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i plan on entering the first chapter because that's the best chapter i have so , far. biggrin

hello here's my entry. this is the first chapter and i know it's short but i plan on expanding it. thank you.

chapter 1: The Almost Queen


Sesekana is one of the 21 dathers of the elfin king. This world is going into a war and sesekana's father is needed on the battle field. Since Sesekana is the oldest she is to be crowned queen....tonight said the wise elder.


Later that night Sesekana stood on the announcement rock. Which towered over the elfins in the beautiful elfin forest.acient trees hung over the rock as if they were put there by magic- they probably were? The wise elder tatasen floated up the rock and stood beside sesekana. He raised his hand and all talking stopped. Beads of sweat rolled down her beautiful face.

We are gathered here tonight in the sight of the eight moons to crown this princess queen tatasen said in a voice that was both brave and heroic but also friendly and loving. sesekana looked even more neverous. Tatasen didn't seem to notice and continued on. Please oh mighty god of the eight moons, this girl live a long and wonderful life as our queen.

Than there was the crown. A beautiful thing really. From its leaves made from rare tetan leaves. Which only grow every ten years, it was very rare to find such leaves. The crown floated in mind air and tetasen chanted some words in elfin language. It would sound like a froin language to any mortal but everyone seems to understand.


Seeking held her breath as the crown soared towards her head. It was all most there when..... 10 giant trolls climbed on to the rock!


The trolls were the ugliest thing they had ever seen and they were in shock that the trolls were here to begin with. Adamantly the army charged at the trolls. The army shoot arrows at the giant trolls. One of them turned its head as an arrow hit his leg. He grabbed an arrow and easily cracked it in two, than continued climbing.

tatasen was trying to get sesekana to jump but she wouldn't. She wiggled out of his grip and turned to a troll that had managed to get up on the rock. One of the trolls took the crown and swished it in his big ugly hand. She knew what had to be done and she took a step towards him. The trolls just stared but than grabbed her around the waist. Than jumped of the rock, the others followed. They walked towards the forest.

The elfins didn't move. They were stunned that their queen was so brave and did not even scream. The elfin army and all elfins watched in awe as their almost queen was being carried away.

Yay! We've got out first entry!

Not in the least! I'm not all that picky when it comes to length, so long as it's not over 20 pages in word I think it'll be fine. Just to give you a frame of reference, a page is about 500 words.

Don't worry, you have time! I'm probably going to extend this if I don't get at least 7 entries by the deadline.

Oh that's right, I remember you mentioning you were in the editing stage with it in the revising thread. How's that going?

Hope your workload lightens up then, if not for the contest then for your state of mind and health. School can be such an attention-whore. XD Good luck with everything!

Ah, I really want you get something in too. xd Which somehow reminds me, I feel like I should add more to the contest, like have an inspirational thing on one of the posts. Oh, and banners. I should figure out how to make those. ^^;