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 Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 3:08 pm
CWnerd12 Demoness Crystallia Can we not have sex in it? Please. Can it also just end by the first book with Edward killing Bella...? What's wrong with sex? XD I love writing sex! It's not appropriate...?
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 3:09 pm
Emperor Angelo XXV Demoness Crystallia Oh yeah, please tell me you're doing research on everything... As a matter of fact, I would do a lot of research, therefore eliminating among other things, Renesmee. Either that, or show in the remade version that it is out of some magical process that Renesmee came into the world. EDIT: Of course, since Edward would fail, then Renesmee would not come into the world in the first place. Take your pick. 
And placing Brazil correctly.
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 3:11 pm
If you have the time, means, and talent, go for it. I entertained the idea for a while, but I'm too lazy. XD
The premise of the books isn't HORRIBLE. With some creativity and professional writing, it could become respectably entertaining. c:
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 4:48 pm
Well, okay here's a run-down of the Cullen family, done Halley-style:
Carlisle: Keeping him in the same time frame of when he was "made" ie during the Reformation, could possibly keep him as the son of an Anglican minister, but that might make him a bit..... too moral. Mine is still a doctor because in those days blood-letting was the main form of medicine. And like I said, he stays a doctor because it's a great way to get blood. and he likes licking bits of liver off his latex gloves. or off the operating room floor - family dinner! He's creepy and bisexual and chooses his "companions" based on their beauty- hence the attractiveness of vampires, they're very selectively made. Most of the time.
Edward: Not the first vampire Carlisle made like in the book (my version that was Rosalie, see further down). Whereas all the rest of his "family" have all these epic badass stories behind being "made" his is boring, and the same as in the book, although I think I'm gonna make it happen earlier, like in the 1870s, 1880s. He and his mother were slowly dying of an infectious diesease, and his mother begged Carlisle, their doctor, to do whatever possible to save her son. Who happened to be hot, hence he got turned. He's kind of an a*****e, and this time Bella realizes it and is kind of a b***h back to him. but he's hot. actually haven't thogut as much about him as I have about the others.
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 5:10 pm
Bisexual...?
Well as long as there's no male/male sex scenes...
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 5:46 pm
Demoness Crystallia Bisexual...? Well as long as there's no male/male sex scenes... uhm......... .............. .............. ........................ oops.
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 9:02 pm
CWnerd12 Demoness Crystallia Bisexual...? Well as long as there's no male/male sex scenes... uhm......... .............. .............. ........................ oops. You did didn't you.
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 10:56 pm
I've entertained the idea before, but I'm reluctant to expend my energy on that trash when I could be putting it to better use. -cleans his fingernails-  @CW: that sounds a lot like the sort of man I've always suspected Carlisle really was, underneath his "good doctor" act. There should totally be a scene where Carlisle touches Edward's a** and an awkward moment ensues because Bella's in the room.
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Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 9:22 am
Demoness Crystallia CWnerd12 Demoness Crystallia Bisexual...? Well as long as there's no male/male sex scenes... uhm......... .............. .............. ........................ oops. You did didn't you. haha, I'm thinking that the relationship would only be implied. It would be clear that Edward was chosen by Carlisle only for his beauty and that Carlisle appreciates physical beauty more than any normal person should.
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Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 4:07 pm
Sooooo I need to figure out the whole sunlight/daytime thing. I mean. A doctor would have to go out in the day without bursting into flames. I'm probably going to just make it direct sunlight and have something to do with age and strength of the vampire. Anyway keep the whole living in the pacific northwest because it's so damn cloudy. what are your opinions?
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 8:23 am
CWnerd12 Sooooo I need to figure out the whole sunlight/daytime thing. I mean. A doctor would have to go out in the day without bursting into flames. I'm probably going to just make it direct sunlight and have something to do with age and strength of the vampire. Anyway keep the whole living in the pacific northwest because it's so damn cloudy. what are your opinions? You know the whole sunlight thing is a myth, right? (As in, created by Hollywood)
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 11:41 am
Rosiana Ramoria CWnerd12 Sooooo I need to figure out the whole sunlight/daytime thing. I mean. A doctor would have to go out in the day without bursting into flames. I'm probably going to just make it direct sunlight and have something to do with age and strength of the vampire. Anyway keep the whole living in the pacific northwest because it's so damn cloudy. what are your opinions? You know the whole sunlight thing is a myth, right? (As in, created by Hollywood) Srsly? huh. well, I still think I'll get ripped to shreds by most people here if I have them be 100% sunlight compatable, plus I'm starting to develop some plot points around sunlight so *shrugs*
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 1:38 pm
I've heard of that too.
I have my vampires be pretty much not affected by sunlight... except for long exposures. I even explain it in my story as to why they can go out in the sun; it's a lie, a misconception, etc.
Just don't make them sparkle, and you'll be fine.
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 1:57 pm
CWnerd12 Sooooo I need to figure out the whole sunlight/daytime thing. I mean. A doctor would have to go out in the day without bursting into flames. I'm probably going to just make it direct sunlight and have something to do with age and strength of the vampire. Anyway keep the whole living in the pacific northwest because it's so damn cloudy. what are your opinions?
He could always tell them he's one of those people who are allergic to the sun so he bundles up a bit more and carries a parasol or something.
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 3:01 pm
Demoness Crystallia I've heard of that too. I have my vampires be pretty much not affected by sunlight... except for long exposures. I even explain it in my story as to why they can go out in the sun; it's a lie, a misconception, etc. Just don't make them sparkle, and you'll be fine. yeah no Vampire should ever sparkle.
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