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 Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 12:00 am
(yes honestly that does make sense)
The boys looked over what corrections were on the bored "Actually I find that understandable why you made these corrections." Komari responded as Goran continued "The perfection in grammar and literature was never too much my strong suit I'm afraid but I learn as I go. Thank you for showing us our mistakes." he gave a small smile afterward.
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Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 10:32 am
 Soryuu KenjiNameless Village | Nature's Guard | GeninKenji very suddenly ran into the room, almost in a panic as he was short on breath, clearly having been running for a while as he charged into the room and looked around fro Haruko, attempting to make an excuse for himself quickly before he was attacked..."Oh thank goodness, Haruko, I'm so sorry to be late, but I was sparring with Ari and well.."
"Stop running Kenji! we didn't finish yet!" A young man charged into the room, completely ignoring the others in the room besides Kenji as he charged at him with a flurry of kicks and blows which kenji dodged and deflected in their entirety, seemingly with ease as he maneuvered himself around the young boy and grabbed him from behind, placing his hands around his waist and bending backwards as he smashed the young man down onto the ground in a reverse suplex. Righting himself quickly from the attack, he looked over at Haruko with an apologetic look on his face as he continued...
"I'm sorry...I keep beating him up, but he keeps coming at me, and I told him I had to come to class, but he just kept attacking me." The young man was surprisingly able to spring up from the attack, shaking his head as he got up woozily and then put on an angered face as he charged at Kenji once more..."What a cheap shot! Fight me like a man!" Kenji sighed deeply, his hands dropping in frustration and disappointment as he grew tired of the attacks. He admired the young man's tenacity, but part of fighting was knowing when to stop.
Dodging his attacks and maneuvering around the boy, Kenji grabbed a hold of hi clothes and threw him towards the door, sending him off balance as he spun around performing a spinning back kick to the boy's chest sending him flying out the doorway and crashing into the wall. Placing his hand on the hilt of his blade, Kenji performed a few quick hand seals of his own with his left hand and held his finger out towards the boy..."Rakurai!" As he finished his seals and said the word, a surge of electricity built up on his arm and then shot forward off of his fingertip in a one foot long bolt directly at the boy's chest, impacting harshly as it shocked his system and knocked him out cold.
Letting out a deep sigh, Kenji turned around and smiled to Haruko offering a final apology..."Sorry about that. This must be our new student... nice to meet you, I'm Kenji." Kenji held his hand out to greet the boy, still breathing somewhat heavily from all the action.
"Always to protect...never to harm."
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Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 1:03 pm
Haruko turned her attention to the door when she heard rampaging footsteps running towards the door and saw Kenji rushed in once again with a panic look on his face. 'Didn't something exactly like this just happen recently?' Just as she was about to speak, she heard him mention something about sparring with Ari and instantly stopped herself from yelling at his tardiness. Instead she let out a small tired sigh, 'Not again..' She then watched as Kenji once again defeated Ari with the same few manevers as last time. Seeing that the fight was finished, Haruko walked over to the door and look out to see a out cold Ari leaning against the wall. Shaking her head in disbelief, she slid the classroom door closed. "That boy never learns does he?" Haruko said to no one in particular.
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Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 3:59 pm
"More like 'students' to be precise" the boys replied to Kenji simultaneously "My name is Goran Akuto."He said as the boy bowed "And I am his younger brother, Komari Akuto" as Komari also bowed right after "A pleasure to meet your acquaintance." Goran and Komari rose back up again, finishing up their introduction to Kenji before looking to the door that Haruko had just closed.
(edited)
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Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 5:04 pm
{Sorry, maybe my post was a bit confusing but Ari, the boy Kenji was facing with is currently unconcious outside the classroom. If you read Cobra's post you'll see that he mentioned knocking him out the doorway. I just shut the door so that hopefully no one else will disterb the lesson without knocking on the door first.}
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Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 5:48 pm
(oh outside, i probably accidentally missed a line then, ill edit my post in a bit, dinner's ready)
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 5:39 pm
Soryuu KenjiNameless Village | Nature's Guard | Genin"No, he doesn't learn at all. This is the third time I've had to knock him out this week. Still, there's something to be said for his tenacity. But anyways, where are we?" Kenji looked at the board and realized that Haruko had already created several edits in the student's writing. "Well, it looks like you could use a second go at the RP response exercise.'
Kenji walked up to the board and began writing on it with another RP sample for the boy to answer:
Walking on your way to your first mission, you saw a man run past you quickly, bumping into you, but saying nothing as he continued to run down the street. thinking nothing of it, you continued walking until a lady came down the street waving her hands for help..."Help! Help! He stole my necklace! somebody stop him please!"
