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 Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 12:57 am
fact 1
we all sin but he is perfection
sin is infection we all fall into
but his forgiveness keeps us from the infection
fact 2
we're a little more than useless
more than weapons with our fists
more than everyone says we are
more than the everyday average par
fact 3
living is suffering
we can't deny
no matter what we will always cry
but we must hope to ease the pain for others
god made us for one another
fact 4
we want to accept him
we want to be more than men
but he is the savior
and we are the sin
so go into the light
killing the demons and cleansing the soul
before it takes its toll
i wrote this about our lives on earth and how we must come to god to rid ourselves of our imperfections
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 8:14 pm
Hey that's good, and all of it is true! 3nodding Thank you for posting it. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 1:04 pm
flyingemu27 Hey that's good, and all of it is true! 3nodding Thank you for posting it. biggrin thank you, i thought it wasn't very good at first, but it seems to work now that i look at it, your really good at it yourself
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 1:07 pm
looking down at the street
so dark and so bleak
no hope just dispair
then you feel something in the air
you know that he is there
always watching and waiting
protecting and creating
it might be dark but he is the light
so don't fight the night
its all alright
you want to get closer to him
you say come here
he stands clear
not budging he is constant
you say why won't you come to me
he says let your heart be
you realize hes not going away from you
but that your pushing away from him
then you walk up close to him
no matter what
he'll always let you back in
this is about how god is always there no matter what, and how you can distance your self from him, but he will never distance himself from you, and how he is always there for you and will never go to where you can't find him
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 6:28 pm
Man, I read that, and it really relates to my life, and I'm sure everyone elses. It's really good! Thank you. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2005 5:27 pm
if yall liked some of my others, then you'll probably like this one, it all leads up to the last line, which is the title to, i'm making that line my new slogan if you will, because while on my ski trip, i found even christians do alot of judging, and sometimes go to the wrong things, its similiar to WWJD, but more directed people who are like "your cooler than him, but not as cool as him", so here it is, it's short too, only about 10 lines
taking back all the sin
putting humanity in men
we go around with pride
so much love we hide
taking into consideration
we have lost our patience
we never find time to praise
but theres way to much to haze
we can fight the war
or try to find more
so take back all the lies
whats cool in gods eyes
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Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 6:51 pm
Wow you're stuffed full of poetry! sweatdrop But seriously, that's great. Thanks for posting...again! ...."What's cool in God's eyes". I think everyone needs to think about that at some point in their life. biggrin
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Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 8:45 pm
flyingemu27, you say so many good things about other peoples poetry, so heres something nice about yours, this line, no matter how bad i feel about it, is 100% true to me
"After all that you've done for me,
With Your mercy, love and grace,
I've hurt you countless times
At a surprising pace."
i wish i wasn't like that, but i am, and it make me feels good that i'm not alone in thinking that, and its just a great line
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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 2:31 pm
Ok, i'm way too lazy at the moment to think up a poem (and if i do it will be really really long) so i'm just gunna say:
Thank you God for everything you have done for me. I cant even begin to express my gratitude. biggrin
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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 7:04 pm
myescapeandahalf if yall liked some of my others, then you'll probably like this one, it all leads up to the last line, which is the title to, i'm making that line my new slogan if you will, because while on my ski trip, i found even christians do alot of judging, and sometimes go to the wrong things, its similiar to WWJD, but more directed people who are like "your cooler than him, but not as cool as him", so here it is, it's short too, only about 10 lines taking back all the sin putting humanity in men we go around with pride so much love we hide taking into consideration we have lost our patience we never find time to praise but theres way to much to haze we can fight the war or try to find more so take back all the lies whats cool in gods eyes i like the poem i wrote, "whats cool in god's eyes", but i think i could make it better, so remix time: First let me begin we must take back the sin to be human again now pride we try to hide when will the love start to mend what we'll always have because he first loved us so we love him but loves still a game a trust so taking into consideration when we lose the love we begin the hatred even using the tools of the trade eventually we all fade making our days grey so pull back the shadows and take back the lies and ask yourself whats cool in god's eyes please read the originial, and tell me which one you think is better and why
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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 9:09 pm
I definately like the second one better because it's a lot clearer, and it rhymes more too. Also, it has more truth I, and I'm sure most other people, can relate to. biggrin
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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 9:16 pm
myescapeandahalf flyingemu27, you say so many good things about other peoples poetry, so heres something nice about yours, this line, no matter how bad i feel about it, is 100% true to me "After all that you've done for me, With Your mercy, love and grace, I've hurt you countless times At a surprising pace." i wish i wasn't like that, but i am, and it make me feels good that i'm not alone in thinking that, and its just a great line Thank you! Yeah, no matter how hard I try, I always seem to hurt God somehow and fall back down to where I started. That's sin, and that's life. Nobody can say that they have not sinned, cause everyone has. I'm sure it relates to the whole world.....which is really sad, but what's beautiful is people trying to stop sinning, trying to stop hurting God because they realize that He only loves them, and they want to love Him back. biggrin
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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 9:17 pm
Nyx_Kyoujin Ok, i'm way too lazy at the moment to think up a poem (and if i do it will be really really long) so i'm just gunna say: Thank you God for everything you have done for me. I cant even begin to express my gratitude. biggrin And it totally works! Thank you for making that for God, even if it was a result of being lazy. biggrin
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Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 3:08 pm
If anyobody wants to post some lyrics to a song they find inspirational or of a poem, go ahead! And thank you all for writing in the name of our Lord! biggrin
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