He then looked at the newcomer, and didn't know what to make of him. "Alright maggot...go sit down at one of the chairs, any of the chairs. I hope you pick the roughest and most uncomfortable one to be honest with you but tell me what it feels like to sit down!" Zane said to Gohan.
"And YOU! KIRA!" Zane exclaimed as he turned back to the one who had just finished his description on the room. "I want you to go up to the blackboard and write "I can't write good" and tell me what is wrong with that sentence!" Zane commanded him as he pointed to the chalk on the board.
____________________________________________________ " ...or suffer the consequences! "
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Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:34 pm
Sosay sighed out. Really?! A lap around the school. He must be losing it, but she wasn't in the mood to argue with him, seeing how he sounded cranky himself. "What a grumpy person..." she muttered under her breath. Standing up, Sosay lazily walked to the door of the classroom, going through it and on out of the school. Standing on the front step, Sosay glanced up both sides. "Best get started if I plan to survive this..." she complained, pushing herself forward. At first she began out with a fast pace run, but while wearing a dress running it wasn't something you should do. Making it to the first corner of the school her pace showed no sign of weakness, keeping it up and no where's near out of breath. The sun felt nice against her body, a change for once. After a few more minutes of running, Sosay had successfully passed the second corner and was almost to the third. Now it was starting to get harder. She wasn't really active to begin with, so every part of her was starting to hurt. The muscles in her legs began to throb with minor pain. The heels of her feet were growing sore from running in inappropriate footwear. Finally she came upon the last corner, rounding it to see the front step up ahead. Her speed had slowed down incredibly. She was now is a slow jog, trying her hardest to push herself further. Beads of sweat were starting to roll down her face, dripping off the end of her nose. Reaching the front step, Sosay stood, her hands placed on her knees as her body screamed out with pain. The bright sun above hitting her back. She could feel her heart racing in her chest, it feeling like it could explode at any given second. Breathing hard, Sosay headed back to class, her thoughts blocked out from her heavy breathing. Reaching the classroom, Sosay stood there for a mere second, her eye's closed slightly. "How was that Zane?" she asked, hoping he didn't force the task upon her again.
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 5:37 am
Kira groaned. This guy was starting to really get annoying. He was pushing everybody to do stupid stuff, like eating tuna surprise. Kira wondered what it tasted like. Hopefully, the other student could describe it and he could find out. The boy got up from his seat, noticing that the burning pain in his back was gone. That was good news. He paced towards the blackboard, his feet making a noise when they feet the wooden floor that sounded like, thump, thump, thump the sound echoed throughout the classroom as the boy walked over to the blackboard. He wrote the sentence and the white board, and at first he could not find anything wrong with it. He looked at the sentence again, his expression totally blank. 'I can't write good'. Then the boy lit up, understanding what was wrong. He turned to Zane. "I can't write good, is improper grammar. One would use the sentence 'I can't write well,' instead. He looked at his teacher's face. Hopefully that answer would be enough to satisfy his devilish appetite for detail for a while.
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 9:54 am
Tosatsu glared at the teacher, so he didn't like the paper huh? Reaching into his backpack he pulled out a leather bound journal that he kept most of his writings in and slammed it down on the desk. "If you don't like the paper, try the journal." He growled, slightly offended that the man was so callous about his writing. You can only write the same thing just so many times before it becomes old.
"And there is no way I'm eating that hunk of plaster!" He exclaimed, grabbing the dish and pulling out the "Surprise". knocking the supposed tuna against his desk a couple times he listened to the hollow thud of plaster against wood. Did the man seriously expect him to eat this?
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 10:01 am
"Scenery description? You spoke my language!" Mint chan said, walking over the window, opening and resting on it to look out to the scenery. There it was alright....beautiful snow-covered tops on mountains all around them, bright blue sky witht he sun in mid-day rise with no cloud in sight! The trees outside were in full-bloom, must be cherry blossom trees the most beautiful kind. The battle grounds next door of course making some noise at noon but oh well. Another battle grounds on the other side of the school builden but not in view right now. The gold oranments on her head shimmered in the sunlight as she turned to Zane seeing if she did ok.
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 10:16 am
Gohan looked at the Teacher with a boring look, showing his expression in a perfect manner, yet he was bored, at the same time he wasn't listening to the teacher with interest really. The only part of sentence that he took near to heart was the offensive part. Though he didn't show it in any facial expression. "Maggot? You're the maggot, idiot." he mumbled as he walked past the teacher, and towards one of the chairs. As he sat down, he looked at the ceiling, wanting to describe the feeling to the teacher. Yet it was pretty good in that state, his muscles felt like stopping right now, and they didn't hurt anymore. Even though it wasn't a perfect chair, because of it's size, he still enjoyed staying there. That was until, the side-effects started, it's been a short time since he started running, but still, the fatigue was activated on his feet. Since they weren't active for some minutes, he took a deep breath and lied back, his whole body was enjoying it, except the feet, which were hurting really bad right now. He looked at the teacher and raised an eyebrow. "Okay, there it is. Do you want me to write it on the board? Duh." he sighed.
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 5:38 pm
Zane Hajime Zane Hajime "Listen to what your taught..." ____________________________________________________
Zane was about to say something, when suddenly a loud noise echoed through the hallways outside the door. "Darn it...what is it now!?" he scowled as he stepped outside, seeing the source of the racket...actually there were five different sources of noise. "HEY WOULD YOU KEEP IT DOWN! I'M TRYING TO TEACH A CLASS HERE! I'M ABOUT TO SLIT EVERYONE OF YOU ALL'S THROATS!" he threatened as he looked back into the classroom. "HEY ALL OF YOU...STEP OUTSIDE AND DESCRIBE THE NOISE THAT YOU HEAR!" Zane commanded them to. Not only was one of his biggest pet peeves was the fact that people wrote good instead of well, but the fact that his class keeps getting interupted.
(Five noises for the five students, describe a single noise you're hearing)
____________________________________________________ " ...or suffer the consequences! "
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 5:46 pm
Standing up straight, Sosay tilted her head to hear the noises. One noise stood out from all the others. It sounded like someone was cooking. Straining to hear more Sosay could hear the soft sound of a knife hitting a cutting board. It sounded dull and continuous. The constant chu-chu-chu of the knife making contact with the board was enough to drive a person mad, if listened to long enough. Sosay placed her hands over her sensitive ears. "If they don't stop that cutting I swear they'll wish they never started!" she mumbled to herself, keeping her voice low and cold sounding.
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Posted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:30 am
Gohan watched as loud sounds could be heard all over. "He's talking big with us, while he's not able to stop a sound out there, how idiotic." he thought about the teacher's personality, he hated these people. The sound made him curious about what was happening outside the classroom, as the teacher opened the door and yelled at someone, he raised an eyebrow as the teacher couldn't do anything at all. That made him even more curious, thinking that there was a crowd outside and something was happening for real, as permission to leave the classroom was given, even if only for some steps, Gohan walked out for a moment. What caught his ears was a high pitched sound, it would be something technological of course. It was repeating for minutes and yet it didn't seem like it was about to end. That sound that made his ears numb, was shaking the liquid in his head. For a moment his body shivered, as he walked back to his chair, and sat down.
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