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 Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 9:08 pm
oooo: I elaborated more on Viv's virtues and flaws, changed the first challenge a bit, and added another "line" for her. I'm thinking of making that her official challenge but would love some feedback.
What does everyone think :
1. Life only gets to be lollipops and sprinkles for me, Cupcake. Get used to it.
Or...
2. Come taste my Darkness, Sugar.
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Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 1:34 am
I decided both works for me. So both it will be.
I'm going to go ahead and see if I can't get this stamped. TRYING NEVER HURT NO ONE.
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Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:12 am
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 8:54 am
Here we go!
I'd like to see reasons why Vivi has her flaws and virtues. She seems like a character that is jealous of the fact that people have more than her and wants to gain more and more to rise up in the social hierarchy. It feels like she knows there are people that have more around her and using what she can and make, tries to take some of that power and influence from others. To me, it is like she wants to get the upper hand of the rich and powerful since she cannot gain it by getting rich. If she is self aware of her station, how does she feel about it? Does she hate that she isn't as rich at the other girls? When someone takes something from her and she throughs a fit, is it because she doesn't like to have less? Does she think hard work is for suckers? Does she want to be one of these girls and kids herself that she is or does she know that she can never really be one of them?
Is this the reason why she is in the Negaverse? Following what someone told me, why would Charonite want her instead of just killing her on the spot? Does she want to kill the girls that get in her way to rising up in status? Does she want power or better yet, want to steal to gain the money she needs to buy the fancy things she wants? What does Vivi bring to the Negaverse table to be worth making into a Lieutenant?
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 1:23 am
I will be updating this A LOT now that I've had time to really think about what I want and take in all of the crits she's gotten.
Thanks, everyone, for those. Sorry this has taken so long.
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Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2010 6:58 pm
Bump bump bump bump bump.
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Posted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 7:18 pm
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