...stepping away from board, Kenji held out the piece of chalk to Goran and smiled, "Here you go, try this one..."
"Always to protect...never to harm."
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 5:46 pm
Turning around to face her students, Haruko gave them both a warm smile before walking over to sit on the edge of the desk facing the classroom. She was about to motioned for Goran and Komari to take a seat when she saw Kenji make his way over to one of the many chalkboards and write out another rp situation for them. "Hey Kenji-san, don't just stand there and watch, come take a look at their profiles and tell me what you think." She pointed to the two pieces of paper left on the side of the desk.
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 6:01 pm
Goran took the chalk and nodded his head before walking up to the board. Komari smirked as he watched "Good luck brother. You can do it this time." he called out.
Goran started reading what was written on the board. Before long, he had an idea of what to write. He took his arm with chalk in hand and started writing...
'After Goran had realized what that lady had called out, not a thought went through his mind that would keep him from turning around and catching the thief. The boy started to chase the man in between two buildings with a fence just ahead. After the thief had stopped at a dead end, a moment after he soon found himself wrapped in wires that Goran strung him with. "Alright, hand over the stolen necklace. Give it up!" he said to the man. Soon after the man dropped the necklace and he was soon free. "Now get out of here." He said with a short and firm tone of voice as he walked away, heading straight back to give the lady her necklace back.'
Goran then stepped away from the board thinking to himself how he hoped this was better than before.
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 6:10 pm
Soryuu KenjiNameless Village | Nature's Guard | Genin"Well then, yes ma'am!" Kenji said as he responded to Haruko's request. kenji walked over to the desk and read through the profiles... it was not everyday that two people submitted a profile as one, it showed a strange closeness between them. As he looked at the papers he tried to gain a sense of who these two people were and where they had come from. "Rather interesting, wouldn't you say Haruko?"
{{I'm not sure how I feel about you controlling two characters at once, because it gives you an almost unfair advantage in any fight to have two people fighting. it is fine however if you manage the fights one person at a time.}}
{{On the note of the weapons... the blade of pure energy has to require a lot of chakra to use and maintain, since a blade like that would be incredibly powerful. I would also ask for you to be careful in using it as it'd be broken if it could 'cut through anything' all the time without anyone having the ability to stop it.
...and with the staff, it doesn't triple his power. it can be durable, that's fine, but that's all it can be.}}
{{On the note of the characters, Komari is NOT able to control 4 elements. He can use 2 at the most. It would also be useful if you mentioned Goran's element as well. Also, if your characters are using jutsu, they need to be listed in your profile as well.}}
"Always to protect...never to harm."
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 6:21 pm
Haruko watched from her spot on the desk as Kenji read over the two profiles and wonder what he thought of them. 'I thought that the format was done really well but I'm not too sure about the information. I wonder what he thinks?' Hearing Kenji's question, Haruko gave him a small nod in response, "Yeah, but this wouldn't be the first time. I mean, lately we've been getting so many new and unique students that 'weird', 'strange', and 'interesting' are pretty much the new 'normal'."
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 6:25 pm
(okay then 1-it is okay for me to have 2 characters so long as if I can control their actions 1 at a time for ex. char1 post, enemy post, char2 post? 2-the sword is pure energy but can't literally break through 'anything' I forgot to mention that in the description so that was my bad XD. as for the staff how about that it gives any who uses it the ability to control all the elements? sorry if its still too much but these 2 character profiles almost to the dot came out of my movie idea, lol. 3-I will put up jutsu they can use, i forgotten all about that thank you for reminding me XD)
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 6:58 pm
Goran Akuto (okay then 1-it is okay for me to have 2 characters so long as if I can control their actions 1 at a time for ex. char1 post, enemy post, char2 post? 2-the sword is pure energy but can't literally break through 'anything' I forgot to mention that in the description so that was my bad XD. as for the staff how about that it gives any who uses it the ability to control all the elements? sorry if its still too much but these 2 character profiles almost to the dot came out of my movie idea, lol. 3-I will put up jutsu they can use, i forgotten all about that thank you for reminding me XD)
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 7:12 pm
(Okay then I'll just have Goran in the rp then cause I don't want to have to make too many changes for Komari. So ill start editing tomorrow morning)
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Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:47 pm
(hey sorry i havent been on in a while, my comp is fried and i need to get a new one, im using a friend's comp to be on for a moment. ill be back as soon as i get a new one)
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