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 Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 7:13 pm
Veldrin the Shadow he already did... Mr Lapus Okay, basic spells are 1st to 3rd level. The trainee spells are what're called cantrips, and are essentially 0th level. Looks like we've just got a minor miscommunication. An example cantrip is something like Dust, they're essentially household spells for cleaning, warming food, little card tricks. Useful and practical, but not damage-causing or person-affecting (or rather they can be, but you have to use imagination, I've seen tie used on boot ribbons to great effect). Yeah, I forgot. When I had finish writing my post. I look aback to realize he had answered it, but I had to get off. So I didn't get a chance to change it. Thank you, for trying to head off a repeat of information.
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 4:32 pm
I'm still sure there is something I need to correct, but unsure of what. I know I made mistake, so please come and slice up my work. I know also that my grammar could be improved.
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 5:15 pm
Okay, I'm just being nit-picky now, but seeing the improvement you've made I've got very few complaints, I just hate to see it spoiled even a little by some minor things.
Point 1: Sewing is with cloth, sowing is with seeds and a field.
Point 2: Mundane tasks rather than miniscule, though both make sense, miniscule is a bit of a stretch and suggests easy tasks rather than dull and common place.
Point 3: If you can, a quick sentence describing the spells, or at least the most common ones, is useful.
Finally - this is nothing to do with your profile but some information you might find useful. You may already know it, in which case ignore this. Mages cast magic differently from sorcerers. Instead of simply having a (very limited) selection of spells they can cast at will, they memorize the spells they need each morning by reading them from their spellbook. Once they have cast a spell, its gone.
You can memorize the same spell more than once, but it requires more planning and intelligence to select your spells for the day than it does as just a little sorcerer.
Either way though, you've got my approval.
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 5:23 pm
Arg...I forget to change that word. Thanks for pointing it out. I'll change them both.
I'll go back and add the sentence for the spells.
I'll make sure that I add the helpful note to my roleplay notes. That way I won't forget.
I'm make the changes and thank you.
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 6:07 pm
You have mine as well.
Approved
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 6:22 pm
Yeah! Now, as always, where to start?
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